It all started like this.

A hypertext narrative by

Ali Tabyaoui

Created with

The Virtual Writing Tutor Grammar Checker


Word count: 369

Choice count: 9

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis:

Tourism : 13 matches (Circus, Destination, Europe, Flight, Plane, Program, Restaurant, destination, flight, program, split, turbulence, waiter)

Education : 8 matches (School, choice, college, diploma, polytechnic, school, university, university entrance)

Archaeology : 6 matches (circus, college, here, London, sand, study)

Target Structure:


It all started like this.

By Nihernel2 [Public domain], from Wikimedia Commons

End of college.

It's the end of college, and I wonder what to do next. I could travel around the world, go to university or just have a little job.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Travel around the world.

Choice 3 : A little job.

By Laurent Bélanger [CC BY-SA 4.0  (], from Wikimedia Commons

University entrance.

I chose to go to Polytechnic Montreal, and I applied in Mechanical Engineering. The university is completely different from the college. I had to get used to the establishment. I quickly made new nice friends.

Choice 1 : I have my diploma.

Choice 2 : I changed my study program.

Choice 3 : I had an accident.

Travel around the world.

I decided to go around the world starting with Europe.

Choice 1 : Next destination.

Choice 2 : I became an acrobat

Choice 3 : Plane crash.

By Emmanuel Huybrechts from Laval, Canada (Restaurant Italien (Barcelo Arenas Blancas)) [CC BY 2.0  (], via Wikimedia Commons

A little job.

I started working in an Italian restaurant as a waiter.

Write a choice here.

By Simo.sokcevic [CC BY-SA 4.0  (], from Wikimedia Commons

I have my diploma.

After four years of full-time study, I finally graduated. I did not think I would get their one day. That is wonderful.

Write a choice here.

By Arielinson [CC BY-SA 4.0  (], from Wikimedia Commons

I changed my study program.

I find that mechanical engineering is a difficult program. I changed my program to become a civil engineering technician.

Write a choice here.

By Thue [Public domain], from Wikimedia Commons

I had an accident.

I had an accident on my way home. I stayed in a coma for two years. Now, I wonder how I'm going back to normal life.

Write a choice here.

By Benh LIEU SONG [GFDL ( or CC BY-SA 4.0  (], from Wikimedia Commons

Next destination.

Europe is beautiful. There are so many beautiful cities. My favorite ones are Madrid, Paris, Venice, London and Moscow. Now, direction Asia.

Write a choice here.

By No machine-readable author provided. Sueiras assumed (based on copyright claims). [GFDL (, CC-BY-SA-3.0 ( or CC BY-SA 2.5 (], via Wikimedia Commons

I became an acrobat.

When I arrived in Europe, I attended a demonstration of acrobatics in a circus. So, I enrolled in a circus school to become an acrobat.

Write a choice here.

Plane crash.

The flight to Europe was weird. There was a lot of turbulence. We all tied our belts when suddenly the plane split in two. Just after I wake up my face in the sand. I look around me, and there is nothing and nobody. I was on a desert island.

Write a choice here.

The End.