A long path

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Michée Masiala

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Word count: 506

Choice count: 11

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 9

Field Related Analysis

Education : 46 matches

(choice, classes, college, down, failed, first, general, grade, graduate, high school, learn, motivation, school, social, university)

Dance : 10 matches

(break, out, run, side, social)

Law : 7 matches

(family, general)

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A long path

Last year of high school.

I just finished my last year of high school, and I am about to graduate from Cavelier-De Lasalle. This year was tough, I did not get admitted to the program I wanted, and I have some family problems on the side.

Choice 1 : Taking a break.

Choice 2 : You apply to College Ahuntsic.

Cavelier-de Lasalle High school

You apply to College Ahuntsic.

You have decided to apply to Social Science at Ahuntsic. You find out you can take the classes you failed at high school again and apply to the program you wanted first while completing the main classes.

Choice 1 : University at the door.

College Ahuntsic

University at the door.

You have made it. After a long run, you graduated from Ahuntsic College with a decent grade. The program you chose has opened many doors for your future.

Choice 1 : HEC Montreal.

Choice 2 : Moving out.

an happy person

Taking a break.

You take a break. You settle all of your problems. You now have a part-time job and decide to move out. You feel mentally better, and you have more motivation to finish what you started. You retake the classes you failed in high school.

Choice 1 : University at the door.

Taking a break

HEC Montreal.

You got accepted to HEC Montreal. Despite being able to study at your dream university, you feel empty. You have neglected your mental health all those years, and you could not have grown as a person. You feel like all those choices were not for you but only because your family told you to do them. Those were someone else's dreams, not yours.

Choice 1 : Leaving life.

HEC Montreal university

Leaving life.

You have always felt used all your life. People told you to do this because they thought it would be better for you. You do not have a lot of choices right now and decide to just deal with it.

Choice 1 : Solve family problem.

Sad

Moving out.

You decide to settle down with your part-time job. School in general was too much for you. You now have a girlfriend, an apartment, and a kid. What do you want more?

Choice 1 : Go to university anyway.

Choice 2 : Settle down.

Family

Settle down.

Having a kid is not easy, your job does not pay that much, and you have always been someone who likes to learn. Despite having a family you feel like an idiot who knows nothing and did not experience that much. You are wondering how far you could have gone if you stayed in school.

Choice 1 : Go to university anyway.

Family problem

Solve family problem.

Despite you not being able to get along with your family first. You find a way to resolve personal problems with them. Those years were hard for everyone, and you feel better mentally.

Write a choice here.

Family problem solved

Go to university anyway.

You found a good university to apply to. Despite it is not being very well-known you feel better mentally and manage to get a decent job.

Write a choice here.

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