Mr hyde alternative final

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Word count: 275

Choice count: 10

Section count: 7

Image count: 5

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis

Education : 9 matches

(choice, don)

Police-Technology : 6 matches

(police)

Web development : 6 matches

(catch, ignore, reset)

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Mr hyde alternative final

A little girl.

You are walking, alone, in the street until you see a tiny, short and fat man, stepping over a little girl. That surprises you, What you should do?

Choice 1 : Run away

Choice 2 : Help the girl

You ran away.

He saw you, he chases you and kills you.

Choice 1 : Reset

You helped the girl.

You can't stand the girl being hurt. You go and confront the man. The man looks scared that you saw him, so he offers you a deal: if he gives you money, you won't tell anybody, but if you tell somebody, he will find you and kill you.

Choice 1 : Accept

Choice 2 : Say no

You accepted.

He gives you the money, but it was monopoly money, so you tell the police, but they don't believe you,so you team up with the man and kill the police. :(.

Choice 1 : Reset

You said no.

You don't accept the money, so you start running with the girl to a police station, you tell them what happened and leaved the girl there. When you are leaving the police station to go back home, you feel like someone is watching you, but you ignore it. When you arrive home, your door is broken.

Choice 1 : You enter

Choice 2 : Go back to the police station.

You entered.

The man is waiting you inside, you die :(.

Choice 1 : Reset

You went back to the police station.

You tell everything to the police and catch the man, you also adopt the girl since it was an orphan.

Choice 1 : Reset