Mehana's life story

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Word count: 993

Choice count: 31

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 20

Field Related Analysis

Education : 47 matches

(choice, classes, college, don, first, intervention, memory, project, school, social)

Dance : 20 matches

(back, check, follow, forward, lock, number, out, position, run, social, through)

Archaeology : 17 matches

(group, her, here, hide, keep, pit, re, understanding)

Target Structure: (7 matches)

lack of (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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Mehana's life story

Highschool choices.

I didn't think I could get it but that's it, I'm finally done with highschool. Unto the summer, the partys, the friends and the new life that I've been dreaming about. First I have to choose a good school and program to go through.

Choice 1 : College Vanier.

Choice 2 : College Ahuntsic.

Graduation

College Vanier.

This is my first time at an English school, at first it was hard, especially the Social Science classes, they we're never my forte, but I kept myself in check, and I understood the importance of hard work and consistency. This gave me the confidence to keep pushing towards my dream job.

Choice 1 : Humanitarian Organisation

Choice 2 : Nursing.

College Vanier

College Ahuntsic.

First year here was hard, I wanted to quit multiple times because I hated my program. But finally I found a program that interested me. I wanted to work with people.

Choice 1 : Intervention in homelessness.

Choice 2 : Prison Guard.

College Ahuntsic

Intervention in homelessness.

I started out my new job with a understanding of the challenges that are to come. But I never expected them to be so hard, seeing so much suffering makes you sad and depressed. I should do something about it.

Choice 1 : Communicating sadness.

Choice 2 : Don't say anything

Helping

Prison Guard.

During a day like any other, I hear an alarm that I don't recognise from the norm, the prison is now on a LockDown, our instructions as C.O is to lock doors and hide away from the prisoners. This very stressful!

Choice 1 : Become a hero.

Choice 2 : Stay inside

Prison

Humanitarian Organisation.

With some money in my pocket and an envy to travel I went to poor communities in Africa to help build a school, the project is 100% voluntary. I should explore around while I can before going back home.

Choice 1 : Get Kidnapped for ransom

Choice 2 : Go back home

KIds in Africa

Nursing.

Unsurprisingly with the lack of workers, finding work in healthcare was not difficult at all since a lot of the nurses are in burnout or out of work. I should stay vigilent to not overwork myself. Earn a respectable wage and go home.

Choice 1 : Go for the money

Choice 2 : Communicating sadness.

nursing

Become a hero.

I decided to not lock the doors, I will fight my way out of the prison, I am not locked here with them, they are locked in with me. Abandon all hopes ye who enters here. Maybe I'll get a promotion with a premium wage.

Choice 1 : Big mistake.

Write a choice here.

Hero

Big mistake.

They hated me for trying to run away. I woke up bruised and broken in a hospital.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

Injured

Communicating sadness.

I decided to talk to my colleague about it, she offered her shoulder to cry on half jokingly, I told her thank you for listening to me. I love my job, and I will continue my quest for inner peace throughout my career. I applied for a vacant position not long ago, I've been looking for some overtime too.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

Choice 2 : Retired.

Happiness

Keep your sadness to yourself.

I fall into a deep pit of sadness, guilt and self-hate, drinking makes me forget, and I really enjoy it. my rent is due, but I'm so thirsty for more alcohol.

Choice 1 : Homelessness.

Write a choice here.

Drinks

Homelessness.

Seems like I really messed up here. I should've paid my rent, at least I can drink. During the winter, I will only drink more to forget the cold just like I forgot what went so wrong.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

Homeless

Pay the rent.

I'm tired of living like this, I paid my rent, and joined a group of (AA) to discuss my problems. They help me keep myself off the substance but everyday is a struggle. Tomorrow will be another day.

Choice 1 : Hapiness.

Meeting

Happiness.

After years of working on myself, I finally got my mortgage, got married, and I am looking forward to my pension and to retire and travel the world. I hope to be with my family forever.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

old

Go for the money.

I decided to do 45 hours per week, I got a lot of money, but I am so tired now, I feel like sleeping all day every day. It's fine I only have one last patient today. He has a (Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease). I'm so tired I don't remember what treatment he is on.

Choice 1 : The blue pill.

Choice 2 : The red serum.

tired

The blue pill.

Oh! He's convulsing I will lose my job for sure I should've slept more.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

Oh no

The red serum.

He had a bad allergic reaction, now he is suing me for endangering his life. What a joke! All I wanted was to make extra money. Now I'm broke.

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

oh no

Kidnapped.

They didn't put the cuffs that tight, I'm sure I could run away from this place and get back home.

Choice 1 : That was stupid

Choice 2 : Follow orders.

kidnapped

Follow orders.

By following what they told me to do, I could get out since they got they're ransom. this motivated me to stay here to help more these communities and make sure that incident doesn't happen to no one else.

Choice 1 : Hapiness.

free

Staying inside.

By staying insides and hiding I waited for the prison riot to be over. This was scary but expected at least once in my carrier.

Choice 1 : Retired.

hiding

Retired.

I worked all my life. I've been a social security number, I've been a driving permit, a passport, a diplomat, a job, a family man. Soon I'll be a memory but for now, I'm just a retiree and a gardener. What a beautiful life!

Choice 1 : Highschool choices.

life