Choices in the Business World.

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A hypertext narrative by

Ali Ziada

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Story statistics

Word count: 168

Choice count: 4

Section count: 3

Image count: 3

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis

Education : 11 matches

(choice, college, diploma, high school, reader, school)

Business : 10 matches

(administration, business, cost, discount, money, retail, store)

Archaeology : 4 matches

(here, section)

Target Structure: (0 matches)

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Section 1

Finish high school.

You finished high school. Your mother took a photograph of you holding your diploma. “Smile! This is an important day,” she said. You were happy, but you were also worried. Everyone kept asking the same question: “What are you going to do next?” You had been accepted into a business administration program. However, a large discount store had also offered you a full-time job. College would help you prepare for a career, but it would cost money. The retail job would allow you to start earning immediately. You looked at the two offers on your phone. You had to make a decision.

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A young brunette woman with long curly hair who has just finished high school and is posing for a picture taken by her mother. The young woman is holding her diploma. “Smile! This is an important day,” her mother said. The young woman looks worried.
A young brunette woman with long curly hair who has just finished high school and is posing for a picture taken by her mother. The young woman is holding her diploma. “Smile! This is an important day,” her mother said. The young woman looks worried.
Section 2

Get a retail job.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Section 3

Go to college.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.