The School of Martial Arts.

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Word count: 1805

Choice count: 49

Section count: 30

Image count: 30

Error count: 13

Field Related Analysis

Education : 124 matches

(choice, classes, coach, exam, failed, first, head, knowledge, learn, learned, lessons, performance, primary school, primer, reader, school, teach, teacher, test, trainee, training)

Dance : 39 matches

(attitude, back, ball, close, face, front, kick, martial, martial arts, out, performance, run, running, side, step, turn)

Archaeology : 35 matches

(close, comes, competition, control, her, here, hide, kick, martial, punch, rescue, round, tell, theory)

Target Structure: (7 matches)

come in handy (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

foot in the door (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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The School of Martial Arts.

I am in primer school.

I am in primary school in Jolivent. My parent chose this school for me because it's close to my house. I have two friends, my friends are playing soccer. On my way to play with them, I see the cool kid with his friends playing hide-and-seek.

Choice 1 : I play soccer with my friend.

Choice 2 : I go play hide-and-seek with the cool kid.

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I play soccer with my friend.

I have fun playing soccer with your friend. When I come back from school, I tell my parents I want to start a sport.

Choice 1 : I choose to play soccer.

Choice 2 : I choose to do karate.

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I go play hide-and-seek with the cool kid.

I ask the cool kid if I can play with them at hide-and-seek. The kid replies "No". He starts insulting me. I feel bad and...

Choice 1 : I punch the cool kid in the face and start running.

Choice 2 : I start crying, and I go see my friends.

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I choose to play soccer.

I play soccer every Saturday, I ask my parents...

Choice 1 : I want to do another sport.

Choice 2 : I want to do more soccer and do some tournaments.

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I choose to do karate.

I start karate, I enter the dojo for the first time to put a foot in the door to see if I would like it, and I love it. My trainee told me that I was good and that I should start doing competitions.

Choice 1 : I decide to start participating in a competition.

Choice 2 : I decide not to start participating in a competition.

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I punch the cool kid in the face and start running.

They start running after me to get revenge, I go see...

Choice 1 : I go see a teacher.

Choice 2 : I run in the direction of my friend.

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I want to do another sport.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : I choose to do karate.

Choice 2 : I choose to play Football.

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I start crying, and I go see my friends.

My friends see me crying, and they come and ask me if I am fine. I said yes and ask them if I can play soccer with them.

Choice 1 : I play soccer with my friend.

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I go see a teacher.

The teacher sees me being chased, she put aside our work and comes to tell the groups of friends to stop. They explained the situation to the teacher. The teacher was shocked. She told me to see the director. The director tells my parent the story and told them that I should do karate to learn how to control myself. My parents think it is a good idea.

Choice 1 : I choose to do karate.

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I run in the direction of my friend.

My friends come to my rescue. We started a big fight in the schoolyards and other kids that were not involved at the beginning started to fight for fun. When a supervisor sees the fight, he came to stop us. My friends and I got kicked out of school for this and my parents were mad at me.

Choice 1 : I am in primer school.

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I want to do more soccer and do some tournaments.

The tournaments are in the summer, but during that time I am at my chalet. So, I am obligated to do something else.

Choice 1 : I want to do another sport.

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I decide to start participating in a competition.

It was my turn to shine, I was in front of the judges. I went on the tatami to do my kata. It was not good, my kata was all mixed up in my head. I was punching and kicking in the wrong direction. I was supposed to do a Round-house in-step kick, but I did I front-ball kick instead. But the two others with me were more mixed up than me. So, I finish first and because of that, I was able to do another time my kata in the great champions.

Choice 1 : I choose to practice my front two knuckles plexus and my kata before the great champions.

Choice 2 : I didn't practice my kata before the great champions.

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I choose to practice my front two knuckles plexus and my kata before the great champions.

I went on the tatami for the second time, I was prepared. I did the best pinun 1 that I could, I had a good stance and a great attitude. I finish second, the first one was a brown belt with more experience than me. I was proud of myself. I know that my little training was going to come in handy. After the competition, my Senseï invented me for my blue belt exam.

Choice 1 : I practice for my exam.

Choice 2 : I didn't practice for my exam.

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I didn't practice my kata before the great champions.

I went on the tatami for the second time, I was not prepared, and I know it. I try to do my best, but my kata was not good and my attitude was bad. I was really angry. After the competition, I ask my parent to stop karate.

Choice 1 : I am in primer school.

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I choose to play Football.

I start playing football, but it was not fun because I was the shortest and slowest on the team. We were obligated to play even if it rains we need to play. I hate to play football when it rains.

Choice 1 : I choose to do karate.

Choice 2 : I go to a tournament of football with my team.

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I go to a tournament of football with my team.

It was hot outside. It was my first game against others. The coach knew I was not very good, so he put me on the branch for the first round. When it was my turn, I was scared. The adversary was taller than me. When the round started, someone runs after me to push me onto the ground. I start running and screaming at the same time, and after two seconds the person reaches me and pushes me. The coach kicks me out of the team after seeing my performance.

Choice 1 : I choose to do karate.

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I decide not to start participating in a competition.

I continued karate for two years, it was time for me do to my blue belt.

Choice 1 : I practice for my exam.

Choice 2 : I didn't practice for my exam.

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I practice for my exam.

My exam was really hard, but I succeeded, and I receive my blue belt.

Choice 1 : I continue karate and work hard to have your black belt.

Choice 2 : I want to start practicing tricking on the side.

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I didn't practice for my exam.

I started the test with 100 push-ups because I failed my theory exam. After three hours, I was feeling dizzy. When we started the fight, I was not ready for this because I didn't practice before the exam. So, the fight starts and the enemy push me two times in the face. I fell like a pancake on the ground. I failed the tests, and I didn't get my blue belt. I was frustrated and I decide to...

Choice 1 : I practice for my exam.

Choice 2 : To quite karate.

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To quit karate.

I choose to do another sport.

Choice 1 : I choose to play soccer.

Choice 2 : I choose to play Football.

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I continue karate and work hard to have your black belt.

To have my black belt, my Senseï told me that I needed to assist her during the karate classes for the children.

Choice 1 : I started assisting my teacher in her karate classes.

Choice 2 : I want to start practicing tricking on the side.

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I want to start practicing tricking on the side.

I learn how to do back flips, front flip and other flips. I learned how to kick in the air, and it is very cool. I wanted to teach what I learn in tricking.

Choice 1 : I started assisting my teacher in our karate classes.

Choice 2 : I continue tricking to get better and stronger.

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I started assisting my teacher in her karate classes.

My Senseï liked the help I gave her, she was proud of what I was doing for the karate. She finally invited me to my black belt.

Choice 1 : I am going to my black belt exam.

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I continue tricking to get better and stronger.

I was doing bigger and higher tricks until the day I tried a double backflip and fell on my neck. I was paralyzed and I couldn't move.

Choice 1 : I am in primer school.

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I am going to my black belt exam.

I passed my exam, and I received my new belt. Because I was a black belt seito, I can give karate classes alone.

Choice 1 : I start working as a martial Art teacher.

Choice 2 : I start working to Sail.

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I start working as a martial Art teacher.

After a lot of karate classes, I started to get good at it. My Senseï wanted to retire. She decides to give me the dojo.

Choice 1 : I accept the offer and my new teacher was Kyoshi, the founder of the karate I was practicing.

Choice 2 : I accept the offer, but I didn't get a new teacher.

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I start working to Sail.

After one year of working there! I realized it was a dead-end job, and I didn't like to do overtime. So, I decided to return to karate.

Choice 1 : I start working as a martial Art teacher.

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I accept the offer and my new teacher was Kyoshi, the founder of the karate I was practicing.

With the knowledge I receive from Kyoshi, I was able to continue my passion. I was making a good wage for living. I closed the dojo when I was 60 years old to give it to one of my prodigies.

Choice 1 : I am in primer school.

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I accept the offer, but I didn't get a new teacher.

I liked to give karate classes, but I miss my karate lessons, I started to lose interest in karate, and I decide...

Choice 1 : I started to have karate lessons from Kyoshi.

Choice 2 : To close the dojo.

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To close the dojo.

I close my dojo and I became a sports teacher.

Choice 1 : I am in primer school.

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