A one day treasure
Word count: 646
Choice count: 36
Section count: 6
Image count: 5
Error count: 22
Field Related Analysis
Accommodation and Real estate Vocabulary : 18 matches
(homes, house, realize)Dance : 17 matches
(back, follow, run, show, side)Theatre : 17 matches
(house, run)Target Structure: (0 matches)
A one day treasure
CAMPSITE.
June 2 2004, rob go to the Forrest for camping with his friends Ann, James,Albert ,Jane , they brought foods and camping materials such as tents. After they arrive at the Forrest they assemble the tents and had a lunch, after a little rest his friends decided to explore the Forrest then as they explore the Forrest they see a big house with a big gate.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : Back to the house.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.
STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
they enter the house, there is no one in the house and Rob said that "we should leave this house because we don't know what will happen if we stay here all night", so they go back to their campsite after they got back to the campsite they realize that their one friend named Ann is left alone on the house so they decided to go back.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : BACK TO THE HOUSE.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.
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BACK TO THE HOUSE.
they are hesitant to go back because it is dark from the Forrest because it's night. They don't know what creatures will show up while they are heading back to the house.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : BACK TO THE HOUSE.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.
TREASURE.
While they are heading back to the house, Ann saw a secret passage, Ann decided to go in the passage after she go in, she saw a very big box of treasure and when she open it, it is full of golds and diamonds, Ann immediately run outside the secret passage to call his friends and she realizes that there is no one in the house she thinks immediately and wanting to have a phone call to her friends but she realize that all of their phones has no signal. Ann is crying because she thinks that no one cares about her.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : BACK TO THE HOUSE.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.
MONSTER IN WOODS.
While Rob and his friends walks on the woods they encounter a big dog they feel very scary about what they see, rob and his friends run so fast to the other direction, they feel lost in the woods, they try to find another way and find the big house as they walking they see a river, rob has an idea, they followed the river because the big house has a tree and the side of the tree has a river. As they follow the river finally they see the big house and then they enter the house, as they enter hey si Ann crying rob immediately hug Ann and saying sorry for leaving Ann, Ann say the secret passage of the house and the box full of golds and diamonds. Rob and there friends decided to sleep in the house because it so dangerous outside when its night.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : BACK TO THE HOUSE.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.
GOING HOME.
In the morning they take the treasure and back to the campsite and decided to go their homes and divided the treasure that they take into the big house. Now Rob, Ann and there friends live in a mansion because of the golds and diamonds that they get.
Choice 1 : CAMPSITE.
Choice 2 : STRANGE BIG HOUSE.
Choice 3 : BACK TO THE HOUSE.
Choice 4 : TREASURE.
Choice 5 : MONSTER IN WOODS.
Choice 6 : GOING HOME.