Who is the Murderer?

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Kelly-Ann Fryer

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Word count: 1268

Choice count: 37

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis

Education : 55 matches

(choice, college, course, don, first, graduate, graduation, learn, semester, skills, social, university, vacation)

Law : 21 matches

(book, case, contract, family, financial, house, murder, office)

Paramedics : 19 matches

(calls, patient, patients, practice, skills, volunteer)

Target Structure: (6 matches)

pension (8 matches)

purpose (2 matches)

retirement (4 matches)

volunteer (5 matches)

volunteering (4 matches)

abroad (6 matches)

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Who is the Murderer?

Let's Start From the Beginning.

My name is Kelly-Ann and I want to be a psychologist. This is my final semester in college. I have been accepted in two universities. However, I don't know which one to choose.

Choice 1 : Go to Brown University

Choice 2 : Go to Havard University

Choice 3 : Go to Yale University

University of Havard

I Graduate from University!

My graduation is coming faster than I expected. I will soon be able to be a psychologist for real. However, I am not sure what city I should live in.

Choice 1 : Live in Las Vegas.

Choice 2 : Live in Hollywood.

Choice 3 : Live in Greece

Greece

Should I Volunteer Abroad?

Before I start my career as a psychologist, I am wondering if I should volunteer abroad.

Choice 1 : Volunteer abroad.

Choice 2 : Do not volunteer abroad.

Volunteering abroad

The Best Destination for Volunteering.

I will go volunteering abroad this summer, I just do not know where yet. Ukraine or Haïti?

Choice 1 : Haïti

Choice 2 : Ukraine

World map

My Trip to Ukraine.

I just came back from volunteering in Ukraine. It was an amazing experience. My purpose at first was to help people in need and to get experience. I came back with not only experience but also new friends. In Ukraine, there were a lot of people in need, it was really sad to see how they live. Now that I'm home, I don't know if I should either enjoy the last 2 weeks of my summer or start to prepare for my future job.

Choice 1 : Enjoying the rest of the summer.

Choice 2 : Start to prepare for my job.

Ukraine's flag

My Trip to Haiti.

I just came back from volunteering in Haiti. It was an amazing experience. My purpose at first was to help people in need and to get experience. I came back with not only experience but also new friends. In Haiti, even if the people were having social and financial difficulties, they were still smiling and remained positive. Kids played everywhere outside, it was good to see their optimism. Now that I'm home, I don't know if I should enjoy the last 2 weeks of my summer or start to prepare for my new job.

Choice 1 : Enjoying the rest of the summer.

Choice 2 : Start to prepare for my job.

Ukraine's flag

Decided to Stay at Home.

I chose not to go volunteer abroad. I will stay at home to focus on my future job. My contract only starts after the summer. So, during the summer I will prepare myself for it while enjoying the outdoors at home.

Choice 1 : Clean my office.

Choice 2 : Go buy new furniture for my office.

House

It Is Schedule Time!

Now that I have cleaned my office, I must take a look at my schedule, so I won't forget anything.

Choice 1 : Make some calls to confirm my patient's appointments.

Choice 2 : Hope that no one forgets their appointments.

Agenda

I Am Now Ready!

Now that I have new furniture, I am ready to meet my patients. I only start next week. I am not sure what to do during my last week off.

Choice 1 : Go see my family before next week.

Choice 2 : Keep focusing on my work even if I am ready.

Office

Time to Make Some Calls.

After making some calls, I am glad to say that I am officially starting my career next week. My first patient is coming to my office Monday afternoon. I am so excited to put my skills into practice.

Choice 1 : Enjoy the last week with my family.

Choice 2 : Continue to prepare my office for my patients.

Telephone

Hoping They Will Show Up.

I do not think it was necessary to make confirmation calls. If they do not show up on time, I will call them.

Choice 1 : Meet my first patient.

Calendar

It Is Family Time!

For the last week of my summer vacation, I went to see my family. It was really fun. I haven't seen them since midsummer.

Choice 1 : Meet my first patient.

Family

Meeting My First Patient.

I just met my first patient, when I saw his name I did not believe that it was him. It was Michael Jackson. He confessed to a murder that he was hiding for three years now. I do not know what to do. Should I tell the police or not? If I do, my career could end right away.

Choice 1 : Talk to the police.

Choice 2 : Do not talk to the police.

Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson Is the Murderer!

This morning, I went to the police station to reveal what I knew about Michael Jackson's murders. Of course, they did not believe me, he is one of the most famous singers in the world. In this case, I will book another session with him, so I can learn more about what he did.

Choice 1 : Have another session with Michael Jackson.

Police station

Let's Go for Session #2.

Here I am, session number 2 with the famous singer. Today's session was even more unbelievable that the first one. He confessed to three other murders and told me all the details.Those murders have been unsolved for over 20 years and now he has just confessed to them. I thought twice this time before going to the police, instead of panicking, I told him that it would be better for him to talk to the police himself.

Choice 1 : Michael Jackson goes to jail with a life sentence.

Choice 2 : Michael Jackson goes to jail for 10 years.

Michael Jackson singing.

The Happy Ending Is Coming.

The day after, the police officers came to my house to apologize for not believing me when I tried to talk to them. They also booked appointments with me and I became popular as a psychologist. Nobody knows that I tried to reveal Michael Jackson's terrible secret.

Choice 1 : Continue my carrer alone.

Choice 2 : Open a psychologist's office.

Jail

The End of My Career.

I continued to work alone as a psychologist. I worked for a lot of people. I continued to be Michael Jackson's psychologist even in jail. After 37 years of working as a psychologist, I am retiring.

Choice 1 : Have a pension.

Choice 2 : Do not have a pension.

Home office

Let's Work With a Team.

I opened my own psychologist's office. I really enjoyed the many years of working with my colleagues. Now it is time for retirement.

Choice 1 : Have a pension.

Choice 2 : Do not have a pension.

Psychology group

I Got a Pension!

I am so happy. I got a pension for my retirement. I can enjoy my retirement and do whatever I want without worrying about the money!

Choice 1 : Buy a cabin for me and my family.

Money icon

I Did Not Get a Pension.

I did not get a pension. However, I did put a lot of money in a RRSP during my career, so I could still enjoy my retirement. I always wanted to buy myself a cabin to share with my family. That is what I am going to do.

Choice 1 : Buy a cabin for my family and me.

RRSP savings

I Am Happier than Ever.

I just bought myself a cabin to share with my family. They were so happy when I told them about it. I am so grateful for my career and the life I lived so far. I am looking forward to this new chapter in my life.

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Cabin