Higher education path

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Megane Southiere

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Word count: 2981

Choice count: 78

Section count: 44

Image count: 44

Error count: 17

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 33 matches (accident, account, action, admission, answer, Bar, Budget, character, close, company, composition, construction, cost, driver, driving, electricity, family, fine, harassment, House, minutes, month, notice, parent, power, presents, privacy, rent, Sexual, society, surprise, threat, wait and)

Education : 25 matches (CAT, Down, Education, School, behavior, choice, class, college, course, diploma, don, first, grade, high school, homework, learn, project, school, semester, social, specific, student, students, teacher, university)

Computer Science : 21 matches (abstraction, application, budget, call, character, choice, Class, clock, close, composition, group, name, neighbor, open, parent, pass, path, privacy, split, table, threat)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (6 matches)

come in handy (1 match)

deter (2 matches)

dread (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

internship (3 matches)

lack of (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

set aside (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

the drive of work (1 match)

thoroughly (1 match)

thoughtful (1 match)

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Higher education path

College's programs.

It’s my last year of high school and I just receive my answer from my application for college admission. I’ve been accepted in both of the program I wanted to go, Social Science and Visual Arts. Now I need to choose what program I will do.

Choice 1 : I choose to go in Social Science.

Choice 2 : I choose to go in Visuals Arts.

I choose to go in Social Science.

At the first week, we need to find a partner for the whole semester with whom I will do all my homework in team. I don’t know anyone in this class but I go ask someone.

Choice 1 : I ask my desk neighbor.

Choice 2 : I ask the guy that I find attractive.

I ask my desk neighbor.

The name of the person next to me is Sophie. At the beginning, she seems thoughtful about teamwork, but after the second week, she put me aside. I also realize that I don't really like Social Science program.

Choice 1 : I do nothing and let Sophie do all the work alone.

Choice 2 : I try to talk with her and do my part of the work.

Choice 3 : I choose to go in Visuals Arts.

I do nothing and let Sophie do all the work alone.

Sophie undermines me at the teacher at the end of the semester and I did not pass this course.

Choice 1 : Choose again

I try to talk with her and do my part of the work.

We set a meeting Friday at 12'o clock. Finally, I have the half of the work. When I want to leave the college, I have a car accident, somebody burned his stop and hit me. I need to stay in the hospital for a many weeks. I can't finish my semester.

Choice 1 : Choose again.

I ask the guy that I find attractive.

I present myself and ask if he wants to be my partner this semester. He told you that he would be happy because he is new here. His name is Thomas Tremblay. You decide to :

Choice 1 : Take is cellphone number.

Choice 2 : To invite him at my house for the first homework.

Take is cellphone number.

He gives me is number. Thomas and I talk on the phone for hours and hours. We learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. We see us often and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

To invite him at my house for the first homework.

Thomas accept my invitation. While we were to doing the homework, he starts flirting with me. I dread this moment, and I am not sure of what I should do.

Choice 1 : I flirt back with him.

Choice 2 : I try to deter him subtly.

Yes, I do.

We were excited about the wedding, I imagined my husband and I at our retirement. We take only two months to organize our wedding. This day was magic, I felt like a princess and I partied with my family and my friends. Today, I received the answer from the University of Trois-Rivière and of Sherbrooke too. I have been accepted in Elementary teacher education.

Choice 1 : University of Trois-Rivière.

Choice 2 : University of Sherbrooke.

No, I'm not ready.

Thomas is surprise by my answer, he thinks that wedding is the key of happiness and fulfillment. I am honest with him and I say what I want.

Choice 1 : I will never marry him.

Choice 2 : I will wait at the end of college.

I flirt back with him.

We flirt and learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. We see us often and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

I try to deter him subtly.

Thomas understands that I am not comfortable in this situation and he does not insist. He is sorry. From this moment, we did all our homework at school, but I realize that I really like him. We learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. We see us more often than not and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

I will never marry him.

Since this time, I feel that our couple has a lack of communication. Tonight, we fight, Thomas leaves and goes walk outside. Thirty minutes later, somebody knocks at my door. I open, it was the police. A drunk driver burns a red light and hit him. I start to cry, I understand that I would never see him again. I have the impression that life threats me.

Choice 1 : Choose again

I will wait at the end of college.

Like usual, Thomas understands and we just wait and have more time to plan our wedding. One year pass, the wedding was amazing, it was the best day of my life. Today, I need to decide in witch university I will go in my elementary teacher school program.

Choice 1 : University of Trois-Rivière.

Choice 2 : University of Sherbrooke.

University of Trois-Rivière.

I am happy because my sisters go at this University. I have the choice to live with my sisters in the same apartment or in the block next to them.

Choice 1 : I go live in the apartment with my sisters and my husband.

Choice 2 : I go live with my husband in the block next to my sisters.

University of Sherbrooke.

Now my husband and I need to find our future home. My husband has a friend that lives in a house and rent a bedroom, there is a place for us and it only cost 500$ per month all included. We also visited a 4½, it cost 670$ per month and we only need to pay the electricity.

Choice 1 : We choose to rent a bedroom in a house.

Choice 2 : We choose to rent the apartment.

I choose to go in Visuals Arts.

I really love this program, I learn many mediums, draw, paint, sculpture, photography. I have art history class. I have new friends. I need to realize my first painting ever, I have the choice to do figurative or abstraction.

Choice 1 : Abstraction painting.

Choice 2 : Figurative painting.

Abstraction painting.

There are two types of abstraction painting, geometric or lyrical. I ask myself if I prefer to do hard edge, like Vasarely or action painting like Pollock.

Choice 1 : Geometric painting.

Choice 2 : Lyrical painting.

Figurative painting.

I am not good in figurative at all. Well, at least now I know that paint is not for me. Now, I need to do a sculpture. I can do a readymade, a piece of art base on something found or an In Situ, an artwork that is created for a specific place and can't be move.

Choice 1 : Ready made sculpture.

Choice 2 : In Situ sculpture.

Geometric painting.

The result of my paint is really nice, I am impressed of myself. My teacher gives me a 90%. I realized that I forget my lunch box. Should I go at the cafeteria or at the student coffee?

Choice 1 : I go to the Cafeteria.

Choice 2 : I go to the student coffee.

Lyrical painting.

The instinctive composition that I made work well. Today, my friends invite me at the bar Friday night. I could go, but I said to my cousin that I would be with her.

Choice 1 : Go out with my friends.

Choice 2 : Go with my cousin Friday night.

I go to the Cafeteria.

I choose to eat pizza. I do not find my wallet in my bag, someone stole it. I had the money to pay my rent. I can't eat, I do only had 100$ left in my bank account. I need to work now, I am obligated to stop school.

Choice 1 : Choose again

I go to the student coffee.

I buy a wrap and cookies. There is not a free table, but a guy notice that I want to sit down and eat, so he invites me to join him. He presents himself, Thomas Tremblay, he studies Social Science. We learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. We see us often and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

Go out with my friends.

I have fun with my friends and there is this guy that I find attractive. We flirt and learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. After this night, we see us often and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

Go with my cousin Friday night.

One hour before I join my cousin, she texts me and said she needed to cancel our project. I make a surprise to my friends and join them at the bar. There was my friend's friend, Thomas Tremblay. We flirt and learn to know each other and we enjoy our presence. We see us often and we fall in love. Everything goes so fast. One year passes and during this time I decided to change program and go in Visual Arts. Thomas let the college because he had the luck to have a foot in the door of is construction dad's company. Today, he asks me if I want to marry him.

Choice 1 : Yes, I do.

Choice 2 : No, I'm not ready.

Ready made sculpture.

My readymade sculpture was made of a chair and I express the power of society on students. My teacher likes my art that is really conceptual. My friends invite me at the bar Friday night. I could go, but I said to my cousin that I would be with her.

Choice 1 : Go out with my friends.

Choice 2 : Go with my cousin Friday night.

In Situ sculpture.

It was thoroughly to work outside and I didn't have time to finish, next time I will manage my time. I did not have a good grade and I need to pull off for the rest of the semester. Today, my friends invite me at the bar Friday night. I could go, but I said to my cousin that I would be with her.

Choice 1 : Go out with my friends.

Choice 2 : Go with my cousin Friday night.

We choose to rent a bedroom in a house.

That was a big mistake, I can't live there anymore, people do no chores, all the dishes are dirt, people do not have respect for us, I am obligated to do everything. I need to find a new place, but for now I'll go back at my parent's house.

Choice 1 : Choose again

We choose to rent the apartment.

This place was made for us, I am sure of that, I feel at the right place. Tonight, it's the initiation, I am not sure to go because of all the things I heard about sexual harassment that happen every year.

Choice 1 : Go to the initiation.

Choice 2 : Don't go to the initiation.

Go to the initiation.

I had a lot of fun and I also drink, but I feel OK to drive and I don't want to bother my husband if I call him.

Choice 1 : I drive the five kilometers between the bar and my apartment.

Choice 2 : I call my husband and ask him if he can catch me up.

Don't go to the initiation.

I miss the occasion to make friends, this is at this night that groups of friends were made, I feel very alone since this day. When I arrived at the apartment, I see two fire trucks, my apartment my home, my things, they are all gone. My husband was at work, but my cat was inside.

Choice 1 : Choose again

I drive the five kilometers between the bar and my apartment.

I didn't pass the police roadblock, I just lose my driving license. I had better call my husband.

Choice 1 : Choose again

I call my husband and ask him if he can catch me up.

I wake him up, but he prefers to know that I am fine. Fifteen minutes later he is there, I did the right things because we passe a police roadblock. My husband is come in handy and I want to thank him.

Choice 1 : I Invite him to a good restaurant and finish to the cinema.

Choice 2 : I organize an evening with his close friends.

I go live in the apartment with my sisters and my husband.

This doesn't work, because my sisters and we don't agree on how we should split chores, I also need privacy with my husband.

Choice 1 : Choose again.

I go live with my husband in the block next to my sisters.

My husband has difficulty because of the drive of work and we start to set aside for our future house. My first semester is done and I have my first internship, I need to choose witch group I'll have.

Choice 1 : I choose the kindergarden.

Choice 2 : I choose the fifth grade.

I choose the kindergarden.

I realize that my diploma in Visuals Arts really help me with groups of this age. I finished my University and my husband and I are looking for a house.

Choice 1 : We look for a house near our family.

Choice 2 : We look for house on the water's edge.

I choose the fifth grade.

I think that I would prefer a younger group. I observe that at this age, some students threat other and I need to repeat that this is not a good behavior. I almost finish my university and my husband and I are looking for a house.

Choice 1 : We look for a house near our family.

Choice 2 : We look for house on the water's edge.

I Invite him to a good restaurant and finish to the cinema.

He enjoys is evening and we are both really happy. I have now my first internship and I need to choose witch group I will have.

Choice 1 : I choose the kindergarden.

Choice 2 : I choose the fifth grade.

I organize an evening with his close friends.

He is very surprised by this evening, but happy too. We all have a lot of fun. I enter my second semester and I have my first internship, I need to choose a group.

Choice 1 : I choose the kindergarden.

Choice 2 : I choose the fifth grade.

We look for a house near our family.

We find two houses that respect our budget. A recent and an old one. I think the recent one is best choice, but my husband thinks that the old one has more character.

Choice 1 : We buy the recent house.

Choice 2 : We buy the house with renovations to do.

We look for house on the water's edge.

There is no house on the water's edge that is affordable. We look for a house near our family.

Choice 1 : We look for a house near our family.

There are two houses that my husband and I really love, a recent one and an older one with renovation to do.

I think the recent one is best choice, but my husband thinks that the old one has more character.

Choice 1 : We buy the recent house.

Choice 2 : We buy the house with renovations to do.

We buy the recent house.

This house is perfect, now, we are ready to start a family in our new home.

Choice 1 : The End

We buy the house with renovations to do.

I love to do renovations with my husband, we want to start our family when these renovations will be done.

Choice 1 : The End

The End.