Undecided girl

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Élodie Petit

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Word count: 2661

Choice count: 92

Section count: 45

Image count: 45

Error count: 24

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 23 matches (CEGEP, Down, School, adult, choice, class, college, don, failed, failure, faith, first, grade, integration, learn, lesson, management, school, student, students, teacher, test, university)

Tourism : 23 matches (Bus, City, Environment, Event, Food, Menu, Opportunity, Party, Program, Restaurant, alternative, apartment, bus, chef, door, event, ex, leg, program, residence, stand, subway, trip)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 21 matches (accident, Article, award, blood, children, close, deception, Direction, fact, family, House, Information, interest, living, month, office, profession, residence, road, schedule, test)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (2 matches)

learn the ropes (1 match)

leg work (1 match)

maddening (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

test drive (1 match)

time management (1 match)

undermine (1 match)

withholding (1 match)

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Undecided girl

New step.

You are a student in Health Science at Cegep Saint-Hyacinthe and you just finished your two years. Now, you need to decide where are you going to continue your study.

Choice 1 : You have been accepted in physiotherapy at University of Montreal and you decide to go there.

Choice 2 : Nutrition is also a great program, so you decide to go to University Laval at Quebec because they accept you.

Life style.

You live in Sainte-Julie which is not that far from Montreal, but in the same time it's not that near. So, you need to decide the way you want to live your university life.

Choice 1 : You decide to take the bus, then the subway to go to school. Over all, it will take you about two hours to get to school.

Choice 2 : You learn that a friend of yours is also going to this university so you decide to take an apartment together.

Choice 3 : You don’t want to lose time in the transport but you don’t have friends so you decide to go in a student residence.

The subway.

On your first day of school, you are at the subway station and you are wondering which line you need to take.

Choice 1 : You choose the orange line in direction to Cote-Vertu.

Choice 2 : You choose the orange line in direction of Montmorency.

The attack.

Unluckily, while you were in the subway a terrorist attack took place with a bomb. You were in a panic because there were wounded people everywhere. So….

Choice 1 : You start helping people that are hurt and this make you realize that you do want to be a physiotherapist.

Choice 2 : You start running to the desk office of the University because you realize that blood and fractures are not made for you so that being a physiotherapist may not be my final purpose.

The timing.

You arrive at your class on time but while you are listening to your teacher you realized that you are in the wrong class. What a bad day!

Choice 1 : The teacher.

Choice 2 : You quit the class hoping to find the good one on time.

Failure.

You did found the class but since you are the last one you didn’t choose your labs partner for teamwork so you have been matched with someone that you can’t stand. Turns out he caused you your dead-end in the program because you finally failed the class due your labs. You are now working in a grocery shop because you are afraid of the University.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You do like this end.

The teacher.

One year later you live in another country because you are in a relationship with the psychology teacher and the school have found out about it so they fired him. Plus, people started to undermine him. In the end, why do you need to go to school when you can marry a teacher.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You do like this end.

The apartment.

The first month went great. You have barely seen your friend in the apartment because but of you have busy schedule. But now that her midterm is over, she is coming home late every night and most of the time she brings annoying friends and it’s very maddening. Plus, she is always tenting you to go out with her but you don’t have finish your midterm because physiotherapy program midterm is after the Psychology program.

Choice 1 : You finally decided to go out with your roommate and her friends 2 days before your big test.

Choice 2 : You find another place to live because you have to concentrate.

Let's party!

Well well well, you had an amazing night. It was really awesome. The only problem is that you had such a great night that you decided to go out the following night which means you haven't studied like you were supposed. The test is now in two hours and you started to panic.

Choice 1 : You wrote down all the information that you can on a sheet of paper hoping that nobody will catch you cheating.

Choice 2 : You have faith in yourself and you try to succeed your test.

The residence.

Surprisingly, you have made a lot of new friends with the residence because they all live on the same floor as you. The only problem is that you only see them in the evening because they are in another program.

Choice 1 : You decide to change your study program to be with your new friends.

Choice 2 : You do enjoy your program and no one will take it from you.

Theatre.

Oh my god! You can now tell that the theatre is really not for you. At the beginning, you thought it was different but different doesn’t mean interesting. You regretted your choice so you are looking for another alternative.

Choice 1 : You take a year off and go travel.

Choice 2 : You return in your Physiotherapy program.

Open doors.

Now that you have completed your program you are now ready for the adult word. You have to make some choices about where you are going to practice your profession. A lot of doors are open in front of you because you did pull off.

Choice 1 : You open your own clinic which comes with a lot of leg work.

Choice 2 : You work in hospital with the people who have been in an accident.

Quebec City.

You just move in your new apartment at Quebec. You don’t have a lot of friends there and you have heard about the integration week. You are just not so sure about the idea because your first week at University can be pretty stressful with a lot of challenge.

Choice 1 : You only have one life so you decide to go.

Choice 2 : You decide to take it easy during the week hoping to learn the ropes in this new place.

Choice 3 : Neither those choices are good because all you want is to call your mommy.

The girl of the ex.

Well well well… Turns out that your ex was also at this event and you saw him kissing a girl. Then, this same girl ate a huge hot dog and you started, because you were drunk, to yell at her that there is nothing good in a hot dog. You told her that she needs vegetable, vitamin and not saturated fat. The next morning, you receive a text from your ex's girl and she asked for your help about her diet.

Choice 1 : That might be interesting and a great chance to experiment the nutritionist career.

Choice 2 : No way! Why should you help her? You are a withholding kind of person when it comes to help a person that you don’t really like.

More clinics?

Five years later, turns out she became one of your best friends. She went to school in business and you opened a nutritionist clinic. It quickly became very popular and people started asking for other clinics. The only problem was that one was already enough work.

Choice 1 : You finally decided to make people happy by opening other clinics.

Choice 2 : You concentrate yourself on your clinic and make sure that everything is perfect.

The brother of the girl.

A few weeks later, you see her face in a magazine so you read the article and it says that she is the daughter of a rich man. Immediately you think about the projects that you could have accomplished with her.

Choice 1 : You cry your life in your bed because you feel stupid.

Choice 2 : You remark that she has a brother so you try to be his friend.

The good student.

Because you were well prepared in the first week, you got a great session, and you had an invitation for an internship because of yours straight A’s. Unfortunately, this internship with the Canada soccer team is in the same time of the student exchange in Spain one of the best countries in terms of health.

Choice 1 : Living your dream and going to Spain because you want to test drive this opportunity.

Choice 2 : You listen to your mother when she says that you being an intern is an awesome opportunity for your future and it gets you a foot in the door.

Spain.

The other students there are sweet and the family that houses you are even better. The teacher that you have there is very impressed in your way to work and he wants to work with you the next year. That means that you need to stay in Spain for one year maybe two.

Choice 1 : That is FANTASTIC, you do want to stay.

Choice 2 : You say thanks but you want to go home.

Athlete as costumer.

You never have work with some athlete so you are very enthusiasm. You have to meet all the players alone one by one to know all their health problems and then you have to make a program for each one of them. You never thought that they will be so demanding.

Choice 1 : You work harder and stay.

Choice 2 : You quit.

Home.

You finally decided to return at home because you were not ready to live by yourself. In fact, you were not ready to take care of your own time management. Your mother forces you to find a job.

Choice 1 : By chance you found a job in a restaurant.

Choice 2 : You decide to leave the house because you don’t know what to do anymore and a boring job is not what you need.

The restaurant.

The chef of the restaurant is amazing and he is teaching you some great aspects about food. You realize that this is something that really interest you so you decide to get more involve in this environment.

Choice 1 : You determine that you want to go back to the University and get a Ph.D.

Choice 2 : You open your own restaurant with the healthiest menu possible.

On the road.

You have an illumination while you are packing.Since you are not going to school for over one year, you decide to go improve your English because you might want to apply to McGill University.

Choice 1 : You are going to College Selkirk in the English immersion program.

Choice 2 : You are leaving for a humanitarian trip in an English country.

The new physiotherapist.

You have grown into a magnificent physiotherapist and your life is wonderful.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Stripper.

You realize that being a stripper is way more your style and you are happy with your choice.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Good cheater.

You finish with the best grade of your class and you are offered an award.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Overconfident.

YOU FAILED ! Better luck next time.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

New home.

You are looking for a new home because you need some tranquility.

Choice 1 : You move in with your crush.

Choice 2 : You move in with someone that you don't know.

The bride.

After school, you have married the man of your life and you had children.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

The psychopath.

Oh oh... I was a terrible idea because turns out that he was a psychopath. You finished in small pieces.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Love love love.

You fall in love with a Russian boy and you decide to stay there.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Deception.

They don't accept you so you have to go in Philosophy.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Money overflows.

You have worked hard and it paid off at the end. Well-done!.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Sida...

You got infected while you were working in the hospital. Unfortunately, you can't heal from it.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

It was too much.

Finally, the load of work was overwhelming. You fell into a depression.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Now that you have learn your lesson, you make effort with every stranger.

Now that you have learn your lesson, you make effort with every strangers.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Best move ever.

The brother has not only become your friend,he has also become your business partner.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Holla!

You never came back from Spain because you really are enjoying yourself there. You are truly living your dream.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Regrets.

You are now 88 years old and you wonder if you have missed many occasions by coming home.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Work pays.

Over time, you gained experience, and you are now the nutritionist of the Canadian teams.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Consequences.

You finish like all ordinary nutritionists which means in the forgetfulness.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Ph.D.

You enjoyed university so much that you decided to become a teacher for the Nutrition program.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

''Chez Élodie''

You own one of the most popular restaurant in the region.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

College Selkirk.

You speak English perfectly now. In addition, McGill has accepted you into your dream program: in medicine.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Humanitarian trip.

This experience has been the most rewarding experience of your life. You are now part of the organization as a coordinator and so you travel all over the world.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

Was it a good idea?

The only clinic you had close.

Choice 1 : You don't like this end and you want to retry.

Choice 2 : You like this end.

The End.