A story of a lost student

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miveline papatoute

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Word count: 1586

Choice count: 45

Section count: 46

Image count: 46

Error count: 12

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 29 matches (School, choice, class, classes, classmate, classmates, college, continuing, courses, diploma, don, fail, failed, field, field of study, grade, high school, management, options, plagiarism, project, quantitative, school, social, student, task, teacher, test, university)

Nursing : 21 matches (absence, ambulance, analysis, biology, breathing, burn, pressure, test, death, Doctor, drug, foot, forced, grade, Health, position, section, social, stress, nursing, chemistry)

Computer Science : 20 matches (blog, burn, call, check, choice, Class, close, Computer science, computer, drawback, field, precision, Procedure, quality control, recognize, restart, Section, share, shift, task)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

background check (1 match)

drawback (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (3 matches)

leave of absence (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

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A story of a lost student

Graduation

How it all started (start here).

I’m in my final year at high school and I have to make a big choice for college. I’m torn between three different options for the next year.

Choice 1 : Go in Biotechnology at Ahuntsic College.

Choice 2 : Go in Analytical Chemistry at Ahuntsic College.

Choice 3 : Go in Social Sciences at College Rosemont.

Biotechnology

Going in Biotechnology at Ahuntsic College.

I am really glad that I chose this program because it is really interesting. My biology class is really hard. This class is really difficult, and I am not sure of what I should do next.

Choice 1 : Continuing in Biotechnology.

Choice 2 : Leaving Biotechnology.

Continuing in Biotechnology.

I chose to continue in this program even if it is not easy. In a laboratory of one of my classes I have to kill a rat. I don’t know what is the best decision.

Choice 1 : I decided to kill the rat.

Choice 2 : Not kill the rat.

I decided to kill the rat.

I decided to finally kill the rat. One of my classmates is having difficulties with this task and asked me to do it.

Choice 1 : Kill the rat for my classmate.

Choice 2 : Not kill the rat.

Kill the rat for my classmate.

I kill the rat for my classmate and the teacher saw me so I am forced out from the class.

Write a choice here.

Not kill the rat for my classmate.

I did not kill the rat for my classmate. He finally decided to drop out because he can’t kill the animal and is mad that I didn’t do it for him.

Write a choice here.

Not kill my rat.

I decided to not kill the rat because it is too hard for me. This decision made me fail the class, and I am wondering what to do now.

Choice 1 : Restart the class.

Choice 2 : Quit.

Restart the class.

Restarting the class is not fun I should have killed the animal. I will never make the same mistake again.

Write a choice here.

Quit.

I decided to leave the program. I do not see myself killing animals for no reason. This experience showed me that I care a lot for them sot I decided to become a veterinary.

Write a choice here.

Leaving Biotechnology.

I decided to drop out of school because it was too difficult for me and it was causing me a lot of stress.

Choice 1 : Work.

Choice 2 : Stay at home.

Work.

I decide to find a job at McDonalds close to my house. During my shift a saw a coworker doing drug.

Choice 1 : Tell my boss.

Choice 2 : Not tell my boss.

Tell my boss.

I decide to tell my Boss about what I saw and my coworker got fired. After my shift, he waited for me outside the restaurant and stabbed me in the back.

Write a choice here.

Not tell my boss.

After an overtime, while I picked up my things, I see someone laying on the sofa. I go closer I recognize my coworker who was doing drug. Realizing that he wasn’t breathing I call an ambulance. I later find out, that he overdosed on drugs and that caused his death.

Write a choice here.

Stay at home.

I’m staying at my parents house without working. While I am home I discover a new passion for cooking.

Choice 1 : Create an Instagram account.

Choice 2 : Create a Blog.

Create an Instagram account.

I decide to start an Instagram account to share pictures and recipes. My account doesn’t become really successful so I stop and find myself a job.

Write a choice here.

Create a Blog.

I decide to start a blog to share my recipes. I become really popular at it and even publish my own book.

Write a choice here.

Go in Analytical Chemistry at Ahuntsic College.

I decided to go in Analytical Chemistry at Ahuntsic College in Montreal. The courses are becoming really hard for me.

Choice 1 : I should quit.

Choice 2 : Continue the program.

I should quit.

I decided to leave the program because of the difficulty all of my classes. It was really stressful.

Choice 1 : Work full time.

Choice 2 : Change program.

Work full time.

I started working full time at my job and they decided to give me a promotion despite my drawback.

Choice 1 : Accept the promotion.

Choice 2 : Refuse the promotion.

Accept the promotion.

Accepting this promotion made me not haves enough time to go back to school.

Write a choice here.

Refuse the promotion.

Refusing this promotion made me miss the opportunity to have a raise in my salary and I regret my decision.

Write a choice here.

Change program.

I decided to go back to school after dropping out, and I am not sure in what program I should go.

Choice 1 : Applied Sciences.

Choice 2 : Nursing.

Applied Sciences.

I really love the program and I plan on becoming a doctor.

Write a choice here.

Nursing.

I really love the program and I think I will go to university.

Write a choice here.

Continue the program.

The summer is around the corner and I have to chose where I should do my internship that will help me to have a foot in the door.

Choice 1 : Internship at Algorithme Pharma.

Choice 2 : Go to Precision.

Internship at Algorithme Pharma.

I decided to go to work for Algorithme Pharma. They had a vacant position for an intern. They did a background check before hiring. During a shift I see a coworker steal some laboratory equipment and not following the good laboratory practices.

Choice 1 : Tell my boss.

Choice 2 : Not tell my boss.

Tell my boss.

I decide to tell my boss about what I saw and he fired my coworker. All my other coworkers are against me because of what I did.

Write a choice here.

Not tell my boss.

I decided to not tell my boss about what I saw and keep the secret.

Write a choice here.

Go to Precision.

I decided to do work for Precision, who is a laboratory that does the quality control of water all around the city. The water is the analyte and different blanks are used during the quantitative analysis. There was a day I found out that my coworker was not following the procedure the right way.

Choice 1 : Tell my boss of Precision.

Choice 2 : Not tell my boss of Precision.

Tell my boss of Precision.

I decided to tell my boss and after discovered that it was a test so I can keep the job.

Write a choice here.

Not tell my boss of Precision.

I decided not to tell anyone about what I saw. I later discovered that it was a test and I failed so I do not have a job anymore.

Write a choice here.

Go in Social Sciences at College Rosemont.

The program I am in is Social Sciences and I find it difficult to manage my eight classes.

Choice 1 : Change program.

Choice 2 : Do my DEC in three years.

Change program.

I decided to change my program to go in computer science at Ahuntsic College in Montreal. I have been studying three years, and I am torn between two choices.

Choice 1 : Find a job.

Choice 2 : Go to university.

Find a job.

I decided to find a job in my field of study, and I was overwhelmed by everything.

Choice 1 : Leave the job.

Choice 2 : Continue my job.

Go to university.

I chose to go to the University of Montreal and realise that I was not happy.

Choice 1 : Continue until the end.

Choice 2 : Quit school.

Leave the job.

I chose to take a leave of absence because my health is important for me.

Write a choice here.

Continue my job.

I chose to continue and made a burn out because of all the work I had to do and the pressure that I have.

Write a choice here.

Continue until the end.

I continued until the end to have my diploma.

Write a choice here.

Quit school.

I drop out of school and found a job in my field.

Write a choice here.

Do my DEC in three years.

I decided to finish my DEC in three years and I have to choose a program for university.

Choice 1 : Go in accounting and management.

Choice 2 : Give this section a short title.

Go in accounting and management.

I decide to go in accounting and management for a project I’m wondering if I should do plagiarism.

Choice 1 : Do plagiarism.

Choice 2 : Don't do plagiarism.

Go in finances.

I decide to go in finances and it is really difficult.

Choice 1 : Quit finances.

Choice 2 : Continue finances.

Do plagiarism.

I get caught and get expelled.

Write a choice here.

Don't do plagiarism.

I don’t do it and obtain a good grade.

Write a choice here.

Quit finances.

Drop out of school and live the streets because I have no job.

Write a choice here.

Continue finances.

I chose to continue until the end and obtain my diploma.

Write a choice here.

The End.