The man with no head

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Juan Ignacio

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Word count: 259

Choice count: 7

Section count: 4

Image count: 0

Error count: 13

Field Related Analysis

Food and catering : 10 matches

(bar, chopped, dinner, eating, kitchen, night)

Dance : 8 matches

(beats, check, out, run, running, shadow, through)

Education : 7 matches

(choice, down, head)

Target Structure: (0 matches)

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The man with no head

The beginning.

At a lonely village at the south of Washington lived Pepe he doesn't have problems wuth anybody. He lived at a house which wasn't small however it was not huge. On day which he thought it would be very regular, he hear how a wood plank creak. Pepe thought somebody enter his house, so he go to check the kitchen.

Choice 1 : An enormous man with a knife appears.

Choice 2 : There was nobady a the kitchen.

An enormous man with a knife appears.

A man appears, the fear beats you and you go out the home. As far as you leave the home, you understand that was a special night, you were alone. Anyone of the villagers were there, it seems that there were all murder.

Choice 1 : Go to the barber

Choice 2 : Go to the hospital

There was nobady a the kitchen.

You check the kitchen, but you didn't find anything. While you are thinking that you should go to sleep, but you see a shadow of a man eating dinner at the living room. You decide to run to the village trying to find someone that could help you. After a minutes, you realise that you are alone.

Choice 1 : Go to the bar

Choice 2 : Your last night.

Your last night.

You started running through the village and in the blink of an eye, they chopped down your head. You are going to be know as the man with no head.

Choice 1 : Reset