Jana's Story

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Jana Abbas

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Word count: 1214

Choice count: 31

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis

Education : 113 matches

(bachelor's degree, bilingual, choice, classes, classmates, college, course, degree, diploma, don, exam, failed, first, high school, management, mark, master's degree, national, school, semester, social, technology, training, university)

Law : 22 matches

(access, bar, children, complaint, family, government, guilty, harassment, master, minimum wage, misconduct, option, police officer)

Food and catering : 21 matches

(bar, happy, option, pastry, rest, restaurant, shop, tonight)

Target Structure: (14 matches)

dead-end job (3 matches)

internship (1 match)

invaluable (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

perpetrator (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

pulled off (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

sexual harassment (2 matches)

straight a's (1 match)

thoroughly (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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Jana's Story

High School.

It is my last year of high school, and I am feeling very anxious. All of my classmates already know what to do next, but I'm still undecided. I can't decide which program to choose. I don't know if I should continue my studies and go to college or, if I should work in a dead-end job instead. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to college.

Choice 2 : Work in a dead-end job.

High School

Go to college.

I would like to go to college, but I can't decide which program to choose. I'm divided between Social Sciences or Police Technology. If I choose the first option, I will finish the program in two years, but I will have to go to university. If I choose the second option, I will finish the technique in three years, but I will have to go to the National Police School (Nicolet). What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go in Social Sciences.

Choice 2 : Go in Police Technology.

College picture

Work in a Dead-End Job.

I started working at Dollarama, and earn the minimum wage. I don't really like this job because one of my colleagues told me recently that the manager did sexual harassment on an employee. Should I quit this job and start doing pastry training.

Choice 1 : Quit and start doing pastry training.

Choice 2 : Stay.

Dollorama

Go in Social Sciences.

I decided to go in Social Sciences and my parents are very happy about this decision. Now that I have made this decision, I have to choose which college I will go to. I live in Laval and the closest college is Montmorency College. All of my friends will go to Ahuntsic College, and it will be very nice if we go to the same school, so we can study together. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Ahuntsic College.

Choice 2 : Montmorency College.

Social Sciences teacher

Go in Police Technology.

I decided to go in Police Technology. I really like it, but I have a lot of busy classes. I don't have good time management, and I have my final exam tomorrow. If I don't pass it, I couldn't go to Nicolet. My friends suggested I go to the bar tonight to take my mind off things. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Study for my exam.

Choice 2 : Go to the bar.

Police car

Ahuntsic College.

I decided to go to Ahuntsic College. During my two years of study, I got straight A's in most classes. I would like to go to university, but I'm really tired of school. That's why I would also like to take a break before going to university. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Take a break.

Ahuntsic College

Montmorency College.

I decided to go to Montmorency College and my friends stopped talking to me because of this choice. I guess they weren't real friends. I fell into depression and quit school. I would go back to school when I feel better.

Choice 1 : Start again.

Montmorency College

Quit and Start Doing Pastry Training.

I started my pastry training and I love it! I made lots of new friends, and I was offered an internship in Spain. I would love to go there, but I will also like to stay in Canada. Should I leave my zone of confidence and go to Spain?

Choice 1 : Go to Spain.

Choice 2 : Stay in Canada.

pastries

Stay.

I continued to work at Dollarama my manager Hugo tried to flirt with me, but when he saw that I was not receptive, he got mad, and flirted with my colleague Sarah. Hugo is a perpetrator, and he is recognized by the authorities because he did sexual harassment on his friend’s sister ten years ago. Perpetrators should not be allowed to work at Dollarama, but he was an exception. I decided to file a complaint against him, and he was found guilty because of his misconduct. I am now a supervisor and plan to stay working here for the rest of my life even though I have a low salary.

Choice 1 : Start again.

justice

Study for My Exam.

I studied for my exam and I pulled off a perfect mark. I did well not to go to the bar with my friends. Now, I am certain of being accepted at Nicolet and of realizing my greatest dream of becoming a police officer. I studied thoroughly to get there, and I'm very happy.

Choice 1 : Start again.

studying

Go to the Bar.

I went to the bar and failed my exam. I'm devastated and I hate my friends. Now I have to start the course again and reapply to Nicolet next semester.

Choice 1 : Start again.

devasted

Take a Break.

I took a break and I no longer want to start school again. I find that school is useless, and I prefer to stay at home until I find a job.

Choice 1 : Start again.

sleeping

Go to university.

I decided to go to university in Accounting Science. Now, my purpose is to get my bachelor's degree, and I can't wait to get my invaluable diploma. Should I do a master's degree after my bachelor's degree or start working with my bachelor's degree?

Choice 1 : Master's degree.

Choice 2 : Work with my bachelor’s degree.

diploma

Go to Spain.

I decided to go to Spain and I met one of the greatest pastry chefs in the world! He offered me to work with him, but I would have to move to Spain. I will miss my family and my friends a lot if I move and besides, I don't know anyone in Spain. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Move to Spain.

Choice 2 : Return to Canada.

Spain's flag

Stay in Canada.

I decided to stay in Canada. I finished my training, and I am now working in a very famous pastry shop.

Choice 1 : Start again.

pastry chef

Master's Degree.

I continued my studies and finally got my master's degree. I feel accomplished and my efforts have been worth it. I am now teaching accounting at university and earning a very good salary.

Choice 1 : Start again.

teacher

Work With My Bachelor’s Degree.

I started working with the Government of Canada as an accountant. I am very happy in my new job and I have access to a premium wage because I am bilingual.

Choice 1 : Start again.

accountant

Move to Spain.

I moved to Spain, and I'm fulfilled in my new job. I met a man in Madrid, and he invited me to the restaurant tonight. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go with him.

Choice 2 : Don't go with him.

restaurant

Return to Canada.

I returned to Canada and I made the wrong choice. I should have stayed in Spain because I can't find a good job here.

Choice 1 : Start again.

devasted person

Go With Him.

I decided to go with him. Five years later, we are married and have two children together. I feel accomplished, and I couldn't have dreamed better.

Choice 1 : Start again.

happy family

Don't Go With Him.

I decided not to go with. I'm still single, and I'm going to end my life alone.

Choice 1 : Start again.

single person