The Adventure of Ysla.

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Patricia Guzman

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Word count: 504

Choice count: 15

Section count: 11

Image count: 11

Error count: 36

Field Related Analysis

Geography : 23 matches

(island, islands, ocean, seas)

Education : 17 matches

(choice, learn)

Archaeology : 17 matches

(cave, her, here, lead, village)

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The Adventure of Ysla.

Once....

Once upon a time, there live a beautiful little girl named Ysla in the Devou Island. Even when she was little, she loved the ocean. She also loved listening to her Grandma's stories. Ysla's favorite was about the demigod Paui, who stole the treasure of the mother island. And according to her grandma, it upset the balance of nature by stealing the treasure.

Choice 1 : Ocean's Gift.

Choice 2 : Voyagers in the Ocean.

Ocean's Gift.

Ysla’s dad, chief Brends, believed the ocean was dangerous. The islanders were forbidden to sail beyond the reef. But little Ysla felt a deep connection to the ocean and to all creatures who belonged in it. She wanted to help. And the ocean noticed and it gave Ysla a special gift. When chief Brends picked up Ysla, she dropped the gift. Luckily, someone else picked it up. It was her grandma. She believed that the ocean’s gift to Ysla was the treasure of the mother island.

Choice 1 : Chief Brends Refusal.

Choice 2 : Grandma's Last Wish.

Voyagers in the Ocean.

As Ysla grew, she worked hard to help lead her people and follow her father’s rules. But when Ysla turned sixteen, grandma took her aside. “Its time to learn who you were meant to be,” her grandma said. She led Ysla to a hidden cavern full of ancient canoes. When Ysla entered the cave, she could feel the spirits of her ancestors. They were the voyagers on the ocean.

Choice 1 : Grandma's Last Wish.

Choice 2 : Chief Brends Refusal.

Grandma's Last Wish.

Grandma last wish was for Ysla to journey across the ocean, and restore the treasure of the mother island.

Choice 1 : Ysla's Ought to do.

Chief Brends Refusal.

After losing a loved one to the seas, Brends developed aquaphobia, and forbade his people from journeying beyond Devou's reef.

Choice 1 : Ysla's Ought to do.

Choice 2 : Confused.

Ysla's Ought to do.

The ocean calls out to her but her father prevents her from ever venturing out beyond the reef, for the fear of losing her. As Ysla grows up, she is told that a life of being the village’s chieftain awaits her. But her heart is set on venturing out into the ocean.

Choice 1 : The Fall.

Choice 2 : Confused.

The Fall.

The islands around them slowly begin to fade away and fall.

Choice 1 : Decision.

Confused.

Ysla was confused whether she follows what her heart desire or what his father wants.

Choice 1 : Chief of the Island.

Choice 2 : Decision.

Decision.

Ysla decided to sail on the ocean. But sailing on the open ocean was not easy for Ysla.

Choice 1 : End.

Chief of the Island.

Ysla follows her father rules and stay in the Devou Island to get ready to become the next chief of the island.

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End.

But Ysla manage to restore the treasure and restore the balance of nature.

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