Manon's Life

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Word count: 1182

Choice count: 26

Section count: 18

Image count: 18

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis

Education : 75 matches

(choice, classes, college, continuing, degree, don, down, education, first, high school, knowledge, learn, school, semester, university, vision)

Sociology : 22 matches

(affect, average, countries, culture, depression, education, id, open, relationship, school)

Business : 18 matches

(business, company, down payment, gain, money, mortgage, paid, pay, payment, the amount)

Target Structure: (9 matches)

internship (5 matches)

mortgage (1 match)

overwhelmed (1 match)

set aside (1 match)

straight a's (2 matches)

thoroughly (1 match)

though (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

wages (1 match)

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Manon's Life

Me.

Hi, I'm Manon I just finished high school, and I have to make important choices that will affect the rest of my life. Ever since I was young I wanted to be a police officer or something similar. As the years passed, I became less and less sure about what I really want to do in my future. I had just finished high school and, I asked myself should I go to college and try a program that might interest me or should I start working as a waitress to make some money to set aside?

Choice 1 : Starting College.

Choice 2 : Working as a Waitress.

choice

Starting College.

Just finished my first semester at Ahuntsic College, and I already lost all my excitement. Even though I got straight A's, I was very overwhelmed and my mental health suffered. I'm debating if I should continue College get my degree or drop out.

Choice 1 : Continue getting my degree.

Choice 2 : Dropout.

overwhelmed

Working as a Waitress.

I met a really cute guy at work. He seems a little bit shy. Should I ask him out or should I wait until he makes the first move?

Choice 1 : Wait for him to make the first move.

Choice 2 : Make the first move.

love

Continue getting my degree.

I just graduated from college. Now, I have to decide whether I want to go to an expensive university in the United States and maybe get an internship or stay in Montreal near my family and friends and go to UQAM.

Choice 1 : Go to school in the States.

Choice 2 : Go to UQAM.

degree

Dropout.

College thoroughly defeated me. I was not prepared for the amount of work and stress. I need to become better at managing my time and stress. Hopefully I don't fall into a deep depression.

Choice 1 : Depression.

dropout

Depression.

I became depressed. I don't think I will be able to return to school. I might get a job instead.

Choice 1 : Start Again

depression

Go to school in the States.

I just finished university. I think it was a good idea to come to the States, it gave me a lot of opportunities. However, I'm not sure if I should start trying to find a job or continue my education and look for an internship.

Choice 1 : Continue school.

Choice 2 : Start working.

graduation

Start working.

I'm so happy I started working. It didn't take me long to learn the ins and out of the company, and I saved up some money the day I started working. I've been with the company my whole life, and I earn an above average wage. I will soon retire and look forward to spending some time with my family.

Choice 1 : relax

criminology

Continue school.

I decided to stay in school to learn more and to maximize my chances of getting my dream job. I was accepted into an internship that helped me to gain knowledge and experiences. The cons of this internship are that they are not paying me high enough wage for me to live on. I have a lot of debt and have to decide whether to find a job fast or to use the little bit of savings I have left.

Choice 1 : Use my savings.

Choice 2 : Start working.

school

Use my savings.

I'm very interested in continuing my internship, but I can't afford to live on the wages I'm being paid. However, I have no choice but to actually go to work.

Choice 1 : Start working.

no money

Go to UQAM.

I just finished and graduated from UQAM. During those years at this university, I was questioning myself a lot and try to answer the question, why do I feel trap. I came to the realization that maybe it was Montreal. I'm now asking myself, should I take a year off and travel the world or start working but in another country?

Choice 1 : Travel the world.

Choice 2 : Working in another country.

UQAM

Travel the world.

I decided to travel the world alone. I made the best choice by doing that because id never thought I would be visiting those country in my life. I fell in love with every hot country I visit. I decide to start working all around the world ans continue to travel and enjoy every minute of my life.

Choice 1 : Working in another country.

passport

Working in another country.

I decided to start working in another country where I can learn a new culture and a new vision of what my job can look like in another county. This change help me a lot with focusing more on myself and do things a want to do and accomplish without waiting for people to do it or push me to do it. I'm now going to spend the rest of my life, exploring new countries and work with all kind of cultures.

Choice 1 : Enjoy

map

Wait for him to make the first move.

I continue talking to this cute guy, but I was waiting for him to make the first move. I've been waiting for so long, and he didn't seem really interested to be in a relationship. I'm feeling sad and empty knowing that it didn't work out. I don't know how to feel, but I know that you made the wrong choice.

Choice 1 : Working as a Waitress.

sadness

Make the first move.

Ten years ago, I made the first move to show that cute guy I was working with that I was interested in him. He's really invested in cooking, and I'm still a waitress, but I started working in the bar, and develop a passion for coffee. As you can see, the years as past, and we're still together. We planned our future, and we have a common dream that we want to open a restaurant together that is going to include both of our passions. I saved money working as a waitress, but I can't decide if I should save more or go back to school and take Business classes for my future plan.

Choice 1 : Continue saving.

Choice 2 : Business classes.

heart

Business classes.

After three long years of Business school I graduated with straight A's. Now, my husband and I can realize our dream of opening a restaurant together. All my hard work has finally paid off.

Choice 1 : open a restaurant

restaurant

Continue saving.

I finally saved up some money. Now is the time to start looking for a house where we can start a family. My savings are enough for a down payment on a nice house. I'm super excited to start my new life.

Choice 1 : My new life.

realtor

My new life.

We found a nice house near the water, and I'm pregnant with my second child. I was able to pay off all of my bills and I only have a few years left on my mortgage. I'm happy with the choices I made.

Choice 1 : Ride off into the sunset

new life