A slow path.

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Word count: 888

Choice count: 26

Section count: 13

Image count: 13

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Education : 81 matches

(adult, choice, class, classes, classmates, college, continuing, courses, degree, diagnostic, diploma, down, field, first, high school, learned, school, technology, trainee, vocational)

Business : 19 matches

(clients, contract, cost, employee, lead, manager, money, offer, opportunity, pay, store, technology, trainee)

Web development : 18 matches

(class, close, field, guide, math, model, pass, path, position, session, stop)

Target Structure: (10 matches)

dread (1 match)

internship (1 match)

learned the ropes (1 match)

overwhelmed (1 match)

overwhelming (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

undermined (1 match)

wage (1 match)

corrupted (1 match)

theft (1 match)

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A slow path.

High school.

At the end of high school, I didn't receive my diploma because I didn't pass my math classes. I couldn’t make it to prom, but I was able to say goodbye to my friends before I left. I needed to choose a path from going to work or continuing school to receive my diploma.

Choice 1 : School for adult.

Choice 2 : Six flags.

My highschool

School for adult.

I went to the Marie-Anne Adult School to get my high school diploma. I stayed down for a few months to finish my math class. I got to see some old classmates, and we were passing time together. After graduating, I applied for several job positions and only one accepted me La Ronde.

Choice 1 : Six flags.

Choice 2 : Uncertain.

Adult School

Six flags.

I was hired by La Ronde. It was a very nice experience 2 years spent with them I was able to make a small fame. I was the employee who worked hard and was the most honest, but I earned the minimum wage which displeased me. Overwhelmed, I decided to work with less enthusiasm, and I resigned. There was this girl who came to bother me every time I worked, and it was later that I understood that she was flirting. It was funny because she started blushing when I said I wasn’t interested.

Choice 1 : Uncertain.

Choice 2 : What degree to get?

amusement park

Uncertain.

At one point, I really didn’t know what to do because I had no one to guide me, and I was falling into depression. It took me time to find what I wanted to do.

Choice 1 : Six flags.

Choice 2 : What degree to get?

Uncertain

What degree to get?

I had to choose what kind of degree I would need to get to have a better future.

Choice 1 : College Ahuntsic.

Choice 2 : Diploma of vocational studies (DVS).

where should I go

College Ahuntsic.

I was accepted by the college, and I had to choose a program that could lead me to a better future it was between Building Systems Technology or Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 1 : Building Systems Technology.

Choice 2 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Ahuntsic

Building Systems Technology.

I had a lot of classes in my first session, and it was overwhelming. I only passed 3 outs of 8 courses. Arrived in the fall of 2021 I decided to change program because I did not see myself working in the field of construction.

Choice 1 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Diploma of vocational studies (DVS).

Doctor for building

Diagnostic Imaging.

I changed the program because it represented me best. During an internship at the CHUM hospital, I learned the ropes of my career as a diagnostic radiologist, and it was interesting.

Choice 1 : Reno Depot.

Choice 2 : Going home.

Imaging

Diploma of vocational studies (DVS).

Apply to be a technical assistant in pharmacy at the École des Métiers des Faubourgs de Montreal. I had to refuse their offer because the college responded faster to my application.

Choice 1 : Building Systems Technology.

Choice 2 : Diagnostic Imaging.

School

Reno Depot.

In the first session, I had to find a job to pay my tuition. Reno Depot hired me for 2 long years and is very close to the college 40-minute walk. I once saw someone do something wrong, but I did nothing. Through dread, I let the person ran away. When I worked with them, I got sucked up in a drama between two women that needed help to put stuff in their car. At this job, In this work, I have been undermined by many clients and sometimes colleagues. To silence them, I abstained and responded maliciously. Most often, I called him to say that I could not work because of the weather that announced that it was going to be very hot. I was the model employee showing the in-and-out of the job to the trainee. Theft is not new in the store, there was once a thief who came out with a lot of tools.

Choice 1 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Quit.

Reno

Going home.

I was expelled from college because I could not fulfill the terms of my contract. My contract stipulated that I had to take more than half of the courses, but I could not pass them. When I was expelled, I didn’t see myself going to study and working full time. I was corrupted by money.

Choice 1 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Maxi.

Home

Quit.

I just wanted to give up and just spend my life without jobs. Living conditions have become harder. The cost of living has exponentially increased and I just thought helped my parents. I wanted to stop school and just work full-time at the Maxi. The former manager of the department offered me the position of assistant manager, but I refused because I had just started my session.

Choice 1 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Maxi.

I Quit

Maxi.

When I got fired, I took the opportunity to find another job. In the supermarket next door to me, there was a vacancy, and I posted for it. The former manager of the department offered me the position of assistant manager, but I refused because I had just started my session.

Choice 1 : Diagnostic Imaging.

Choice 2 : Quit.

Maxi