Hyper text narrative.

A hypertext narrative by

Mehdi Bouhouch

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Word count: 1319

Choice count: 20

Section count: 20

Image count: 19

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis

Education : 62 matches

(cegep, choice, course, diploma, first, general, graduation, high school, level, mark, motivation, phd, school, term, university)

Web development : 24 matches

(create, drop, feed, join, option, pass, path, stop, write)

Archaeology : 24 matches

(environment, her, here, lead, mark, narrative, study, tell, text)

Target Structure: (5 matches)

internship (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

though (1 match)

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Hyper text narrative.

Graduation.

It was the end of high school, and I passed all my course with a good general average. I wanted to study computer science, and I had the choice between two CEGEP.

Choice 1 : Graduation in Montmorency.

Choice 2 : Graduation Ahunstic.

graduation

Graduation in Montmorency.

I choose Montmorency because it was closer to my house and just needed to take one bus.After 3 years of studying and trying to get only straight A's, I finally managed to finish my Cegep with an r rating of 29.So, I decided to continue the university because I had a good general mark.

Choice 1 : University.

Montmorency

Graduation Ahunstic.

I chose Ahuntsic because all of my friends went there, and I wanted to be with them. But after 2 sessions, I realized that following my friends was bad ideas. Because I didn't do my work and I always laughed with them. I lost the motivation to stay in school, and I had the choice between doing a diploma in mechanics or working for my uncle's computer company.

Choice 1 : Drop out and do a dep in mechanics

Choice 2 : work for my uncle's computer company.

College Ahunstic

University.

I chose to go to university to continue my studies in computer science. The level is much higher than in Cegep, but I managed to finish my 3 years at university, during these three years, I lost a lot of friends because of my lack of time so, I said to myself, is it better to work now or to continue until the PhD?

Choice 1 : Work in a company.

Choice 2 : Continue to study until my PhD

university

Work in a company.

I decided to work in a company and with my baccalaureate and zero experience I did a job interview with Ubisoft, a video game company. They took me, and I was a video game programmer. My first day on the job wasn't going so badly, until I met Karen, she was making the environment very toxic and talking behind everyone's backs. I could either talk to her and work things out with her or tell my boss.

Choice 1 : Talk to her.

Choice 2 : talk to my boss

Ubisoft

Talk to her.

Finally, I decided to talk to her and tell her what was on my mind. To my surprise, she had reacted very well and she had stopped doing that because she didn't realize what she was doing. After 30 years I retired and married Karen, and we had 2 children.

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family

Talk to my boss.

I decided to talk to my boss, he left to talk to Karen and nothing can pass. He didn't take it seriously and so the environment continued to be toxic. During the rest of my career, I had to put up with it, I had bad days, but it didn't stop me from doing my job because I stayed at my business. I ended up getting married and having children and also having a good retirement.

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family

Rich.

I decided to continue the school, and I obtained my PhD with difficulty. My whole family was happy, with my PhD I managed to get into Apple and became a telephone programmer for them. Thanks to my diploma, I earned a lot of money, and I saved to do everything I wanted at the age of 45 years old.

Choice 1 : Quit at 45 and go aroud the world

Choice 2 : Quit at 45 and live in dubai with my family

rich man

Aroud the world.

I decided to leave at 45 and go around the world. Living peacefully and helping people around the world made me happy.

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private plane

Good life in Dubai.

Finally, I decided to live in Dubai with my family and lead the good life for the rest of my life.

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Dubai

DEP in mechanics.

I chose to do a DEP in mechanics, the duration of my DEP was two years, and I did an internship during my last year to gain experience.The internship was going well but since I didn't have my diploma yet there were people who underestimated me and thought that I was not doing my job well.After my, internship I received my diploma, I had two choices, either I start a garage with my best friend or I join a garage.

Choice 1 : Create a garage with my best friend

Choice 2 : Join a garage

Car

Safety option.

I decided to join a garage that was already known, I wanted to make a place for myself there, and it was less dangerous than creating a garage. But I noticed that there was a man named Hamid who kept looking at me while I was working. I had a choice to confront him or let it pass and wait for him to tell me something.

Choice 1 : Let it pass

Choice 2 : Confront him.

Risky path but worth.

I decided to create a garage with my best friend. It was risky, but it was worth it because we could have our own schedule. Our first year was difficult, but we did not give up and the following years worked well. After, 50 years I decided to retire to let my son take over the garage.

Choice 1 :

Car

Confront him.

I confronted him, I asked him why he keeps looking at me, and he replied that I was doing something wrong when I was installing tires on a car. He showed me the right way, and I thanked him, since that day Hamid and I became friends. I worked for this company the rest of my life to support my family.

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good choice

It was a bad choice?

Finally, I didn't go to confront him, and nothing happened. Over the years, I got into a bad habit of misplacing wheelies and my boss told me so. Despite this, I stayed, and I had no choice but to work until the age of 70 to pay for my granddaughter's school.

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Boss

The only choice?

I decided to work for my uncle's small company.I decided to work for my uncle's small company. It was the only choice I had, even though I didn't earn much money, I found the love of my life in Hamida. Fortunately she had continued these studies to become a doctor because I did not earn enough to meet our needs. So, I had the choice to continue working for my uncle or to stop and take care of the house.

Choice 1 : Continue to work for my uncle

Choice 2 : Stop working and stay at home

Only choice

Happy with no job?

I stopped working and took care of the house and our 5 children. Even if I didn't have to work, I was happy with my family and that's what counted the most in the end.

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Happy

Regret?

I continued to work for my uncle, but I regret, my situation with him is only deteriorating, I just had two last solutions, to leave on bad terms with him despite the fact that he gave me the chance to work with him Or stay and carry on hoping they'll let me run the company.

Choice 1 : Leave on bad term

Choice 2 : Continue and hope they'll let me run the company

Regret?

Loser?

I decided to leave work, I can't stand my uncle anymore, luckily my wife was there to feed our children. I ended my life without working, and I stayed at home to take care of the children.

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Sad

I own a company???

I resisted and stayed with my uncle, he finally decided to leave me his company and I ended up with my uncle's company for the rest of my life.

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