Decide my life...

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Hilale Mohamed Houssein

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Word count: 712

Choice count: 20

Section count: 14

Image count: 14

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis

Education : 52 matches

(choice, college, diagnostic, don, exam, failed, field, first, grades, graduate, high school, management, school, students, training)

Law : 15 matches

(accident, authority, bribery, clients, corporation, corruption, evidence, family, justice, of god, offer)

Business : 11 matches

(clients, competitive, corporation, employee, management, money, offer, opportunity)

Target Structure: (15 matches)

invaluable (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (1 match)

corruption (1 match)

corrupted (2 matches)

bribes (1 match)

bribery (2 matches)

volunteer (2 matches)

volunteering (1 match)

abroad (3 matches)

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Decide my life...

Start at the beginning.

Now that I am done with High school, I don't know what to do with my life. My mom proposed that I go to Ahutsic College, while my dad gave me the idea to go to Maisonneuve College. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to Ahuntsic College and study Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Go to Maisonneuve College and study Natural Sciences.

Graduation day

Go to Ahuntsic College and study Diagnostic Imaging.

Here I am, at this college! The students seem all nice and cool. My first exam is in 2 days. I just want to put aside all distractions and get straight A's.

Choice 1 : I failed the exam, but I didn't give up, and I aced the rest exams of the year.

Choice 2 : I started to party more and more. The school noticed my bad grades and told me to leave the school.

Ahuntsic College

Go to Maisonneuve College and study Natural Sciences.

WOW! This college is filled with smart students and they all seem competitive toward each other. I feel like this year is going to be though, and I need to have good time management.

Choice 1 : Graduate and Go work in a famous corporation.

Choice 2 : Abandon my dreams.

Students

I failed the exam, but I didn't give up, and I aced all of the other exams of the year.

Now that I graduated, a hospital recruited me to be a technologist. They have a really good wage for me, but first I need to do an on-the-Job-training.

Choice 1 : Volunteer abroad.

Choice 2 : Continue to work in the field.

Good grades

I started to party more and more. The school noticed my bad grades and told me to leave the school.

I was sad, but at the same time I was happy. I told myself that maybe it was a sign of God telling me to just go rest and drop from school. So, I did it! :).

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

happy

Volunteer abroad.

After working in the medical field for a long time, I told myself what was my purpose in life? I thought about that, and I realized that I needed to do good in my life, so I decided to some volunteering abroad. Where should I go?

Choice 1 : Africa.

Choice 2 : Asia.

Volunteering

Africa.

I've always wanted to go back to my motherland, so I think it is the perfect opportunity to go visit and at the same time have an invaluable experience.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Africa

Continue to work in the field.

Despite having that thought about quitting, I decided to stay and work in the field. 3 years later, unfortunately, I broke my back because of a car accident. I can no longer work.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

car accident

Asia.

I love being in Asia. It is so refreshing! Finally, I think I am going to live here forever.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Asia

Graduate and Go work in a famous corporation.

Now that I graduated, I got an offer in a famous corporation. I noticed that the boss is corrupted. Before, he was a fair and respected leader, but now he was corrupted by his position of authority. He started taking bribes from clients, and also he began to mistreat his employee.

Choice 1 : Expose him to the authorities.

Choice 2 : Accept his bribery.

Corrupted man

Abandon my dreams.

My family doesn't have enough money to support me financially. My parents are sad, and so I am. I began to work in a bakery.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Bakery

Accept his bribery.

I knew that what was I doing was bad, but I couldn't resist the temptation of having more money.

Choice 1 : Prison for life.

Bribe

Expose him to the authorities.

With a colleague, we were enough brave to gather evidence against him and expose him and his corruption to the authorities. All the employees stood against the boss and brought justice.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

symbolize justice

Prison for life.

Not long after, my boss and I were caught by the justice and were sent to jail for a lifetime sentence.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Prison