It's all about the choices you make!

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Word count: 279

Choice count: 7

Section count: 5

Image count: 5

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis

Education : 25 matches

(campus, choice, college, courses, failed, first, high school, law school, management, school, semester, skills, social)

Law : 10 matches

(arrested, attorney, bankruptcy, corruption, defendant, law, lawsuit, parent, parties, reputation)

Sociology : 5 matches

(school, social science, wants)

Target Structure: (4 matches)

cursory (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

time management (1 match)

corruption (1 match)

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It's all about the choices you make!

The starting point.

You just finished high school at Calixa-Lavallée. Now it's time for you to make a choice. Are you going to college or do you want to make money now?

Choice 1 : Go to college

Choice 2 : Get a job because you want money now

Graduation's day

College.

You applied and got accepted at Ahuntsic College in Social Science because you had straight A's in high school. During the first semester, you did a cursory job on the assignments because you lived too far, and it affected your time management skills.

Choice 1 : Stay with your parents

Choice 2 : Live on the Campus

ahuntsic

Dead end job.

You started working at Macdonald's. One day, you are going to wake up and realise that you wasted 30 years of your life in a dead end job, and you're going to retire broke.

Choice 1 : Try again

macdonald

Stay with your parents.

You chose to live in your parent's basement. After you failed all of your courses, you decided to scam people. A few months later, you got arrested for corruption, and you end up in jail. Who wants that?

Choice 1 : try it again

arrested

life at the campus.

You decided to live on the campus. When everyone goes to parties, you stay inside to study.Two years later, you passed all of your courses. You went to law school after, and became an attorney.You have your own firm. While you mostly work with young defendant, you also help businesses with lawsuit and bankruptcy. You have the reputation to never lose a trial. Congratulations, you have succeeded your life!

Choice 1 : The starting point.

lawyer