Butterfly Effect.

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CARMAN TANG

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Word count: 1568

Choice count: 79

Section count: 39

Image count: 39

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis

Education : 131 matches

(cegep, choice, classes, college, courses, degree, don, down, field, grades, graduation, high school, homework, management, options, reader, school, sets, skills, social, term, university)

Dance : 30 matches

(back, forward, out, running, social)

Archaeology : 30 matches

(bit, here, keep, pick, study, thing)

Target Structure: (11 matches)

dead-end job (3 matches)

fulfillment (1 match)

lack of (2 matches)

maddening (2 matches)

ojt (1 match)

straight a's (2 matches)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

trainees (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

worthwhile (1 match)

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Butterfly Effect.

The butterfly effects of my life and what it could've been.

I have just finished high school. I don't know what to do with my degree. I have no experience in the working field. And I am hesitating between 3 schools and getting a full time job. Help me make choices for my life.

Choice 1 : Go to Ahuntsic College.

Choice 2 : Go to Saint-Laurent Cegep.

Choice 3 : Go to the Old Montreal Cegep.

Choice 4 : Get a full time job.

graduation

Go to Ahuntsic College.

I choose Ahuntsic College because one of my good friends is here. Not only that but I have also heard that there are a lot of programs and diversity here. But I am still not sure what to study.

Choice 1 : Study Social Science.

Choice 2 : Study in Paramedic Care.

college ahuntsic

Go to Saint-Laurent Cegep.

I choose Saint-Laurent Cegep because it is the farthest from home. It is sometimes maddening to travel far, but it is great for new opportunities. What should I study?

Choice 1 : Study Social Science.

Choice 2 : Study in Business.

saint laurent cegep

Go to the Old Montreal Cegep.

I choose Old Montreal Cegep because it is the nearest to where I am living. It also has a sport I am looking forward to play.

Choice 1 : Study Social Science.

Choice 2 : Study Art Literature and Communications.

vieux montreal cegep

Get a full time job.

I have a minimum wage salary, and it is just enough to pay the rent and food. I am also bored to do the same thing all day every day.

Choice 1 : Get a second job.

Choice 2 : Go back to school.

work

Study Social Science.

I study every day and have a lot of homework. I also need money to help out my family. But I can't do both, and they have high expectations for me.

Choice 1 : Get a second job.

Choice 2 : Focus on studying.

study

Study Art Literature and Communications.

My friends keep going out without me, and I feel alienated. They know I have to study to pass my courses, and I am missing my friends. They have invited me to go out tonight. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Focus on studying.

Choice 2 : Go out with friends.

study

Study in Paramedic Care.

I think I chose the wrong program for me. All of my classes are boring, and I have no motivations at all. I used to have straight A's, but now my grades are going up and down. Mostly down. I am discouraged.

Choice 1 : Change programs.

Choice 2 : Get a second job.

study

Get a part-time job.

I was interviewed for 10 different jobs for the last 2 weeks and 3 of them called me back. Which one should I pick?

Choice 1 : Work as a waitress.

Choice 2 : Work as cashier.

Choice 3 : Work as a cook.

work

Study in Business.

This program is not for me. I am starting to wonder if I even want to be in school for the next 4 years or so. Maybe changing programs would help.

Choice 1 : Quit school.

Choice 2 : Change programs.

study

Work as a waitress.

It is a dead-end job, but it pays my bills. The tips are good, but I still want to make more money. My supervisor told me to serve Table 61. The client is rude and it is maddening. But I have been trained for this on my OJT.

Choice 1 : Scream at the client.

Choice 2 : Take the verbal abuse.

waiter

Work as cashier.

I have been working for 3 months here, and I am still at a minimum wage. I am contemplating on leaving soon. Not only that, but my coworkers are really loud sometimes. I wonder what they are talking about.

Choice 1 : Befriend my coworkers.

Choice 2 : Quit my job.

cashier

Work as a cook.

I have earned new sets of skills here at the restaurant, and I am grateful for that. But I am starting to get bored with doing the same thing every day. I am ready for new opportunities to come my way.

Choice 1 : Find a new job.

Choice 2 : Go back to school.

cook

Get a second job.

Since I am not making enough money, which one of those jobs should I chose?

Choice 1 : Work as cashier.

Choice 2 : Work as a cook.

Choice 3 : Work as a waitress.

job

Go back to school.

Getting back to school is hard, but I am ready.

Choice 1 : Go to Ahuntsic College.

Choice 2 : Go to Saint-Laurent Cegep.

Choice 3 : Go to the Old Montreal Cegep.

school

Change programs.

Changing programs is hard. I have been hesitating between the two that I think I would like studying in.

Choice 1 : Study Social Science.

Choice 2 : Study Art Literature and Communications.

change

Go out with friends.

We are at a well-known bar-restaurant, and I am less stressed now that I am here with my friends. Shots have arrived and new people are coming in.

Choice 1 : Meet new people.

Choice 2 : Drink a lot.

restaurant

Focus on studying.

I have been getting straight A's, and I am passing all of my exams. I am graduating with excellence, but I still don't know what to do with my life. It's like high school graduation again.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Get a dead-end job.

study

Start again.

Having no idea of what to do next is okay.

Choice 1 : The butterfly effects of my life and what it could've been.

rewind

Quit school.

School has been stressing me out for the longest time. It is mostly due to my lack of time management, and the fact that I have been putting things off for the next day.

Choice 1 : Get a full time job.

Choice 2 : Start again.

quit

Meet new people.

Now that I am meeting new people, my social battery is running out, and I am feeling a bit tired. It has been days since I had a good 8 hours of sleep. Since I have a lack of fulfillment, I wonder if I would feel fulfilled at the end of the night.

Choice 1 : Stay out all night.

Choice 2 : Go back home.

meet

Drink a lot.

I am now a bit tipsy. People are starting to look at me weird and avoid me. I feel powerless. But I still want to make new connections.

Choice 1 : Meet new people.

Choice 2 : Go back home.

drink

Go to university.

I have graduated from College. Yes!

Choice 1 : Go to McGill.

Choice 2 : Go to Concordia.

Choice 3 : Go to UQAM.

university

Get a dead-end job.

I have tried studying, but can't stay focused. School is not for me.

Choice 1 : Work as a waitress.

Choice 2 : Work as cashier.

Choice 3 : Work as a cook.

job

Finish university.

I have now graduated from University. Nice. Would you like to start my journey again?

Choice 1 : Yes.

Choice 2 : No.

university

Quit university.

I quit university. It wasn't for me. Though, it was worthwhile.

Choice 1 : Go back home.

Choice 2 : Start again.

quit

Scream at the client.

I just got fired, but I got a sense of contentment afterwards. What should I do next?

Choice 1 : Start again.

Choice 2 : No.

client

Take the verbal abuse.

I got promoted for setting the example to the trainees, but all of this make me realize that I won't get fulfilled by the job in the long term.

Choice 1 : Go back to school.

scream

Go back home.

All of this makes me so tired. I am ready to sleep all day.

Choice 1 : Go to sleep.

home

Find a new job.

There's only two options left for me to choose from. I am feeling a sense of accomplishment in a way.

Choice 1 : Work as cashier.

Choice 2 : Work as a waitress.

job

Befriend my coworkers.

By talking to them at work, I realized that they weren't as bad as I thought they were. They have invited me to go out with them after work.

Choice 1 : Go out with friends.

coworker

Quit my job.

I quit my job, I don't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Start again.

mic drop

Stay out all night.

I have been out all night, and I am very tired.

Choice 1 : Go to sleep.

night

Go to UQAM.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Finish university.

Choice 2 : Quit university.

uqam

Go to McGill.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Finish university.

Choice 2 : Quit university.

mcgill

Go to Concordia.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Finish university.

Choice 2 : Quit university.

concordia

Go to sleep.

I had a good good sleep. I wake up and realize that it was all dreams. Do you want to start again?

Choice 1 : Yes.

Choice 2 : No.

Choice 3 : No.

Choice 4 : Yes.

sleep

Yes.

Start again.

Choice 1 : The butterfly effects of my life and what it could've been.

yes

No.

That is the end of our journey. Thank you:).

Choice 1 : No.

stop