Word count: 2011
Choice count: 69
Section count: 47
Image count: 44
Error count: 4
Field Related Analysis:
Education : 24 matches (School, choice, class, classes, college, diploma, don, failed, first, goal, high school, homework, learn, level, private, reader, school, semester, social, speaking, student, students, teacher, teachers)
Computer Science : 22 matches (architecture, bit, call, child, choice, Class, closed, computer, hypertext, manager, Math, name, online, pass, Pick, Private, reader, ringing, Section, security, split, language)
Tourism : 19 matches (Cafeteria, First class, Goal, Guide, Lobby, Opportunity, Program, US, administration, architecture, bit, door, first class, guide, language, online, pass, program, split)
Target Structure:
a foot in the door (1 match)
intern (1 match)
premium wage (1 match)
pull off (1 match)
retirement (2 matches)
straight A's (1 match)
thoroughly (1 match)
though (1 match)
wage (1 match)
Ever since I was a child, I knew what I wanted to become when I grow up. But it all changed when it was the time for me to pick a program for college. I applied in two very different college and programs. I got accepted in both which made the final decision even harder. I had applied in Social Science at Ahuntsic College and architect at Vanier College.
Choice 1 : I went to Ahuntsic College.
Choice 2 : I went to Vanier College.
I decided to go to Ahuntsic College. I was very happy to have chosen this college because I realized I wanted to become a teacher just like my mother. When I walked in everyone seemed nice and friendly. But I had one issue. I couldn't find my geography class so I decided to.
Choice 1 : I asked a student for help.
Choice 2 : I went to the lobby.
Choice 3 : I answered the phone.
While I was walking in the hallway, I saw a guy and I asked him if he knows where the class is.
Choice 1 : He didn’t know.
Choice 2 : He knew.
The guy looked very nice and he wanted to help, but it was his first day too and he was looking for his philosophy class.
Choice 1 : Found both of the classes.
Choice 2 : Fire alarm.
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Choice 1 : Write a choice here.
The security helped us and turned out that our classes were next to each other. After the bell he was waiting and we started hanging out we found out that we are in the same program. A few weeks later we became great friends and ended up teaching in the same school.
Choice 1 : New Chapter.
While we were looking for our classes, the fire alarm went on and all of the students had to leave and go outside.
Choice 1 : End.
He knew where the class was, because he was going there too and it wasn’t his first semester in college.
Choice 1 : We went to class.
Choice 2 : Reunion.
We went in class, and while I was at the door I saw some of my friends from high school, and I was so happy that they were in my class. I had the best two years at Ahuntsic College and didn’t regret it a bit.
Choice 1 : End.
I was too shy to ask someone for my class, so I decided to go to the lobby and ask someone there.
Choice 1 : They told me where the class is.
Choice 2 : Miss understanding.
There was a lady whom students can ask questions so I asked her where my class was and she gave me the direction.
Choice 1 : Canceled.
Choice 2 : Got in.
I went to the class but the door was closed and the light was off. On the door there was a note saying the class was canceled, so I went to the cafeteria and waited for my next class.
Choice 1 : End.
I went to class and the teacher let me in because she understood that it’s the first day and it’s normal to be lost. I was happy because she seemed interesting and understanding. And I liked her way of teaching and communications. She became my inspiration.
Choice 1 : End.
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Write a choice here.
I asked the woman in the lobby to guide me to my class, but she said I’m not supposed to be there.
Choice 1 : Missing name.
Choice 2 : Prerequisite.
When the woman was looking on her computer for my class she typed my name but couldn’t find me, so she said that I’m not an official student here. I had missing papers. I had to wait for a semester because of that mistake but I worked as an intern.
Choice 1 : End.
The woman told me that I can’t be in that class before doing history class. So, I had to change my schedule and while doing history, I fell in love with the subject and wanted to become a history teacher instead of math teacher.
Choice 1 : End.
I was walking in and all of a sudden my phone started ringing. It was my dad.
Choice 1 : I answered the phone.
Choice 2 : I didn’t answer the phone.
I thought it was something important because my dad knew I was at school.
Choice 1 : Important call.
Choice 2 : Irrelevant call.
He called to tell me about a job opportunity to become a full-time preschool teacher in a private school. I couldn’t say no because it sounded amazing and what I wanted. Until my last days I was teaching in that same school and I’m so happy and grateful but now it’s my retirement and need to stay home.
Choice 1 : End.
My dad called me just to know what time I will be home because he’s leaving and I don’t have my keys.
Choice 1 : End.
I couldn’t answer the phone because I was nervous and I didn’t know where to go so I had to be focused on my way to class.
Choice 1 : Regret.
Choice 2 : Better decision.
Not answering that phone call was one of my biggest regrets, because my dad had a friend who needed a teacher in his new preschool and he asked my dad if I wanted that job before bringing anyone new it was a foot in the door that I lost.
Choice 1 : End.
I wasn’t upset for the fact that I didn’t answer the phone call because he was calling me for a job that I’m happy I didn’t get in, because with my diploma, I was able to gain a premium wage.
Choice 1 : End.
I decided to go to Vanier College. At first, I was very nervous, because everyone around me were speaking English and English isn't my first language. I went to my first class which was English.
Choice 1 : The English class was very easy.
Choice 2 : The teacher was explaining boring upcoming projects.
Choice 3 : The class was harder than I expected.
I was very happy that I knew I'll be able to pass this class and wont have any difficulties in English. In fact, I was one of the best students.
Choice 1 : The teacher noticed and changed my level.
Choice 2 : The teacher noticed and didn’t change my level.
I was doing really noticed the teacher put me in a higher level. And it was way too hard for me.
Choice 1 : I left the college and started working in Uniprix.
Choice 2 : Got into a higher level in English.
I left the college and started working in Uniprix as a cashier and a few years later I became the manager and stayed until my retirement.
Choice 1 : End.
After the teachers’ notice, he sent me to a higher level English class. It was really hard at the beginning, but then I realized that I improved my English and it helped me in my career in architecture.
Choice 1 : End.
The class was easy I got straight A’s.
Choice 1 : Changed my level.
Choice 2 : Stayed on the same level.
I asked my teacher to change my level because I thought it was too easy and I wasn’t going to learn new things. But when I did change it, I regretted it because it was so hard.
Choice 1 : End.
With time, I realized my English wasn’t good enough and staying on the same level was a good decision.
Choice 1 : End.
On the first day, the teacher was showing us what we will be doing throughout the year and they seemed boring and uninteresting to me.
Choice 1 : I changed the teacher.
Choice 2 : I left the class.
I had three days to change my class and I did it to be with another teacher that might be more interesting.
Choice 1 : Better teacher.
Choice 2 : Worse teacher.
This teacher was better. She wouldn’t make use do a lot of homework, everything was online, explained really good by using different strategies.
Choice 1 : End.
I regretted changing the teacher because the new one was worse. I couldn’t understand what he was saying and he would give a lot of notes and talk a lot and fast.
Choice 1 : End.
Since the class was very boring, I decided to leave and go home.
Choice 1 : On my way home.
Choice 2 : Saw a friend.
I was really disappointed because the first day didn’t go as I expected. So, I went home.
Choice 1 : End.
When I was in the hallway, I saw a friend of mine from high school and I told him about my teacher and he told me that he’s a good teacher and I shouldn’t be worried about this class and the projects.
Choice 1 : End.
As soon as I walked in, I realized everyones’ English was better than mine and it seemed very difficult and complicated.
Choice 1 : I decided to get out of the class.
Choice 2 : I decided to stay in class.
When I saw that everyone was better I was insecure and didn’t feel well so I left.
Choice 1 : I got into an accident.
Choice 2 : I left the college.
While driving home, I was thoroughly upset, and I was driving fast unintentionally. In a split moment I got into a car accident which caused my handicap for the rest of my life.
Choice 1 : End.
Since English was harder than I expected, I got out of the class and went to the administration to tell them that I want to drop out. After doing that I stayed home for a semester and applied to a French College.
Choice 1 : End.
Even though it looked very hard, I had the feeling that I could pull off.
Choice 1 : Failed it.
Choice 2 : Found a friend and passed the class.
In my class, I found a friend with whom I did frequently the projects with and he helped me a lot. We passed the class and graduated together and soon later we started dating.
Choice 1 : End.
The End.