The future of Antoine!!

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Field Related Analysis

Education : 65 matches

(academy, cat, choice, college, first, head, national, private, reader, scholarship, technology, university)

Police-Technology : 28 matches

(arrest, drug, jail, police, police academy, police officer, prison, right, spvm, sq)

Law : 21 matches

(accident, arrest, case, criminology, delivery, drugs, family, house, living, police officer, private)

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The future of Antoine!!

The future of Antoine life...

Right now I am studying at Thetford Mine. Next year I will need to do some choice because I want to be a police officer. But for that, I need to do a Police Technology. I will need to choose the college I am going too. This is the outcome of my life.

Choice 1 : Ellis college.

Choice 2 : Start dealing cocaine.

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Ellis college.

I will go to Ellis College. It is a private college. It will be a dispensary. I will need to take loan and scholarship.

Choice 1 : Go in an apartment with my girlfriend.

Choice 2 : Make the trip every day.

ellis college

Make the trip every day.

After I get accepted at Ellis College I couldn't found an apartment, so I decide to do the travel ever day for the first year.

Choice 1 : After, the first years I found an apartment.

Choice 2 : I got into a car accident.

Start dealing cocaine.

I will go live to Montreal and, I will start dealing cocaine and all the drug I can deal.

Choice 1 : Get caught?

Choice 2 : Never get caught?

dealer

Go in an apartment with my girlfriend.

I will go in an apartment with my girlfriend. We will buy one cat that we will name Theo. We will be happy, and we will start the live or couple live.

Choice 1 : Complete my 3 year with a success.

Choice 2 : She broke up with me...

appartement

Complete my 3 year with a success.

I will complete my 3 years of Police Technology with success. I will be happy with my girlfriend.

Choice 1 : Go to the National Police Acadamy at Nicolet.

Choice 2 : Work for Garda Security.

diplome

She broke up with me...

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : I get depressed.

Choice 2 : I drop everything, and I became a pizza delivery man.

broken heart

Go to the National Police Acadamy at Nicolet.

I will go to Nicolet at the National Police Academy. I will make it easy, and I will have my license.

Choice 1 : SPVM.

Choice 2 : SQ Victoriaville.

nicolet.

Work for Garda Security.

I will go work for Garda as a security guard.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

Choice 2 : Get shot during a hold up.

garda

SPVM.

After the police academy I choose to go work for the SPVM. The police service of Montreal.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

spvm

SQ Victoriaville.

After I could go work for the SQ. The Quebec Security. I will get my job at Victoriaville as a patrolman.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

sq

Get shot during a hold up.

After 1 year of service, I will get shot and died during a hold up...

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

mort

I get depressed.

After she broke up with me, I get really depressed. I can't see the end of the tunnel, so I decide to commit suicide...

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

depression

I drop everything, and I became a pizza delivery man.

After she broke up with me, I decide that I dropped everything, and I finished my life as a pizza delivery man.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

pizza

Get caught?

After 3 years of dealing drugs, I will get caught by the DEA who set up a case at my name.

Choice 1 : go to prison.

Choice 2 : Shot Them.

dea

Never get caught?

I started dealing drugs. I make a lot, but when I mean a lot, I mean lots of money. You know what I am saying? ;) After 20 years in the business, I decide to go live to Monaco. I bought some expensive cars and a big villa near the ocean. I am living my best life and nobody can arrest me.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

villa

Go to prison.

When they get to my house to arrest me, I let them handcuff myself, and I go to jail for 15 years.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

jail

Shot Them.

When the DEA get to my house I knew if they arrest me I will go to jail. But I didn't want to go to jail. So, I decide that I take my AK-47 and I decided to shoot them. They shot back, and they hit me 3 times in the thorax and 2 times in the head... I died.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

gun

After, the first years I found an apartment.

After one year of studying and traveling I found and apartment. My girlfriend and I decide we were moving in next year.

Choice 1 : Go to the National Police Acadamy at Nicolet.

Choice 2 : Go to university after my Technology.

appartement

I got into a car accident.

After 5 months on traveling morning and night, I get really accustom to the road. I know it through and through. But when winter came I forget to change my tire for the first snow. I was going back to my girlfriend's house after a long day... My car started to spine because it hit a spot of ice, and I make some flip over. I died in this car accident leaving behind me, my better half...

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

crash

Go to university after my Technology.

After my 3 years of technology I decide to go to university, to study the criminology.

Choice 1 : Start working as a criminologist.

university

Start working as a criminologist.

After, my University, I start working as a criminologist. I live in Quebec City with my girlfriend.

Write a choice here.

crime

Make baby?

We decide that we are going to make a family. We had 3 boys and 1 girl. We named them Oliver, Ethan, Jackson, and Julia. We are a beautiful family. We are very happy that everyone is in good health and no one as any problem.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

famille

No, baby but more money?

We decide that we weren't going to have baby. We keep all our money, and we travel a lot, and we are really happy together.

Choice 1 : The future of Antoine life...

money