.Eric's Life.

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Cédric Deusma

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Word count: 2086

Choice count: 68

Section count: 45

Image count: 45

Error count: 16

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 21 matches (CEGEP, School, choice, classes, college, courses, degree, don, grades, learn, management, private, research, school, student, students, teacher, trainee, training, tutor, university)

Sociology : 15 matches (average, closed, School, care, interview, language, management, open, psychology, private, school, Small, training, wants, Louis)

Tourism : 12 matches (Basic, Concordia, Demand, Extra, Permanent, Program, Promotion, average, draft, language, master, program)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overtime (2 matches)

overwhelm (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

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.Eric's Life.

The beginning. (Start).

Eric is a young student athlete at College Mont-Saint Louis. He is a good student who has a lot of straight A’s. Basketball is his passion since he was little but Eric knows that theirs is a small percentage that he can actually go pro. He always wanted to be a psychologist's if Basketball doesn't work out but he still wants to play in college. If he studied in English, he is going to drop Basketball.

Choice 1 : Eric goes to Vanier but he's going to have to drop Basketball to focus in English

Choice 2 : Eric goes to Ahuntsic

Scene 1.

Studying in English is harder then he thought. He is thinking about paying for a tutor.

Choice 1 : He hired a tutor

Choice 2 : He gave up school

Choice 3 : He just continue without any help

Scene 2.

The tutor really helped him with school. He developed a good time management .After some time, his grades improves. He finished his DEC and thinking of which University he's going.

Choice 1 : He goes to McGill University but its harder

Choice 2 : He goes to Concordia University

Scene 3.

He finished McGill with a doctoral in psychology after years of hard work. But now he's trying to figuring out what he's going to do next.

Choice 1 : Work as a teacher

Choice 2 : Open is private clinic

Scene 4.

Eric got hired in as a teacher in psychology at Dawson College. At the beginning, he was a trainee but after ten years of teaching he became the highest paid teacher in Canada.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 5.

Because of is degree at McGill University, Eric quickly started to have clients. More and more after years of good reputations. He became the most demand psychologist in Montreal.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 6.

Eric finished Concordia with a master in psychology. But because he didn't go to a big school and only have is master he can only work as assistants and have problems finding a job on a vacant position.

Choice 1 : Go back to school and do a doctoral

Choice 2 : Just give up and stick at being a assistant

Scene 7.

Eric went back to school and found a good spot as a psychologist at a Hospital. He had to learn the ropes at the beginning but now he's well-prepared..

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 8.

Eric got tired of being at being assistant. He quit his job and now he is taking care of is kids while is wife works.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 9.

Eric is not in school anymore and work full-time with a low salary but he knows that he won't be able to live like this for life.

Choice 1 : Go back to school in a French CEGEP

Choice 2 : He gives up for good

Scene 10.

After 3 years of working, Eric finally went back to school in French CEGEP at Ahuntsic but the system is to quick for him. Eric don't feel at is place.

Choice 1 : He continue

Choice 2 : He gives up for good

Scene 11.

Eric finally finished is DEC after 3 years of hard work. He later will have a bachelor degree at Montreal University. And he's know working as an assistant at a good clinic after being hire at a job interview. He's happy about the decision of coming back to school.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 12.

Eric goes back to working full-time and he works hard enough to become the manager of 3 McDonald after he did a lot of overtime. He's making a lot of money and he is happy about it.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 13.

He's working a lot and he's starting to feel pain in he's body because he's working too much. He's thinking about retirement.

Choice 1 : He ignores the pain and continue

Choice 2 : He retired

Scene 14.

After years of working as a plumber in pain, Eric died at the ages of 45 because he was working too much. He was overwhelm.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 15.

Because he retired to young, Eric don't have enough money saved, he's now homeless and he is fighting to survive.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 16.

Because he continued without help, Eric took some extra session to finish is DEC but it wasn't easy with this new language. He's thinking about studying in French or staying in English next year.

Choice 1 : Eric goes to Concordia University

Choice 2 : Eric goes to Montreal University

Scene 17.

He finished with a doctoral degree and he's now thinking of working in Canada or in the United States. Since he has a background in English he as the choice.

Choice 1 : Canada

Choice 2 : The United States

Scene 18.

Eric didn't find a job in Canada. He's now working as substitute teacher hoping for an offer as a permanent teacher.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 19.

After years of founding job, Eric he's know a teacher at the University of Michigan.

Choice 1 : He thinks back about is life decisions and wonder what would have happened if he had made different choices

Scene 20.

Go back to studying in French was better for him. But he's taking it too easy and started to be less serious. He's thinking of quitting.

Choice 1 : Eric finished what he started

Choice 2 : Eric quit for good

Scene 21.

He finished with a bachelor but couldn't found work so he's know working at Maxi to gain some money.

Choice 1 : Hes know imagining is life if he start over

Scene 22.

Eric now sells drugs for living.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 23.

Eric is at Ahuntsic College he is the Basketball star but classes or hard. Basketball he's taking too much place.

Choice 1 : He quit basketball

Choice 2 : He continues Basketball

Choice 3 : He quit school and basketball

Scene 24.

After quitting basketball, Eric became more focus in school and he managed to finish Ahuntsic with high grades. Now he’s thinking on where is going to go.

Choice 1 : Montreal University

Choice 2 : McGill University

Scene 25.

At Montreal University, he had a lot of good grades and was one of the best students. He finished with a doctoral in Psychology. Now he’s thinking about where he’s going to do next. But he is not sure if he still like psychology.

Choice 1 : He quit school

Choice 2 : He finishes school

Scene 26.

Eric decided to quit and to start over in another program.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 27.

Eric didn’t study all these years for nothing so he decided to open a private clinic. It's way better than a dead-end job.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 28.

At McGill University, it was to hard for him because Eric never studied in English. He doesn't know what is going to do.

Choice 1 : He quit McGill University

Choice 2 : He continues

Scene 29.

After quitting, he transferred to UQAM and its was easier for him. He finished with a master and he is now working as an assistant in Hospital after a lot of on-the-job-training.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 30.

Even though he tried to stay, school became harder and harder so he decided to quit definitely and he’s now working full time at Walmart and doesn't know if he's going to come back one day.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 31.

Eric continue Basketball but its was too much and he's grades became were really average. He doesn't know if he’s going to continue Basketball.

Choice 1 : He quit basketball

Choice 2 : He continues basketball

Scene 32.

He quit and became more focus in school but because of is bad grades he couldn't really enter on a program. Eric is now takes basic courses at Montreal University hoping his grades will be good enough to get in the program.

Choice 1 : Eric quit school

Choice 2 : Eric continues

Scene 33.

Eric give up on school and he’s now working as a janitor at Ahuntsic College.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 34.

After 1 one year of hard work Eric managed to get in his program and finished with a master degree. He's knows working as an assistant in mental health research.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 35.

He decided to continue Basketball but his grades became really bad. But because it was a really in Basketball, the basket ball teams at UQAM recruit him and manage to get I'm at the school. He became so good that he got draft in the NBA. He doesn't know if is going to go.

Choice 1 : Eric goes to the NBA

Choice 2 : He doesn't go to the NBA

Scene 36.

Eric went to play for the Los Angeles Clippers and is paid 2 million per year.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 37.

Eric decided not to go in the NBA because he was scared of English and finished with a Bachelor degree. He as difficulty founding work and regret not going in the NBA.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 38.

He decided to quit both school and Basketball and is now working full-time. But the salary is really low and it's not what he thought it was. He doesn't know what to do.

Choice 1 : He goes back to school

Choice 2 : He quit for good

Scene 39.

Went back to school at Montreal University but now he thinks it's a waist of time and doesn't know if he is staying or not.

Choice 1 : He stays in school

Choice 2 : He quit school

Scene 40.

He stayed and finished with a bachelor degree. He's know working as an assistant with a still low salary.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 41.

He went back working full time, he did a lot of overtime and got a promotion in a pharmacy. He’s know the manager and he’s well-paid.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 42.

He quit for good and became the manager of a pharmacy. But he was still in love with psychology.

Choice 1 : He stays at the pharmacy

Choice 2 : He goes back to school

Scene 43.

He decided to go back at Concordia University and got a Doctoral degree. He became both a manager of the pharmacy and a teacher in psychology at Maisonneuve College.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

Scene 44.

He stayed but the pharmacy closed it's doors. Eric now sleeps in metros regretting not going back to school.

Choice 1 : He's know thinking about is life if he starts over

The End.