My life

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Mira Makarious

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Word count: 1120

Choice count: 54

Section count: 32

Image count: 32

Error count: 20

Field Related Analysis

Education : 91 matches

(choice, college, don, field, graduate, reader, school, social, technology, university)

Law : 24 matches

(accident, blood, condition, criminology, driver, driving, house, improvement, living, month, option)

Paramedics : 23 matches

(accident, ambulance, care, doctor, doctors, lung, medication, wound)

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My life

The story of my life.

After, graduating from Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

Choice 1 : Go to ENPQ.

Choice 2 : Choosing Universities.

college ahuntsic

ENPQ.

After 3 months of waiting, I was finally accepted into the school.

Choice 1 : Make an accident on the way to the school.

Choice 2 : I arrive safely.

Choosing Universities.

I have a difficult choice in front of me, my parents want me to choose UQAM, but I want to go study far from home and go to ULAVAL.

Choice 1 : UQAM.

Choice 2 : ULAVAL.

On the way to school something happens.

We always hear: ''It's too good to be true.''

Choice 1 : Make an accident on the way to the school.

Choice 2 : I arrive safely at the destination.

car accident

Make an accident on the way to the school.

While driving at night to school, a drunk driver hit me at 180 km/hour. I tried to swerve it but it didn't help.

Choice 1 : I was in a bad accident on the way to school.

Choice 2 : I've been in a coma for the 2 following weeks of my accident.

I was in a bad accident on the way to school.

50 bones are fractured and a punctured lung.

Choice 1 : I die of my punctured lung.

Choice 2 : The doctor tells me that in exactly 1 month I will be good to run again.

I've been in a coma for the 2 following weeks of my accident.

I am in a coma after the drunk driver hit me and the doctors don't know if I will ever wake up.

Choice 1 : I miraculously wake up the day after, like nothing ever happened.

Choice 2 : My parents decided to unplug me 3 weeks after because there was no improvement, it's only getting worse.

I die of my punctured lung.

My wound was too big, I died in the ambulance after loosing too much blood.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning

The doctor tells me that in exactly 1 month I will be good to run again.

I have a special condition where my bones heal faster than others, and the punctured lung is treated with care.

Choice 1 : I apply again to the ENPQ.

Choice 2 : I decide to go to university.

I miraculously wake up the day after, like nothing ever happened.

Doctors said that 1/100 000 people wakes up from a coma and that I am lucky.

Choice 1 : I apply again to the ENPQ.

Choice 2 : Problems start to appear again a few days after.

My parents decided to unplug me 3 weeks after because there was no improvement, it's only getting worse.

There's no hope that I wake up.

Choice 1 : Start from the beginning.

I apply again to the ENPQ.

Here we go again...

Choice 1 : I graduate from ENPQ.

Choice 2 : I get kicked out from the school.

Problems start to appear again a few days after.

I thought I was finally okay.

Choice 1 : Doctors give me medication for it, and it becomes normal.

Choice 2 : I decide that this career isn't for me and I change it.

Doctors give me medication for it, and it becomes normal.

He tells me that it was from stress and anxiety after my accident, and by taking those medications I should be alright.

Choice 1 : The medications makes me more anxious.

Choice 2 : It helps me go through everything.

I decide that this career isn't for me.

After all, we've been through, I think it's ideal I just change fields.

Choice 1 : I get a job at Super C.

Choice 2 : I decide to to university.

The medications makes me more anxious.

Those medications made me so anxious, that I develop severe social anxiety. I end up not getting out of the house. I eventually die from eating canned food.

Choice 1 : Start from the beginning.

It helps me go through everything.

I become better.

Choice 1 : I apply again to the ENPQ.

Choice 2 : I decide to go to university.

I get a job at Super C.

I end up working in Super C for the rest of my life, and becomes the CEO of the company in Canada.

Choice 1 : Start from the beginning.

I decide to go to university.

Finally, I think it's better if I choose a safer option.

Choice 1 : Choosing Universities.

I graduate from ENPQ.

I am so happy because I graduated and I can finally achieve my dream.

Choice 1 : I become a succesful cop.

Choice 2 : I don't find police municipalities that accept me.

I get kicked out from the school.

I wasn't doing my bed in the morning, so the school kicked me out.

Choice 1 : I get a job at Super C.

Choice 2 : I decide to go to university.

I become a succesful cop.

From this point, my life only went up.

Choice 1 : I get promoted.

I don't find police municipalities that accept me.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : I get a job at Super C.

Choice 2 : I decide to go to university.

I arrive safely.

Thanking life!

Choice 1 : I graduate from ENPQ.

Choice 2 : I decide to go to university.

UQAM.

I do a baccalaureate in criminology.

Choice 1 : Graduate from University.

Choice 2 : Drop out of University.

ULAVAL.

I do a baccalaureate in criminology.

Choice 1 : Graduate from University.

Choice 2 : Drop out of University.

Graduate from University.

I am hesitant if I should go back and accomplish my dream.

Choice 1 : I apply again to the ENPQ.

Choice 2 : I get a job in my field of baccalaureate. I get a good position as a criminologue.

Drop out of University.

The school wasn't made for me.

Choice 1 : I get a job at Super C.

I get promoted.

I become a sargeant and l am living my best life.

Choice 1 : Start from the beginning.

I get a job in my field of baccalaureate. I get a good position as a criminologue.

My work wasn't satisfying some superiors but was satisfying others.

Choice 1 : I get fired.

Choice 2 : I get promoted in Criminology.

I get fired.

I guess that the superiors that didn't like my work fired me.

Choice 1 : I get a job at Super C.

I get promoted in Criminology.

I love this job.

Choice 1 : Start from the beginning.