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Word count: 1177

Choice count: 36

Section count: 27

Image count: 27

Error count: 21

Field Related Analysis

Education : 43 matches

(choice, college, diagnostic, first, further, private, report, skills, university)

Nursing : 20 matches

(accident, alpha, arm, b.d., body, clinic, complication, contact, doctor, hr, imaging)

Archaeology : 20 matches

(arm, her, here, hide, needle, text, thing)

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Alpha.

You have to make choices for a 22-year-old man named Elijah. He studied and graduated from Diagnostic Imaging at Ahuntsic College to become a diagnostic ultrasound technician. He has the choice to go to McGill University or just start his new job at IRM Sud-Ouest - MRI & Ultrasound Clinic.

Choice 1 : Go to McGill University

Choice 2 : Start your career at a private clinic

An ultrasound technician

Welcome to IRM Sud-Ouest - MRI and Ultrasound Clinic!

Elijah got hired into a private clinic in Montreal, Canada & he is excited to meet his new coworkers. Now he has the choice to work on Monday or Tuesday.

Choice 1 : Work Monday

Choice 2 : Work Tuesday

IRM Sud-Ouest MRI Centre Google Maps

Welcome to McGill University.

Elijah has been accepted into McGill University & now lives in a dorm. However, he is with a girl... Should he report it to the ones in charge or should he go on with his studies & pretend that it's normal?

Choice 1 : Report it.

McGill University Health Centre

He reported it.

He reports it to those in charge, so they will try to fix the situation. But the person responsible says that there are no more rooms available until next year. Should he leave the university or wait?

Choice 1 : TO LEAVEEEEE

Choice 2 : To wait

Elijah arguing with the responsible.

HE LEFT.

Elijah decides that it is not so worth it to go to uni, so he fills a job application to work in Montreal, Canada at IRM Sud-Ouest - MRI and Ultrasound Clinic, since it's his dream job... He needs to give his resume to the HR & they will contact him as soon as they can.

Choice 1 : No way...

Checking his own resume

Wait -_-.

Now he waits until there's further notice...

Choice 1 : Woah what happened?!

Elijah frustrated

He decided to leave...

Elijah couldn't sleep for weeks since he was with this unknown girl, so he decides to leave & starts working at his dream job instead. He gets accepted & now they ask him if he wants to work either on Monday or Tuesday.

Choice 1 : Work Monday

Choice 2 : Work Tuesday

Elijah struggling to sleep

Monday, the worst day...

He is really excited, so he wants to work on Monday to meet his new coworkers! But, turns out that he...

Choice 1 : Click here to know what happened.

Elijah flabbergasted

Tuesday, the second worst day...

Elijah is not really excited to work, so he decides to work on Tuesday to start things slowly.

Choice 1 : 6 months later...

Elijah not excited at all

A JOB FULL OF WOMEN.

Elijah, flabbergasted of this situation but isn't showing it, introduces himself to his new female coworkers. But there's one that seems interesting... Should he go talk to her or should he just stay with the 4 coworkers that won't leave him alone?

Choice 1 : He should go talk to her

Choice 2 : He should stay with the coworkers

A WORK FULL OF WOMEN

It's the roommate!

Elijah receives a message saying that they want to talk to him. Turns out it's his old roommate at McGill University! Her name is Sarah & she has been having an interest on him ever since they started to share the dorm together, but she never talked to him because she thought it was weird.

Choice 1 : Answer her text

Choice 2 : Delete the message & ignore it

Elijah's screen

Goes & talks to her.

He goes & introduces himself to her. What should he say? (She's very pretty).

Choice 1 : He handled it so well

Choice 2 : HE DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY HE STUTTERED SO BADDDDD...

Maaliyah

He stayed with the coworkers.

Elijah is too afraid so, he stays with the 4 coworkers.

Choice 1 : 6 months later...

the 4 coworkers

6 months later...

Elijah is currently doing an MRI to one of is favorites patient. But looks like there's something going on with his dear friend...

Choice 1 : No way...

Him & his favourite patient

Read & answered her text.

Turns out she texted him on accident, so then she blocks him & he doesn't really mind. He just pretended nothing happened & continued working in the clinic...

Choice 1 : 6 months later...

Elijah nervous AS H*LL

Got weirded out & ignored it.

After deleting the message, Elijah kept doing his favourite thing, which was doing MRI scans for his patients & Fluoroscopy scans. He just pretended like nothing happened :D.

Choice 1 : The End

Elijah right now...

Crazy results.

Elijah found out that his patient has elusive tuberculous meningitis with rare neurological complication of longitudinally extensive transverse myelitis. He can't do anything about it either can his doctor, they told the patient he has only 3 months left to live.

Choice 1 : Noooo :(

The scan's results

Say goodbye to him :(.

His favourite patient passed away at the age of 45 due to elusive tuberculous meningitis with rare neurological complication of longitudinally extensive transverse myelitis. They caught it too late.

Choice 1 : Elijah mourning

ALL AROUND ME ARE FAMILIAR FACES ;(

RIP Mr.Jim.

It was Elijah's first time he ever mourned for a patient, usually they can't get attached to patient, but he was a sweetheart.

Choice 1 : The End

Him mourning

Uh...

Elijah didn't know what to say so he just said hi & introduced himself, he started being weird & the girl felt so cringed about it.

Choice 1 : Just die from the inside

Choice 2 : Elijah catches up on his flirting atempt

Elijah had one job.

Oh noo...

Elijah lost it & just left the room embarrassed to talk to the woman, he couldn't talk to her, so he just left & never talked to her ever again.

Choice 1 : The End

Elijah running

Elijah the RIZZMAN.

He started flirting with Maaliyah & it looked like she blushed at his compliments... He has crazy RIZZ (slang for "skills in charming a woman").

Choice 1 : He has a future with her

W RIZZ MA BOA

Interesting...

Elijah & Maaliyah did all the scans together, they always spent time together & they gave the patients their medicine, they last together for a very long time... But.

Choice 1 : What the...

Elijah & Maaliyah

OHOH...

Maaliyah caught Elijah cheating on her with another coworker, but it doesn't seem what it looks like...

Choice 1 : There's no way...

Elijah trying to get away from the coworker

Impossible!!

Elijah tried to fix things, but it looked like Maaliyah did not want to talk to him. Suddenly, she started running, so he did too. When he tried to grab her arm, it hurt her since his grasp was painful. She decided quickly to take a needle & she stabbed him through the neck. He collapsed on the floor & fractured his skull...

Choice 1 : Hide the body

Choice 2 : Escape & change her name....

DEAD

HIDE THE BODY.

Maaliyah had experience with killing people she loved, so she quickly hid the body in the clinic's huge dumpster & she escaped...

Choice 1 : Lisa

From Maaliyah to Lisa.

Maaliyah decided to leave & changed her name, she moved to another country & she decided to start a new life, but who will be the next victim? Elijah wasn't first nor the last one she was going to kill...

Choice 1 : The End

Changing her passport