The terrible story.

A hypertext narrative by

Zachary Kirk

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Word count: 686

Choice count: 14

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Education : 35 matches

(choice, don, exam, grade, learn, management, students, taught, teach, technology, unit)

Archaeology : 31 matches

(bed, community, dog, her, here, technology, tell, text, unit)

Accounting : 10 matches

(mortgage, pension, retirement)

Target Structure: (15 matches)

foot in the door (1 match)

intern (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

maddening (1 match)

mortgage (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

overtime (3 matches)

pension (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

retirement (8 matches)

straight a's (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

volunteer (1 match)

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The terrible story.

Work?

Tomorrow is an important day because I have a chemistry exam. I need to have a good grade in this exam for entering the police Technology next year. My friend just text me! She hosts a party to her house! I kinda want here to become my girlfriend... I don't know if I should go to the party or stay home to be in great shape tomorrow.

Choice 1 : Go to the party.

Choice 2 : Stay home and go to bed.

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Is she the love of my life?

I missed my exam! Well, at least I spent the night with Bianca! I really feel something between us. I think I love her, Thanks to this party, now I know what true love is. Should I tell her that she is the love of my life?

Choice 1 : Tell her that you love her!

Choice 2 : Invite her to another date!

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Police Technology.

Because of my straight A's, I got accepted in police Technology! I can have a full time job and do overtime for fun and be rich!. In witch city should I work?

Choice 1 : Work in Saint-Jérôme.

Choice 2 : Work in Laval.

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The worst decision of my life.

She said that I was just a friend, and I should get a life for thinking that we could be more than friends. I want her back! Years later, she is my friend again... I still love her. I have my own apartment, my own dog and my steady job. Should I tell her that I love her again?

Choice 1 : She is the one.

Choice 2 : Don't tell her.

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She is the one.

She said that she loved me too after a couple of other dates! We are now married and have a mortgage on our own house! Her parents are rich, so we can help to community without thinking about money! We volunteer a lot. We have good time management to do all those things in our life. We are old now, and we think that we have done our help to society. I retire now.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

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So much work!

I don't like it that much here. I give a lot of tickets and patrol 6 hours a day. I can't do overtime because we are too many officers here. My wage is good, and I live near my job. I made 30 years in the patrol, and I am happy. I retire today and have fun with my grandchildren.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

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I am where I want to be!

Here, everybody loves me. I found my spot in the canine unit. My best friend is Gus, I spend every day with him. He is a German Shepherd. I have a premium wage here, and I don't do overtime! There is no office politics here because there is no office. I started her as an intern to learn the ropes, and now I am my own boss. I am thinking of my retirement now that I am old. I don't know if I should teach after my career.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

Choice 2 : Teaching.

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Retirement.

It was maddening how I wanted to see my family! Now I am retired, so I can see them. Tomorrow, we have a trip to Disney World. I did not get taught how to be a grand dad, so this is OJT for me. I am happy with my life!

Write a choice here.

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Teaching.

I already taught in my past, so I had a foot in the door when I started teach to Police Technology students. After five years of teaching, I have more incomes that I could imagine! To me, my pension is enough, so I will spend my money with the one I love.

Choice 1 : Retirement.

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Normal life.

I am now old. I worked at Walmart for 35 years, and I will retire tomorrow. For luck in my retirement, I will buy a lottery ticket. Oh! My god, I won the lottery! I am now rich!

Choice 1 : Retirement.

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