The stock market

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Jacob Langlois

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Word count: 1131

Choice count: 20

Section count: 16

Image count: 16

Error count: 78

Field Related Analysis

Education : 69 matches

(bullying, choice, college, colleges, continuing, don, exam, field, field of study, grade, head, learn, lectures, market, project, reader, school, teach, test, training, university)

Archaeology : 22 matches

(here, keep, market, study, tell, thing)

Web development : 14 matches

(collection, create, field, parent, path, session, test, write)

Target Structure: (8 matches)

hr (4 matches)

income (1 match)

more often (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

pension (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (3 matches)

set aside (3 matches)

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The stock market

The life in college.

I am now in college of Saint-Hyacinthe and i am doing very well. Every thing is perfect, I know where I'm going after college. I want to test my capacities and go to university after my session. I managed to make a lot of friends in my years of college and I will forever be in touch with those people. I have some friends that will go to McGill University and none that goes to University Laval. But University Laval is my favorite and I don't know what to chose because Qébuec is far from montréal. So i won't be able to be with my friends and familly more often.

Choice 1 : University Laval

Choice 2 : University McGill

Cegep of Saint-Hyacinthe

University Laval.

I decided to go to University Laval for my personal choice. I spent more time studying and I'm not seeing my friends and familly very often but it's ok because i concentrate on my work. I Learn all the ropes of my field of study that I chose. It is the stock market. My purpose is to become a stockbroker but to work either for a compagnie or my self as an individual.

Choice 1 : Working with a companie.

Choice 2 : Work individually.

University Laval

University McGill.

I finally went to McGill University and I love it. I get to spent more time with my friends and familly when I have free time. The only things that I dont like here, is the trafic to go to school and the city of Montreal was not as i expected. For tonight I am uncertain about about what I should do? Do I go out with my friends or do I study for my next exam.

Choice 1 : Go with friends.

Choice 2 : Study at home.

McGill University

Working with a companie.

I finished my studies at university, and I searched for a job with companies. After I found one, they offered me an on-the-job-training to see my capacities to work as a team and to learn the basics as a stockbroker. I did very well, and I started my journey with my new colleges. Even if I liked my job, someone in the company was making rumors about me, and it was destroying my reputation. So I'm not sure what to do. I can keep it a secret or tell it to the HR.

Choice 1 : Keep the secret.

Choice 2 : Tell the HR.

Work individually.

After University, even if I did all those years of study, I decided to go on my own and work individually. It worked so well, I am know very whealty with my income. I can now do what ever I want but I still have two choices. I could retire or create a program to teach people on how to be sucsessful in life.

Choice 1 : Retired.

Choice 2 : Create a program.

income

Go with friends.

I decided to go with my friends and have. We went to a bar for drinks but later that night, on our way home, my friends and I got in an accident. I lost the use of my right leg and totally regret that choice I made that day. I had two choices in my head after this incident and I was thinking about starting a new path and maybe give lectures in school about dinking and driving or going to the casino and gamble all my money because I was depressed.

Choice 1 : Give lectures in school.

Choice 2 : Go gamble.

Go with friends

Study at home.

I decided to stay home and study for my exam. It really paid off because I got a good grade and I was proud of me. I finished my days in university and went for a job.

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Keep the secret.

I kept the secret and never told no one. I continued living the life I didn't really want and was not treaten well at my job but I didn't leave because needed money and didn't see where else to go. So I finished my days in this company that I didn't liked and I finnally retired with a familly but I wasn't very happy. I had a good set aside for my retirement and was able to travel with my wife. Iv'e had a good and normal life.

Choice 1 : The end

Tell the HR.

So I decided to tell the HR what my problems with the employees bullying me was and every thing was well arranged. My boss fired them and after a couple of years, I got many promotions and I was very happy. I founded a familly and I retired with a wealthy set aside for my future project. I lived an incredible life and lived my old days happy.

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Retired

Retired.

I was very rich and didn't have any pension for my future but I had good set aside. So I decided to retire and live the life I always wanted. Travel all around the world have nice cars and be with my family.

Choice 1 : The life in college.

Retired

Create a program.

I decided to create a program online for people who wanted to know how I was sucsessful and how they can do it their self too. It was completely a personal affair and I really enjoyed it. One day I was confused on what car to buy next for my collection. It was either a Lamborgini or a Mclaren.

Choice 1 : Bought a Lamborgini.

Choice 2 : Bought a Mclaren.

Give lectures in school.

So I decided to do lectures in school after my accident. I tought it was more important to spred the consequence of being innocent and driving wihle drunk. I don't regret not continuing my studies to become a stockbroker and instead really loved giving awarness to young adlut.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

Lectures

Go gamble.

Sadly I decided to gamble all of my money at the casino and end up losing every thing. I was very depress and was forced to go lived with my parent. My career was over and I lived the rest of my short life sad.

Choice 1 : The life in college.

Depressed

Bought a Lamborghini.

I finally bought my dream car and a couple of years later I retired from doing my program and I just lived a good rest of life.

Choice 1 : The life in college.

Lamborghini

Bought a Mclaren.

I finally bought my dream car! couple of weeks later, I went for a drive and I was speeding. I ended up diying.

Choice 1 : The life in college.

Mclaren

Retirement.

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