Make a choice

A hypertext narrative by

Annie cloutier

Created with

The Virtual Writing Tutor Grammar Checker


Word count: 257

Choice count: 4

Section count: 3

Image count: 3

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 6 matches (blood, House, section, short title, street, title)

Dance : 6 matches (Back, Face, Front, Out, Run, Through)

Computer Science : 5 matches (choice, name, reader, Section, table)

Target Structure:


Make a choice

Go to the police or don't say a word.

This is a story about a woman name Nicole and her childhood with a horrible and alcoholic father name Robert. When she was only five years old, she found a cat and her babies on the street. She decided to bright them back her house and when her father found out he took an ax and beheaded the mother and her kittens right in front of Nicole. Sadly, that is only the beginning. Robert beated, humiliated and sexually abused his daughters through all of they childhood.

Choice 1 : Run and go see the police!

Choice 2 : Stay at home and don't make a sound.

The spaghetti sauce.

One day, she was making spaghetti sauce for dinner and Robert decided to hit her in the face and broke her nose. She bleeding so bad, there was blood all over the sauce. She went in to the bathroom to clean herself up. When she got back, the dinner was on the table and Robert made her eat her plate covered in blood. She was so scared that she ate the hole plate with her blood.

Choice 1 : Stay at the table and keep bleeding all over the spaghetti sauce.

Choice 2 : Run in the bathroom and go clean your self up. After go back to the dinner table.

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

The End.