The Life Of A Businessman.

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Zakaria Hamzaoui

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Choice count: 15

Section count: 11

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Error count: 1

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Education : 70 matches

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Business : 37 matches

(business, buying and selling, cost, employee, investment, money, pay, product, products, profitable, profits, sell, team)

Web development : 19 matches

(call, class, create, escape, feed, hide, option, path, stop, write)

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alienation (1 match)

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The Life Of A Businessman.

Almost the end of college.

In a couple months, I'll be done with College and I'll have to choose between many options. I'd be interested in working directly or starting a business right away, but is it the right choice considering the fact that I could go to university and try to improve my education. I'm highly doubtful about the second option because it'd mean that I wouldn't be able to get into what I like the most yet which is focusing on my goals. What would be the better option?

Choice 1 : Create a business.

Choice 2 : Go to university.

College Ahuntsic

Finally done.

It's about time that I finished these long and hard years of college. I studied so much to get this diploma, and I won't waste my knowledge. I'm starting a business, and I know perfectly what to sell. People have needs, and I'm the one who can satisfy them. This is why I will invent machines that can cook anything at any time of the day. This is revolutionary! Thinking about it, is it really revolutionary or am I just going crazy? My other business idea was to buy and sell watches to get profits out of them. Which idea would be the smartest?

Choice 1 : Create cooking machines.

Choice 2 : Start buying and selling watches.

Business

New Building New Story.

My first day in university, and I can tell that I won't be here for much longer. This is atrocious. Why do people walk this fast as if somebody was trying to kidnap them? They're all focused on their classes and are here to perform at the highest level to get their diploma. I should start doing so. My teachers were pleasant, and I really liked the environment. I'm not going to lie but their explanations almost sounded like Chinese to me which is not a good thing. I was always fascinated by Business classes, and I can't wait to learn more about this topic. Anyway, we have a project to hand in the middle of the semester, but I don't know anybody here. Should I do it alone or try to find somebody to do it with?

Choice 1 : Do it alone.

Choice 2 : Find somebody.

University of mtl

No More Cooking!

These last couple of weeks I tried to make a machine that would be able to cook anything whenever somebody wanted to. This was a complete disaster, or wasn't it? Let me explain myself. The machine was ready to use after every verification I did, and it worked pretty well. This wasn't the problem. I had no idea how to make thousands of these and sell it to people. I don't have a team that can help me. Even if I had a team, it would be a waste of time selling all of them considering the fact that it took me so many resources to even make profits out of them by selling them to people. I want to make money fast, and have a margin of more than triple my investment by products. What do you recommend me?

Choice 1 : Use the machine to create products and sell them.

Choice 2 : Abandon the idea.

Cooking machine.

Trading Watches For Profits.

I really thought about what would be the best option between the two choices I had, and I thought trading watches would be it at first.I informed myself about the most profitable watches and started buying a couple of them. In the beginning, I sold a lot of them and thought that I'd become rich from it. I guess I was wrong since I couldn't sell any of them anymore. I forgot the most crucial part about it : having good communication skills. Now I'm pretty much done for since I have forty thousands worth of watches and no money in the bank. I decided to borrow a hundred thousand dollars to the bank, but I have no idea how I'm supposed to refund all of this money. Actually, there's only two ways I can solve this problem. It's either I leave the country and go to Zimbabwe, so they never find me, or I could work for the rest of my life to be able to pay my debts off?

Choice 1 : Escape to Zimbabwe.

Choice 2 : Become an employee and work for somebody else.

Rolex

Where Am I Now?

I flew out to Zimbabwe with a hundred dollars in cash, but what am I supposed to do now? Do I have to hide eternally? Well, now I have enough time to visit this country and learn the language. All of this happened because of an attempt to create a business. I should've been cleverer. I made one of the worst mistakes possible in business. After all, I should have gone to university. I could've known to never do this which would have helped me not to be in this unfortunate situation. If I could've done something else from the start, I would choose to go to university.

Choice 1 : Restart.

Zimbabwe

There Is enough for everybody!

I'll be honest with it. I was really confident about this project, but why didn't it work? Let me tell you what happened. I thought it would be smarter to just use the machine and make thousands of pancakes, and sell them to people for profits. This sounds good, doesn't it? My machine decided otherwise. It started doing anything, but pancakes, and I couldn't stop it for some reason. Now I have enough food to feed a whole country. It cost me so much that I don't have money anymore. In addition to this, people were acting weird after they tasted my products and came back to ask me to refund them because they got sick. I thought it was a winning product, and it turned out to be the reason I lost all of my money. I should've known that it wouldn't work if I had more knowledge. The right decision would have probably been to go to university. Don't you think so?

Choice 1 : Restart.

Sickness.

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Dreams Turned To Nightmares.

I wanted to create a business to avoid being an employee and work for somebody else. Look at me now doing exactly what I never wanted to do just because I wanted to rush the process. I'm trapped into the consequence of capitalism which is alienation. It would have been smarter to follow the easy path that consists of getting a degree and knowledge to choose what to do after that.

Choice 1 : Restart.

Alienation

Not At The Right Place.

The day finally came. I had to hand my project to the teacher. We all did reliable work, and I was proud of myself. Even though we tried so hard to finish it, something I may call "unbelievable" happened. We all agreed that this one friend would bring the whole project to class to hand it to the teacher. Guess what happened? He lost it. He lost months of hard work, and we got a 0 and failed our class. I don't belong here. School is just not for me.

Choice 1 : Restart.

Dropping Out.

Thought I didn't need anybody to help me, and I realize that I couldn't be more wrong. The project counts for more than half of the grade, and I don't understand anything. I haven't done a question, and it needs to be handed to the teacher tomorrow. I'm screwed. I am losing my time here. School is created to make you feel like you don't belong anywhere. Is it my fault or the school's. I should've found people to do it with. Maybe, it would've changed my situation. Now I am leaving this school and never coming back to it. If only I didn't waste my time trying to make a useless project, I would've been able to create a business and be successful. Know knows...

Choice 1 : Restart.

Dropout