The path of life.

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Jeremi Monsanto

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Word count: 1112

Choice count: 30

Section count: 21

Image count: 19

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis

Education : 67 matches

(choice, college, exam, failed, first, goal, goals, high school, jerome, motivation, options, sabbatical, school, semester, student, technology)

Dance : 17 matches

(around the world, back, complete, couple, out, step, together, tour, traveling)

Police-Technology : 16 matches

(corruption, patrol, police, police officer, policeman, prison)

Target Structure: (3 matches)

retirement (2 matches)

wage (1 match)

corruption (1 match)

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The path of life.

The beginning.

After many years in high school, I was officially done and needed to think about my career. What did I want to do in life? This was my question because I haven't thought about this while studying. I had a lot of choices but not many was really interesting. It was ether going on a sabbatical year and travel around the world or chose the Police Technology career.

Choice 1 : Wonders of earth.

Choice 2 : College era.

Graduation pic

Wonders of earth.

If I made this choice, I needed to consider a lot of things and problems. If I wanted to go I needed to gather up money for expensive that I needed like cheap hotel, food, etc. But I had a steady job, so I could work multiples hours to gather up money and use it to travel all around Europe. With this choice I could create memories, but I also needed a future workplace with a good salary.

Choice 1 : Memories.

Choice 2 : College era.

Plane

Memories.

I decided to go. I went alone and traveled around the world. I lost all of my friends because they went to school, and I lost all my motivation to go back to school. I am staying at my minimum wage job because the traveling was expensive, and I was broke. Start again.

Choice 1 : The beginning.

pictures

College era.

Police Technology is a big program, and it's a very hard one. I have a lot of travailing to do to attend school. I was losing motivation and was getting tired from all the work. I had two options when the fist year was done. Ether I left the program, or I move closer and keep going in this direction.

Choice 1 : Give up.

Choice 2 : The continuation.

class

Give up.

Start again.

Choice 1 : College era.

The continuation.

After tempting to give up, my cousin that was a police officer made me want to become just like him. I wanted to help the society like him. I move to Montreal, so I could be closer to the school but since it's Montreal there is a lot of distraction. One night my friends wanted to go to a bar and get drunk, but the next morning I had the biggest exam that could make me succeed or failed my semester.

Choice 1 : You have one life!

Choice 2 : The good student.

You have one life!

I went out and got too drunk. I miss my exam the next morning because I didn't hear the alarm, and I couldn't retake the exam. So, I failed my semester. Start again.

Choice 1 : The continuation.

party

The good student.

I stayed at home and studied for the big exam. I passed my exam, and now I have one last step finding a job as an official police officer. I had tree choices. One in Montreal, one in Laval, and one in St-Jerome.

Choice 1 : Laval.

Choice 2 : St-Jerome.

Choice 3 : Montreal.

Laval.

On my first day of work in Laval I came across a shootout and died of a bullet to my chest. Start again.

Choice 1 : The good student.

St-Jerome.

It’s your ex’s dad and dined like me very much, so I didn’t make it as a policeman. Start again.

Choice 1 : The good student.

Montreal.

I made it after a couple of years in work I succeed to help society and every kind. My coworkers were very nice to me. There was this one girl called Ariane, who I like very much, but she was a distraction in my workplace. I needed to decide. It was ether her or a new path of career as an inspector.

Choice 1 : The love of my life.

Choice 2 : Closer to my goal.

The love of my life.

I went with Ariane in a couple of dates, and we got together. After a while we had a kid, and later on we got another one. My career as an inspector was over. Start again.

Choice 1 : Montreal.

Closer to my goal.

We stayed as friend, and I proceed towards my goal. I became the inspector of drugs in Montreal. I received plenty of cases. One of the cases I received was about the Mafias Italiens. They offer my two million dollars to stop my cases, and to leave them alone.

Choice 1 : That’s a big amount of money.

Choice 2 : That’s not part of my values.

That’s a big amount of money.

I accept the money from the Mafia, and I lost my job when my boss found out, and I end up in prison for corruption. Start again.

Choice 1 : Closer to my goal.

$$$

That’s not part of my values.

I refused the money. I made the news that day because I made the biggest seizure of drogue in Montreal from the past twenty years. I succeed to stop the biggest cartel for a while and got promotion for my good works and honesty. But now I’m getting old and was about to take my retirement in five years. My boss wanted me to be an office policeman, but I wanted to stay in the street.

Choice 1 : Stay in the street as a patrol officer.

Choice 2 : Be an office policeman.

Stay in the street as a patrol officer.

For my last five years it was time to take my retirement, and I was ready to travel around the world. At the same time Ariane was taking hers too. I wanted to travel the world with her if not I was going to be alone.

Choice 1 : Ask her.

Choice 2 : Chicken out.

Ask her.

I ask her to go with me, and she agreed. We fell in love, and had a great time. My life was complete. The end.

Choice 1 : Memories.

Chicken out.

I went to Italy alone and they recognized me. They kidnapped me and killed me for my work that was done in Montreal. Start again.

Choice 1 : Stay in the street as a patrol officer.

Memories.

We made the world tour together and created a lot of memories. We got married in a lot of places and had a great time.

Choice 1 : The end.

The end.

I have not much longer to live but my life is now complete. I have achieved my goals.

Write a choice here.

Be an office policeman.

It was way too bored, and I died of that. Start again.

Choice 1 : Stay in the street as a patrol officer.