Welcome to the future

A hypertext narrative by

Rami Dib

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Word count: 807

Choice count: 24

Section count: 14

Image count: 14

Error count: 14

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 19 matches (School, choice, class, classes, college, don, exam, failed, field, field of study, first, grade, grades, motivation, project, school, teacher, university, vacation)

Tourism : 9 matches (Contract, Marketing, Program, brand, contract, field, marketing, program, vacation)

Psychology : 9 matches (class, drive, field, focus, love, motivation, need, remember, risk)

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Welcome to the future

College

College or music?

I woke up this morning to go to school, and I asked myself if I was doing the right thing. I love music, I would like to focus on music all my life, but with school its really difficult and I don't see myself working for someone else.

Choice 1 : Go to class this morning.

Choice 2 : Quit school and focus on my music.

work

Go to class this morning.

I decided to go to class, I would love to make music all my life, but I don't want to take the risk, it's better to have a secured job. This morning I have an exam and I forgot to study, I don`t know what to do !

Choice 1 : Copy on my friend during the exam.

Choice 2 : Try to remember some things.

Class

Copy on my friend during the exam.

I was copying on my friend exam, and the teacher caught me ! she gave me zero, and now I have to repeat this class next year, cause I failed.

Choice 1 : Reapeat the class.

Choice 2 : Quit school and focus on my music.

Class

Reapeat the class.

I decided to repeat the class, and this time I studied for my exam and past the Cours ! Now I have to decide at which University I want to go. I am. studying in business and the best university for this field of study is in France, but Montreal University also have this program.

Choice 1 : University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : France University.

Montreal

University of Montreal.

I decided to go to the University of Montreal. I made a lot of new friends that study in business too, but Mike one of my new friends, asked me if I want to join his project, he wants to create his own clothing brand, but for this project I need to quit school.

Choice 1 : Stay in school and focus on my grades.

Choice 2 : Join Mike's project.

Stay in school and focus on my grades.

I decided to stay in school and focus on my grades, and I got straight A in all my classes, so my teacher told me to stay after class because she got something to offer me. After class my teacher told me that she have a friend that own a business and he need a new marketing manager. So she asked me if I want the job and i said yes!

Choice 1 : Try again.

music

Quit school and focus on my music.

I quit school to focus on my music. I'm not having much luck, no one seems to be interested in my work. I am getting very discouraged.

Choice 1 : Go back to school.

Choice 2 : Focus on my music no matter what.

Go back to school.

I went back to school but I don't like my program at all. Studying is exhausting because I have no motivation. I think that I need to focus on my music.

Choice 1 : Quit school and focus on my music.

Choice 2 : Focus on my grade.

Try to remember some things.

I decided to stay in school and focus on my grades, and I got straight A in all my classes, so my teacher told me to stay after class because she got something to offer me. After class my teacher told me that she have a friend that own a business and he need a new marketing manager. So she asked me if I want the job. Now I need to go to university.

Choice 1 : University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : France University.

France

France University.

I decided to go to France University. I passed all my classes with good grades. Now its time to work as a marketing manager !

Choice 1 : Try again.

Clothing brand

Join Mike's project.

I decided to quit school and join Mike in his project ! after 3 years our brand is now worth 4 millions dollars ! I live in a beautiful penthouse, and I drive a Lamborghini.

Choice 1 : Waste my money.

Choice 2 : Invest my money.

Music

Focus on my music no matter what.

I Focused on my music I didn't give up, and I finally signed my first contract with universal music for 10 millions dollars! It was hard but everything is possible.

Choice 1 : Waste my money.

Choice 2 : Invest my money.

Vacation

Invest my money.

I decided to invest my money and now I have 77 millions dollars. I think that I am going to take some vacation.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Waste my money.

I decided to waste all my money and now I have nothing. I have to find a job.

Choice 1 : Try again.

The End.