Nellie's Faith is in Your Hands.

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Neylie Vilme

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Word count: 1772

Choice count: 37

Section count: 26

Image count: 26

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis

Education : 83 matches

(adult, choice, class, classmate, college, compensation, credit, diploma, don, education, faith, grades, graduate, intervention, learn, management, options, report, social, university)

Archaeology : 81 matches

(bit, class, comes, environment, group, her, here, industry, keep, kick, lead, period, re, section, study, terrace, text)

Dance : 43 matches

(back, cut, face, kick, lead, out, show, social, spot, through, turn)

Target Structure: (18 matches)

compensation (1 match)

cursory (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

dread (1 match)

foot in the door (1 match)

hr (1 match)

income (4 matches)

learn the ropes (1 match)

overwhelming (2 matches)

perpetrator (1 match)

pull off (2 matches)

put aside (1 match)

sexual harassment (4 matches)

straight a's (3 matches)

time management (2 matches)

vacant positions (1 match)

bribe (3 matches)

assets (1 match)

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Nellie's Faith is in Your Hands.

Graduating from Ahuntsic College in Social Studies.

After all of her hard work, it has happened. Nellie has finally graduated. Now, two options are ahead of her. She can study psycho-education at University of Montreal, or, she can try to find a job in intervention right away.She will get her foot in the door regardless of her decision.

Choice 1 : Study Psycho-education at University of Montreal

Choice 2 : Try to find a job in intervention right away.

A young successful black woman at her graduation

Study Psycho-education at University of Montreal.

Now that Nellie is in University, she has the option to either put aside her social life in order pull off straight A's through hard work and a lot of studying, or, put aside her grades and focus meeting people.

Choice 1 : Put social life aside

Choice 2 : Put grades aside

University of Montreal

Try to find a job in intervention right away.

Nellie has applied for many job offers, two of them have gotten back to her. One is kind of a dead-end job, she would work as a receptionist at a very renowned hotel chain. It pays well, but there aren't really any opportunities to learn the ropes of the industry. The other job doesn't pay as well, but it is way more fulfilling. She would work as a delinquency prevention social worker, meaning she would help empower teens who are exposed to a lot of violence.

Choice 1 : Work as a receptionist

Choice 2 : Work as a delinquency prevention social worker

Job Hunting

Put social life aside.

Nellie has completely immersed herself in her studies, but she's still having some difficulties in class. She cannot find a classmate to help her understand, because she's completely alienated herself from the rest of the group. She can try to make new friends, in order to receive some help, or she can keep the same strategy.

Choice 1 : Make some friends

Choice 2 : Keep pushing through this overwhelming period alone

Studying

Put grades aside.

Nellie has a successful social life, she's but going out frequently with her numerous new friends, but her grades are plummeting. She can either start studying with them, or she can give up and drop out.

Choice 1 : Drop out of University and find a job

Choice 2 : Organize studying sessions instead of outings.

socializing

Work as a receptionist.

Nellie has found a job as a receptionist. It has a great salary and comes with a lot of benefits, but she finds that it's not as fulfilling as she would want it to be. She wonders if she should quit, or keep working there.

Choice 1 : Quit and find a more meaningful job.

Choice 2 : Keep working there

Receptionist

Work as a delinquency prevention social worker.

Nellie has found a job as a delinquency prevention social worker. She's able to make connections with the teenagers she works with. She helps them deal with the feelings their high risk environment are creating. She feels fulfilled, but she has had to ask friends and family for money since she doesn't earn enough to make ends meet. She can keep working there, or quit to find a job with better income.

Choice 1 : Get shot at work

Choice 2 : Look for a job with better income

Social Worker

Make some friends.

Nellie has decided to make some concessions. She's actively making friends, but now, she wants to let loose a little. She can put her grades aside, or study with her new friends.

Choice 1 : Study with new friends.

Choice 2 : Put grades aside, focus on new friendships.

making friends

Keep pushing through this overwhelming period alone.

Nellie knows herself. She knows that if she loses focus even just a little bit, she will have to pay the price. She decides to work on her time management instead, and it pays off! She passes each class with straight A's and gets her diploma. She becomes Quebec's most renowned psycho-educator.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Diploma

Drop out of University and find a job.

Nellie drops out of university and looks for a job, but unfortunately, she doesn't find any. Her parents kick her out and cut her out of the will. Her friends turn on her. She ends up dying homeless and alone.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

homeless

Organize studying sessions instead of outings.

Nellie makes the suggestion to her friends that they should do study sessions instead of outings. That way, they would still see each other, but they could be productive at the same time.

Choice 1 : Lose friends.

Choice 2 : Graduate with friends.

Studying group

Quit and find a more meaningful job.

Nellie quits and ends up finding a high-paying intervention job.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Quitting

Keep working there.

Nellie decides that financial security surpasses her passion for intervention, so she decides to keep working as a receptionist. One day, a regular customer comes in, frantically. He explains that his wife has found his credit card bills and saw the hotel charges. He tells her that the woman he comes in with every week is his mistress and that his wife is on her way to the hotel to confirm that their credit card was used here, confirming that he is cheating. He tells Nellie that he will give her a million dollars if she denies that he's ever come here.

Choice 1 : Take the bribe.

Bribe

Get shot at work.

Nellie calls the police because one of her clients got into a very dangerous street fight. She is the only adult present. She tries to separate them but, one of the juvenile delinquents pulls out a gun. She manages to pull the gun away from him, as the police arrives. The policeman immediately shoots Nellie, assuming she is a hoodlum herself.

Choice 1 : Die.

Choice 2 : Survive.

Getting shot

Look for a job with better income.

Nellie has talked to her supervisors, she expressed that she was unable to make ends meet with her current salary. She asks if there are any vacant positions. Her HR representative says he'll speak to the manager to find out. The manager then calls Nellie into his office.She feels dread walking into it, because he's been flirting with her. He tells her that he'll give her 15% pay increase if she agrees to sleep with him. Nellie has the choice to report the sexual harassment, or just quit.

Choice 1 : Report the sexual harassment.

Choice 2 : Just quit.

More Income

Study with new friends.

Nellie's friend group, including herself, all work on time management and pull off straight A's. They all graduate and go on to become great psycho-educators.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning of the story

Graduation

Put grades aside, focus on new friendships.

Nellie decides to put her grades aside, but just for one night. She goes to this very exclusive party that is happening on Montreal's highest terrace with her friends. Nellie is having too many drinks. She slips and falls off the balcony. She dies instantly.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning of the story

Balcony at night

Lose friends.

Nellie's friends are gossiping about her, they're saying that she's become a bore, and they don't want to hang out with her anymore. They exclude her from the text group, they don't invite her to outings anymore, and they won't eat with her at lunch anymore.

Choice 1 : Go on a rampage.

gossiping

Graduate with friends.

Nellie's friends agree with her, it's time to stop having such a cursory mentality when it comes to studies. They all apply themselves and all become successful psycho-educators.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Friends graduating

Die.

The ambulance couldn't get to Nellie in time. The nine shots she received from the officer lead to her bleeding to her death.Her family sued the city for the incident. Her friends remember her for her wit and her looks.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Funeral

Survive.

Section 21 text: The goon who had the gun runs away. Nellie's client tells the police officer that he's made a huge mistake. He says he'll denounce himself but Nellie must survive. The police officer calls the ambulance right away. Luckily, a surgeon passes by as everything is unfolding. He rips his shirt into multiple strips and wraps them around each wound to stop her bleeding. The ambulance arrives and the medical staff is able to remove the bullets and stitch her up. The surgeon who saved her life visits her at the hospital and tells her he has instantly fallen in love with her and wants her to become his wife.

Choice 1 : Marry the surgeon.

Ambulance

Marry the surgeon.

Nellie agrees to marry the surgeon. They get married at the Marriot and move into a mansion. The surgeon is extremely wealthy, and Nellie is getting a very large compensation for her work incident, so she will never have to work again.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Wedding

Go on a rampage.

Nellie goes on a rampage. She's unable to tolerate her friends' hypocrisy any longer. She physically attacks her friend group leader, Sarah. Sarah files an assault and battery charge against her. Nellie spends the rest of her life in prison.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Jail

Report the sexual harassment.

Section 24 text: Nellie has reported the sexual harassment. She refuses to work with her perpetrator, so she quits and finds another delinquent prevention social worker job with a much higher income.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Sexual Harrasment

Just quit.

Nellie insults the manager to his face. She says that he must be insane to think that she would ever sleep with him. She quits on the spot and walks out of the office. Fashion designer, Jeremy Scott sees her, as she's walking out of the building, and tells her she has the perfect features for modeling. She walks for his Moschino fall/winter 2024 fashion show and becomes one of the world's most famous fashion models.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Quitting

Take the bribe.

Nellie accepts the bribe. When the customer's wife comes by, she denies that this card has ever been used in the establishment and even if it did, she wouldn't be allowed to disclose that information. He passes by later that day, and gives her the money. Nellie is now able to purchase new assets such as a car and a home. She invests the rest of the money and becomes a multi-millionaire.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

Mansion