My work.
A hypertext narrative by
Sendrick Jean-Charles
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Word count: 452
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Section count: 2
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Error count: 3
Field Related Analysis
Education : 21 matches
(ability, choice, class, college, don, first, homework, learning, management, school, teacher, training, vacation)Archaeology : 13 matches
(class, her, here, study, tell, type)Web development : 12 matches
(break, class, client, pass, type, write)Target Structure: (6 matches)
learning the ropes (1 match)
straight a's (1 match)
though (1 match)
time management (1 match)
corruption (2 matches)
corrupt (2 matches)
My work.
first week at my work.
I was not very good at school, but now with some time management I could have straight A's. In college, we need to though a lot for each class and its very useful. Personally, I study a lot, and I do my homework every time I finish my class because I can like relaxing at home and all that stuff. Everyone needs to do like me because like that we can all pass class with this strategies. In the summer break, I was with my cousin doing a training job. It was fun because we was just sat and watch people enter a vacation bus and swim. I am not very useful but when a kid dint find is parents I was here to help. My dad uses, to watch us some time to discover if I was liked this type of job, and for real it was good, but I can just do it in the summer break, so this is why live I work in a MacDonald, but I really don't want to work here anymore. While I was working at MacDonald, and before starting my real shift I need to have some training discovering. In other words I was learning the ropes because we need to know what to do in the floor because the client will not be happy if we mess up her order. In the beginning, it was difficult because you need to be fast and when you are a newcomer you don't the same ability of the other, but with the time and some help you would be good just like me right now. I don't know if I will stay in this job for long, but it was a really good first real job and experience.
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Things tat not cool that my work doesn't allowed.
For me, corruption is a very serious crime because I can not walk outside and have in my mind that a person likes a police officer is corrupt if a crime its happening in front of me because they are supposed to protect us. It's the way for a judge because they can let a serial killer outside because the corrupt them so when I sleep maybe he will come to my house to try to kill me. We all do corruption when we was younger like for example when you do not pass a class you try to tell your teacher if you give her something she will maybe let you pass her class.If some employee was doing corruption or things like that we probably not had all the money we deserve in our paycheck.
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