The weird Doctor's Story

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Karim Tewfik

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Word count: 1491

Choice count: 30

Section count: 19

Image count: 19

Error count: 28

Field Related Analysis

Education : 40 matches

(cegep, choice, class, classes, don, down, field, first, head, learn, learning, market, national, reader, school, trainee)

Web development : 39 matches

(access, call, class, collection, feed, field, name, path, true)

Paramedics : 37 matches

(doctor, doctors, drug, health, heart, hospital, medical, medicine, nurse, nurses, patient, patients, trainee, truck, volunteer)

Target Structure: (26 matches)

dreaded (1 match)

drudgery (1 match)

flirtation (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

more often (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

set aside (2 matches)

sexual harassment (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

bribes (1 match)

theft (1 match)

assets (2 matches)

volunteer (1 match)

volunteering (1 match)

abroad (2 matches)

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The weird Doctor's Story

Just finish CEGEP.

Hi reader! My name is Stew Pedro and I just finish my DEC in natural sciences. The field of medicine has interested me since I was eight years old. Right now, the health system is really in need of nurses that with only a DEC, I could start in a medical clinic by tomorrow, but deep inside, I want to be a doctor.

Choice 1 : Go to university

Choice 2 : Start as a male nurse

Diploma

Medicine school.

The program started off difficult but throughout the year I pulled it off and got straight A's. However, this class about heart hypertension was the hardest one yet. Towards the end of the year, I finished all of my classes with an average of 80%. I got these two opportunities between going to volunteer abroad or to start practicing medicine.

Choice 1 : Go volunteering abroad

Choice 2 : Start practicing medicine

Vitruve

New to the work market.

Now, I work in a medical clinic because they are so much in need that they can hire you even if you only have a DEC in natural sciences. You know, my dream is to be a doctor. Now I can either apply in a hospital to be closer to the real doctors, or I can try to learn by spying the doctors.

Choice 1 : Go work in an hospital

Choice 2 : Learn by watching doctors

Medical clinic

Senegal, I'm coming!

The purpose of this journey was mainly to help in a clinic but that was a dead-end for me. When I left for the city, at this job with a premium wage, I saw this pretty girl walking by and wanted to go talk to her but at the same time, someone offered me to go see a safari. I didn't know what to chose, but I could also stay in at my house.

Choice 1 : Stay in Senegal

Choice 2 : Try a safari

Choice 3 : Fall in love with a girl

Doctor volunteering in Senegal

A dream comes true.

One day at work, I saw some office politics among doctors trying to make more money, I could get sucked up with them. However, There's also this new drug that I heard of more often than not. Should I try it? Maybe, I should just stay on the legal path.

Choice 1 : continue peacefully to help people

Choice 2 : Try fentanyl

Choice 3 : Try to make more money

Doctor in action

I can help.

This morning I started my OJT as a trainee to learn the ins-and-outs. Two weeks later, I received my first wage, which was less than I expected for a nurse. I got called out to Daniel's office, or I could go work in the psychiatric aisle. If not any of those, I could go see the old lady in room 235.

Choice 1 : Go help in the psychiatric ward

Choice 2 : Kiss the old lady of room 235

Choice 3 : Go talk to Daniel privately

Nurse in action

Just trying to learn.

I am closer than I've never been to doctors. Every day, I spy the doctors to learn medicine. Right now, I am seeing a lot of patients waiting after the doctors. I can maybe go inside and heal people, I can go see what are the doctors doing, or I can take some picture for my collection.

Choice 1 : Go spy the doctor's bathroom

Choice 2 : Try to help the doctors

Choice 3 : Start taking pictures

I guy spying

Love to help people.

After many years, I finally had enough money set aside and payed off my house mortgage so decided to settle down in Senegal. I filled out all of my pension details with my lawyer and finally retire. Congratulations! You have finished. If you want, you can go back and try a new path.

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

retirement

The danger of Africa!

It's a nice safari! But I am not seeing any rhinoceros. I don't know where they are. Oh! I am hearing a sound. Why is everything starting to shake? The rhinoceros are there!! Oh no! You chose the wrong path. The rhinoceros killed you. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Rhinoceros

Should be tested.

It is the woman of my life. I love her so much! We've been together for seven months. But this morning, she came to me to tell me that I have AIDS. Oh crap! After hearing the news, I retired to enjoy fully the rest of my life. Oh no! You chose the wrong path. Next time, use a condom! Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Virus detected

What a great job.

After many years doing a drudgery work, the drive of work caught up on me. I decided it was time to use all the money I set aside and go travel the world for my retirement. Congratulations! You have finished! If you want, you can go back and try a new path.

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Retirement

Easy access.

I should've never tried fentanyl. I am now stuck with a very intense addiction. The family of a young boy that I operated weeks ago are suing me because he died in the operation. It wasn't my fault! I took a bigger dose of fentanyl than usual right before. I'm going to jail for the rest of my life. Oh no! You chose the wrong path. Next time, don't touch drugs. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Syringe

The danger of money.

I decided to go for it. I want more money, even if it's through bribes, theft or steeling assets. A year later, I got caught by the FBI, and they froze all of my assets and I'm going to jail for the rest of my life. Oh no! You chose the wrong path of life. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Handcuffed

Someone is crazy!

In the psychiatric path, I have to feed the patient. When I start giving miss Kolender her food, she said that I was the reincarnation of Satan. She started screaming at the top of her lungs. Miss Kolender, had a knife in her hand, and started stabbing me! Please, help me! Too late! You chose the wrong path. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Knife

There's no age for love.

I am now retired at only 27 years old. I married the old lady. She is the richest lady in the country! We are now happier than ever! *whispering* She will die soon! Congratulations! You have finished! If you want, you can go back and try a new path.

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Gold bar

Leave me alone Daniel!

I walked into Daniel's office, and he was acting with flirtation. He acted in misconduct, which made me very uncomfortable since I've never experienced sexual harassment before. After that, a dreaded to come into work every day because of him, so I left the hospital to become a truck driver. Oh no! You chose the wrong path, seems like you're not following your dreams. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Truck driver

I saw you!

By spying the doctors, I saw them stealing a lot of drugs! I immediately call the ATF. They were searching for the head of the biggest drugs cartel. They gave me the title of national hero, and now, I need no money, everyone lets me have what I want because I am their hero. Congratulations! You have finished! If you want, you can go back and try a new path.

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Superhero

Finally getting a job.

Because I was doing a good job with the patient, they hired me as a doctor. All of my years of spying and learning illegally finally paid! I am now happy with the job of my dream! Congratulations! You have finished! If you want, you can go back and try a new path.

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Hired

I did nothing wrong, I swear.

I hurt no one by taking pictures. I am just curious, and I want to learn medicine. It is my only way to study at home some techniques. Now, I am banned from the doctor's order. I will finish my life as a janitor like my mom used to said to me. Oh no! You chose the wrong path, seems like you're not following your dreams. Start again and try a new path!

Choice 1 : Go back to try a new path

Janitor