The young lady.

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NoƩmie Pinel

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Word count: 2265

Choice count: 54

Section count: 34

Image count: 34

Error count: 172

Field Related Analysis:

Nursing : 8 matches (professional, bur, conflict, environment, supervisor, tow, trust, patience)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 8 matches (answer, fact, fine, HM, living, office, trust, young)

Archaeology : 8 matches (dating, environment, HER, here, keep, Re, SAM, tell)

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The young lady.

ETS of Montreal

Where it all started!

Her name is Tyna. This is her first day in the Human Resources department at the ETS of Montreal. As soon as Tyna walked in a girl named Samantha welcomes her and tell her that she is the one responsible to do Tyna's trainning.

Choice 1 : She was getting along with Samantha.

Choice 2 : She was not getting long with Samantha.

The co-workers

She was getting along with Samantha.

Samantha is explaining everything to Tyna, but Samantha explains so fast that Tyna didn't have time to understand everything. After Samantha was done explaining all of the tasks to Tyna, she decided to introduce her to every co-workers.

Choice 1 : Everybody was nice to Tyna and she finds one of her co-workers really cute.

Choice 2 : Everything went well and everyone was nice.

Samantha and Tyna fithing

She was not getting long with Samantha.

Samantha was really rude to Tyna. Samantha had no patience and was always screaming at Tyna.

Choice 1 : One of the co-workers, Alec came to help Tyna.

Choice 2 : Everybody was laughing at Tyna because she didn't understood.

Alec

Everybody was nice to Tyna and she finds one of her co-workers really cute.

So Tyna asked who he was and Samantha told her it was there boss. He is really occupied and he didn't even said hi to Tyna.

Choice 1 : Oh! don't bother this is our boss he is really occupied nowadays, but between you and me he's good looking no?

Choice 2 : Don't bother he is really occupied.

Alec

Everything went well and everyone was nice.

Everything went well and everyone was nice to Tyna, but there was one co-worker that was not really kind he did not say hi to Tyna. She was wondering who he was to Samantha and she said...

Choice 1 : Oh! don't bother this is our boss he is really occupied nowadays, but between you and me he's good looking no?

Choice 2 : Don't bother he is really occupied.

Alec

One of the co-workers, Alec came to help Tyna.

Alec, one of the co-workers came to help Tyna because he thought Samantha did not explain well every tasks. Tyna found Alec very handsome and she asked if it was possible for him to stay a little over time to answer all of her questions.

Choice 1 : He said yes!

Choice 2 : He said no!

Alec

Everybody was laughing at Tyna because she didn't understood.

Everybody started to laugh and not take Tyna seriously for this job, but one of her co-workers, Alec, came to help Tyna because he thought Samantha did not explain well every tasks. Tyna found Alec very handsome and she asked if it was possible for him to stay a little over time to answer all of her questions.

Choice 1 : He said yes!

Choice 2 : He said no!

Alec

Oh! don't bother this is our boss he is really occupied nowadays, but between you and me he's good looking no?

Of course Tyna found him cute, but She didn't wanna tell Samantha because she was shy. Tyna wanted to meet him, not only because she found him cute. But because in her HM classes at University her teacher told her it is really important to meet all of your co-workers on the first day.

Choice 1 : Tyna decided to go and introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy.

Choice 2 : She didn't went to introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy because she was to shy.

Don't bother he is really occupied.

Tyna went to introduce herself to Alec the cute guy and when she arrived to his office she realized that Alec was her boss. This stressed her out even more.

Choice 1 : Tyna decided to go and introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy.

Choice 2 : She didn't went to introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy because she was to shy.

Alec

He said yes!

Tyna was really excited to work with Alec on the over time hours. During the work time she realized he was not a co-worker, but her boss. She became really shy. By the end of the work he told her if you have anymore questions don't be shy to ask me I'll be please to help you.

Choice 1 : By the and of the week she had questions to ask Alec so she went to his office.

Choice 2 : She had more questions but she was to shy to ask Alec so she asked Samantha.

Alec

He said no!

Alec said no because he already had plans, but he told Tyna the could meet the day after if she wants!

Choice 1 : She said yes!

Alec

Tyna decided to go and introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy.

Tyna went to introduce herself to Alec the cute guy and when she arrived to his office she realized that Alec was her boss. This stressed her out even more.

Choice 1 : She decided to go into his office.

Choice 2 : She ran away.

Alec

She didn't went to introduce herself to Alec, the cute guy because she was to shy.

Tyna was to shy to go and it really stressed her out. On the second day Tyna told herself that is it time to go and...

Choice 1 : She decided to go into his office.

Choice 2 : She ran away.

Alec

She decided to go into his office.

Tyna knocked on the door and heard Alec saying come in! She came in and Alec was please to see her. He asked her how things where and Tyna said fine but she had some questions to ask him. He said sure meet me around 4h30 pm in the after hours.

Choice 1 : She said yes!

Alec

She ran away.

She was way to shy to go in his office and introduce herself. When Tyna was on her way to leave she heard her name so she turned around and guess what? It was Alec calling her from his office door.

Choice 1 : She decided to go into his office.

Alec

She said yes!

When Tyna arrived to his office Alec had his coat on so Tyna asked him if it was still ok to meet. He said of course grab your coat we are going to starbucks.

Choice 1 : She was really excited so she grabbed her coat and followed him.

Alec

She was really excited so she grabbed her coat and followed him.

When the arrived they started talking about work and how is it going with everyone. Tyna asked tow or three questions before Alec asked more about her. Tyna was really shy and she wanted to be professional but at the same time she wanted to get to know him too. The time passed by and Alec proposed to to meet another time this week at starbucks and Tyna said yes, of cours. Alec proposed...

Choice 1 : Friday after hours.

Choice 2 : Friday during the day.

Tyna

Friday after hours.

On Friday after hours, Tyna met Alec at Starbucks. Alec asked her how her week went. Tyna said really good, she also said that she likes her co-workers. Alec started to look at Tyna in a certain way. Tyna asked him what's wrong and he said...

Choice 1 : Nothing

Choice 2 : Nothing, you are just really cute

Alec

Friday during the day.

When Tyna arrived to Alec's office he told her to go grab her coat because they are going to Starbucks. Tyna asked him if it was ok to do this because it was during business hours and Alec respond by asking Tyna in a funny way who is the boss here? When they arrived at Starbucks, Alec asked her how her week went. Tyna said really good, she also said that she likes her co-workers. Alec started to look at Tyna in a certain way. Tyna asked him what's wrong and he said...

Choice 1 : Nothing.

Choice 2 : Nothing, you are just really cute.

Tyna

Nothing.

Are you sure? Because you are looking at me in a different way right now.

Choice 1 : Nothing, you are just really cute.

Tyna

Nothing, you are just really cute.

Tyna was so pleased to hear Alec say that. She became really shy and she said...

Choice 1 : I kind of like you too.

Choice 2 : Are you sure about yourself?

Tyna

I kind of like you too.

But Tyna stopped him before he kisses her because she knows her and Alec can be fired by the big boss if he knows that they are dating. Alec replies with...

Choice 1 : Don't worry we will keep it as a secret, ok?

Choice 2 : You're right I shouldn't told you that, I'm sorry.

Tyna

Are you sure about yourself?

And than Alec said That he was sure about himself and he really liked Tyna. After that Tyna respond with...

Choice 1 : I kind of like you too.

Tyna

Don't worry we will keep it as a secret, ok?

Alec and Tyna decided to keep it as a secret for now because it could create some conflict in the work environment.

Choice 1 : Tyna was agreeing with the idea.

Tyna

You're right I shouldn't told you that, I'm sorry.

And than Tyna respond to Alec by saying that she liked him too.

Choice 1 : Alec kissed Tyna

c

Alec kissed Tyna.

At this moment Tyna became really shy but she was really happy at the same time. It was now time for Tyna and Alec to go back to the office. When Tyna arrived at work Samantha Was wondering what happened because Tyna looked red and she had a little smile on her face, so Samantha asked Tyna...

Choice 1 : Oh! don't worry Sam, I really like this job that's all!

Choice 2 : Samantha, me and Alec kissed!

c

Tyna was agreeing with the idea.

It was now time for Tyna and Alec to go back to the office. When Tyna arrived at work Samantha Was wondering what happened because Tyna looked red and she had a little smile on her face, so Samantha asked Tyna...

Choice 1 : Oh! don't worry Sam, I really like this job that's all!

c

Oh! don't worry Sam, I really like this job that's all!

Tyna really wanted to tell Samantha about her and Alec, but she was scared that Sam would of go tell the big boss and her and Alec would get fired. Tyna was so happy about her little secret so it was stronger than her so Tyna told Sam.

Choice 1 : Samantha, me and Alec kissed!

c

Samantha, me and Alec kissed!

Samantha was really excited for Tyna and Alec. Tyna told her to not tell anyone not even Alec because he asked her to not tell anyone. Tyna really trust Samantha.

Choice 1 : One week later

Choice 2 : Two weeks later.

c

One week later.

After one week Tyna and Alec were madly in love. Alec was so nice to her, she even got a promotion as a supervisor job. Tyna was really happy and everybody was happy for her. Bur there was one of her co-workers, Alice. She seems jealous because she also applied for this job. At the end of the meeting everyone got back to work but Tyna stayed in Alec's office and he asked Tyna...

Choice 1 : Do you want to meet me at my place tonight?

Choice 2 : Do you want to meet me in the parking after work? We will go to my place after.

c

Two weeks later.

Two weeks later, Tyna and Alec were madly in love. Alec was so nice to her, she even got a promotion as a supervisor job. Tyna was really happy and everybody was happy for her. Bur there was one of her co-workers, Alice. She seems jealous because she also applied for this job. At the end of the meeting everyone got back to work but Tyna stayed in Alec's office and he asked Tyna...

Choice 1 : Do you want to meet me at my place tonight?

Choice 2 : Do you want to meet me in the parking after work? We will go to my place after.

c

Do you want to meet me at my place tonight?

Tyna arrived at his place around 8 pm. She called him when she arrived, he came downstairs at the door to bring her in his penthouse. On their way there, they bumped into Alice, the co-worker that was mad at Tyna for getting the job she wanted. Alice was really intrigued by the fact that Tyna was there with Alec, so Alice asked them.

Choice 1 : Tyna said that she is now living in the building.

c

Do you want to meet me in the parking after work? We will go to my place after.

Tyna got in Alec's car to go to his place. When they got there, they were on their way to go to Alec's penthouse. They bumped into Alice, the co-worker that was mad at Tyna for getting the job she wanted. Alice was really intrigued by the fact that Tyna was there with Alec, so Alice asked them.

Choice 1 : Tyna said that she is now living in the building.

c

Tyna said that she is now living in the building.

By chance, Alice believed them. Alice left and now Alec and Tyna could finally be alone.

Write a choice here.

The End.