Choose My Path.

A hypertext narrative by

Aziza Abou-El-Fadl

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Word count: 937

Choice count: 27

Section count: 16

Image count: 16

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis

Education : 68 matches

(adult, choice, college, field, grades, graduation, learn, learned, management, research, test, training, university)

Web development : 23 matches

(break, field, path, position, server, test)

Dance : 20 matches

(around the world, break, out, position, traveling)

Target Structure: (30 matches)

came in handy (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

dreaded (1 match)

hr (1 match)

internship (4 matches)

internships (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

learned the ropes (1 match)

leave of absence (2 matches)

mortgage (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overwhelmed (3 matches)

pension (2 matches)

premium wage (2 matches)

pull off (1 match)

pulling off (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (2 matches)

set aside (1 match)

sexual harassment (2 matches)

straight a's (1 match)

test drive (2 matches)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

volunteer (2 matches)

volunteers (1 match)

volunteering (4 matches)

abroad (5 matches)

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Choose My Path.

It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

I have the opportunity to volunteer abroad in China or to work full time and acquire a premium wage.

Choice 1 : Volunteering abroad.

Choice 2 : Working full time in Montreal.

College

Volunteering abroad.

I had the opportunity to volunteer abroad in China. I was a little skeptical. I didn't know a lot about this experience. I did a lot of research; to learn about the advantages and disadvantages that volunteering abroad can bring me in my life.

Choice 1 : Graduation at the College as a Physiotherapist.

Choice 2 : Staying in China.

Volunteer

Working full time in Montreal.

By staying in Montreal all summer, I could work full time as a server to earn and save a lot of money. Since I'm about the reach a year working there, I would have a premium wage and a higher salary.

Choice 1 : Accepting a higher position as a Manager.

Choice 2 : Finishing my last year of College.

Waitress

Graduation at the College as a Physiotherapist.

Important choice are coming in my life. Choose well, I could go pursue my studies at the University of Montreal or I can directly work on my field.

Choice 1 : Going to the University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : Work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital.

Graduation

Staying in China.

Volunteering abroad gave me a purpose in life. I learned a lot and opened my eyes about things I took for granted. Decided to dedicate my life in this cause with other volunteers and stayed in China to help people in needs. THE END.

Choice 1 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

Volunteer

Accepting a higher position as a Manager.

By accepting a Higher position as a Manager, I have to work full time and cannot pursue studies.

Choice 1 : Finishing my last year of College.

Choice 2 : Keep my position as a Manager.

manager

By finishing my last year of College, I have the opportunity to do an internship.

I did an internship of 6 weeks at the Hospital to learn the ropes on-the-job-training. I had to work for free. I felt overwhelmed, Internships are really though since you have a lot to learn and to put in practice. Once I learned the ropes in my test drive, I felt more confident that I really liked my field of work.

Choice 1 : Accepting a work position.

Internship

Going to the University of Montreal.

Going to the University requires a lot of studies and hard work to pull off good grades. It can either go good or bad.

Choice 1 : Having bad grades.

Choice 2 : Good grades and got my certificate.

University

Work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital.

Working as a Physiotherapist is great I had a really good training when I was on OJT.

Choice 1 : Got an accident because of an overweight patient.

Choice 2 : Sexual Harassment.

Hospital

Keep my position as a Manager.

By keeping my position of manager in restoration. I felt like my position at work was a dead-end job, and I become depressed. Had to reach HR to take a leave of absence. THE END.

Choice 1 : Accepting a higher position as a Manager.

Manager

Accepting a work position.

Two months after my internship was completed, I did not find any job, and I was really overwhelmed. The company where I did my internship where searching to hire new people. They contacted me and told me that if I was interested, the job could be mine since I already did a test drive with them. They told me I came in handy and that they would be happy to have me in the team.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

Physioterapist

Retirement.

I retired at the age of 68 years old. I receive a regular pension every month and already paid my mortgage. I also set aside money for this occasion in case I wouldn't get a pension. Now I'm traveling around the world. THE END.

Choice 1 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

Retirement

Having bad grades.

I was overwhelmed by all the work I had to do. My time management wasn't good. I always putted aside what I have to do. The University kicked me out I have to find something else to do. THE END.

Choice 1 : Going to the University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

Bad grades

Good grades and got my certificate.

I had good grades pulling off straight A's. Got My certificate, and now I can start my new adult life. THE END.

Choice 1 : Going to the University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

Good grades

Got an accident because of an overweight patient.

An overweight patient fell on me and broke my leg. I had to take a leave of absence and can't work for months THE END.

Choice 1 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

Choice 2 : Work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital.

Accident

Sexual Harassment.

A manager was being way too flirty and touching me for months. I decided to make a complaint. I was dreaded by the situation. He got fired. I can finally work in peace. THE END.

Choice 1 : Work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital.

Choice 2 : It was the summer break before I began my last year in College.

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