My Career as a Businessman.

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Word count: 1259

Choice count: 17

Section count: 18

Image count: 17

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis

Business : 79 matches

(abilities, business, company, facility, gain, management, manager, money, opportunity, partners, partnership, real estate, sell, staff, store)

Education : 72 matches

(choice, college, continuing, degree, diploma, don, failed, first, head, knowledge, learn, learned, level, management, private, project, school, skills, students, teach, training, university, vision)

Food and catering : 24 matches

(dad, dads, store)

Target Structure: (1 matches)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

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My Career as a Businessman.

The beginning of college.

It is my first year in college, and I have a traumatic incident happen in my life. My dad, who is a businessman passes away and left me with his heritage.

Choice 1 : Focus on school.

Choice 2 : Becoming a businessman early.

Ahuntsic College

Focus on school (college).

After my dad passed away, I had a dilemma between continuing school or taking over my dads business. I chose school because in my head, I thought that I didn't have enough knowledge to fully take over a business yet.

Choice 1 : Go to university to finish my business degree.

Choice 2 : Get an opportunity to work in a decent job to gain experience.

School work

Becoming a businessman early.

I take over my dad's business with minimum knowledge on how to run a business, but my dad had good employees who help me get the hang of it at my rhythm. It is certainly not an easy job to do this young, but I gave myself the challenge on becoming a better businessman than my father because I idolized him.

Choice 1 : Grow my dad's company.

Choice 2 : Sell my dad's company and creating my own.

Businessman

Go to university to finish my business degree.

After I finished college, I need more knowledge on how to run a business because I still don't feel ready to take on the business of my father that is running with the help of my uncle so that I can finish my studies. I chose to study at HEC that is a business school in Montreal.

Choice 1 : Taking over the company.

Choice 2 : Taking a break after school...

HEC

Get an opportunity to work in a decent job to gain experience.

I just finished college studies, and I get an opportunity to work in a decent job where I can put in practice what I learned from now. The boss of the company heard about my situation and really help my learn as much as possible by his side to be ready to take over my dad's business.

Choice 1 : Starting a business partnership my boss.

Choice 2 : Go back to manage my dad's business.

work

Grow my dad's company.

My father's company is going well, and I have an opportunity to buy a vacant store where I can expand. It has a good emplacement and a lot of students who are looking for part-time jobs around the sector. They will need to have on the job training, but we have a good staff of employees that teach them the ins-and-outs really quickly and well.

Choice 1 : Working in the new store that I just opened.

Choice 2 : Getting a manager for the new store.

company

Sell my dad's company and creating my own.

My abilities of running my dad's company are good, but I want to start my own business where it fits my style more. I want to start a business of air bnb where my quality or a private soccer clinic.

Choice 1 : Getting started on the real estate side of business.

Choice 2 : Opening up a private soccer training facility.

Taking over the company.

After getting my diploma from HEC in business management, my uncle gave over the responsibility of the company too me. With everything, I learned from school, I feel more comfortable to manage the business and have good ideas on how I could better the company by expanding and changing a few things.

Choice 1 : Continuing My Father's Legacy.

Taking a break after school...

After 3 years of hard studying, I took the initiative to travel to change a bit my mind or open my vision on things. I make a trip around Asia because it was my dream to visit a couple of country from that continent.

Choice 1 : Come back from the trip and taking charge of my dad's business.

Choice 2 : Finding a really good opportunity to do business in Asia.

Starting a business partnership my boss.

While working for my boss, he saw a lot of opportunity within me. He liked how I approached a situation in front of us and the way I explained the solution that I found. He proposed that I became his business partners, and I couldn't say no to this amazing opportunity. With each other, I visioned we could accomplish great things.

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Go back to manage my dad's business.

After working and building up experience with the company, I decided to leave on good terms so that I can pursue my career in managing my dad's company that I inherited. With a bigger background on managing, My uncle will gladly entrust his brother's company to me, and he knows that I will take good care of it.

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Working in the new store that I just opened.

I just opened up the expansion of my dad's company, and I decide to work here so that everything goes well as planned because you never know what can happen if it's not you that is doing the work. It is important for me that this don't become a failed project that my dad would not be proud of me.

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Getting a manager for the new store.

As I'm going to open the new store, I'm thinking about getting a manager who could take care of this store, so I can focus on expanding even more or looking for other opportunity. I found a person that as the competent required in my needs and I hired him.

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Getting started on the real estate side of business.

My friend told me about Air Bnb as a way to invest my money in. At first, I was hesitant, but when he showed me the numbers he was making, I said to myself that I need to put my hand on it too. That's how I started my new business of renting out Air Bnb.

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Opening Up a Private Soccer Training Facility.

Since I was young, I have loved playing soccer and my dad loved seeing me play soccer. I could say that I'm quite good at the sport, and I love teaching people about it or help them perfect their skills. That gave me the idea to start a business related to soccer, so that I can do the 2 things that I love in the same time: money and soccer.

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Continuing My Father's Legacy.

Now that I have knowledge on how to take care of the company, it is finally time to put it in practice.

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Come back from the trip and taking charge of my dad's business.

After the wonderful trip around Asia, I felt all freshened up and ready to take on my father's business. My head was relaxed, and I had a few ideas thanks to the trip that I think will take the business to another level.

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Finding a really good opportunity to do business in Asia.

While I was in Asia, I met big businessman from Korea that I had a good connection with, and he proposed that I come work with him in Korea, so I took this opportunity into consideration with my father's business. In the end, I decided to go work in Korea because I thought it would be better for me business wise.

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