Business Management

A hypertext narrative by

Dennis Olari

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Word count: 1123

Choice count: 21

Section count: 22

Image count: 22

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis:

Tourism : 21 matches (Channel, Construction, Europe, Hotel, Human, Marketing, Opportunity, Party, Plane, Program, US, bit, course, gaming, hotel, marketing, program, to visit, tourist, trip, vacation)

Computer Science : 15 matches (bit, channel, choice, Class, closed, electronic, group, huge, manager, open, resource, store, supervisor, video, YouTube)

Education : 15 matches (School, choice, class, college, course, don, first, games, management, motivation, project, school, teachers, university, vacation)

Target Structure:

fulfillment (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

thoroughly (1 match)

though (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)


Business Management

Montmorency College

Start at the beginning.

I just graduated from Montmorency College in business management, and I am very proud of myself and happy that I accomplished something. But right now I don't know what to do. There are so many possibilities.

Choice 1 : Take one year off and go on vacation.

Choice 2 : Go to university.

Choice 3 : Find a job.

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Take one year off and go on vacation.

After thinking, I finally decided to make a trip to Europe. I don't want to go alone because I'm afraid it will get boring so I have some friends that will be glad to join me but there is also my girlfriend who would be happy to make that trip with me.

Choice 1 : My girlfriend.

Choice 2 : My group of friends.

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Go to university.

Today is my first day of school, and I am a little bit stressed. I'm not sure how things will go on. After one week of school, I realized that all of my teachers seem to be boring and kind of rude.

Choice 1 : Quite university.

Choice 2 : Continue in the program hoping that things will get better.

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Find a job.

I didn’t go to university and my parents were thoroughly disappointed, but I was tired of school and I didn’t have the motivation to go to school but fortunately I found two jobs that I could do.

Choice 1 : Work for the government.

Choice 2 : Work in a grocery.

Going with my girlfriend.

We are having a great time and day by day we love each other more and more so I finally decided to propose to her and she said yes. Our beautiful trip is almost done but we are not sure if we should extend our vacation or live in time.

Choice 1 : Stay a little bit more.

Choice 2 : Leave in time.

Stay a little bit more.

We didn't regret because we stayed more. We felt in love with that beautiful continent and decide to open our own business and things are going very well. We have a great sentiment of fulfillment.

Write a choice here.

Leave in time.

We decided to live. We left Europe and came back for Canada but unfortunately our plane crashed. Thanks god we survive and now we have a story to tell.

Write a choice here.

Going with my group of friends.

We are visiting a lot of countries and doing a lot of parties and of course meeting people and making new friends. During the party we saw another group of tourist from Canada.

Choice 1 : Invite them to join us.

Choice 2 : Don't join them.

Invite them to join us.

They joined us and we continued to have a great time. We invited them to join us the next day to visit some places and we all became friends. When we all got back to Canada we kept contact and remained friends ready for other adventures.

Write a choice here.

Don't join them.

We decided to stay on our own and leave earlier because we were tired. On our return to the hotel we got attacked by another group of tourists and they have stolen our personal stuff. Now we go back to Canada a little bit angry and disappointed.

Write a choice here.

Quite university.

I think I made the right decision because anyway I realized that marketing was not my passion. So now, I need to find another way to make money but also enjoy what I’m doing.

Choice 1 : Trying to earn money playing video games.

Choice 2 : Start a Youtube channel.

Trying to earn money playing video games.

I became really good at CS: GO and finally a team recruited me. More often than not we won tournaments but I didn’t make enough money so beside gaming I’m working in an electronic store.

Write a choice here.

Start a Youtube channel.

I started my traveling channel on YouTube and had a lot of viewers. I finally opened my own traveling program on TV who is having a big success.

Write a choice here.

Continue in the program hoping that things will get better.

I continued in this program though things didn’t go the way I wanted. I am not the type of person to have straight A’s and It was really hard for me to have the motivation and determination to continue going to class but I didn’t give up.

Choice 1 : Work as a construction supervisor.

Choice 2 : Take a human resource manager post.

Work as a construction supervisor.

After 2 months, I had a construction accident and broke my legs. Now I have been in the hospital for 1 month.

Write a choice here.

Take a human resource manager post.

There was a vacant position as a human resource manager and I got the job, I think volunteering in my CV was a huge advantage over the other candidates. University made me take a better post rapidly because I had good qualifications and earn a better wage.

Write a choice here.

Work for the government.

At first, I liked the job but after a few weeks, I saw that this wasn’t really for me but maybe after a few months I will get used to it.

Choice 1 : Quite the job.

Choice 2 : Continue working.

Quite the job.

I finally quit my job and opened my own company. After a few years of hard work on my project, now I’m making millions and living a happy life.

Write a choice here.

Continue working.

I continued working even I didn’t like it and they finally fired me. I guess it’s because I wasn’t motivated by this job. Now I am looking for another job.

Write a choice here.

Work in a grocery.

After 2 years of working, I finally had the opportunity to become a supervisor, but also my father proposed me to join is company.

Choice 1 : Take the supervisor post.

Choice 2 : Join my father's company.

Take the supervisor post.

I took the supervisor post but after a few weeks the grocery closed its doors after making bankruptcy. Now I have no job and only a little bit of money.

Write a choice here.

Join my father's company.

I joined my father’s company and I helped the company to improve. We made more money each year and me and my family became rich. I work hard and do a lot of overtime and my parents are proud of me. After a few years, my parents took them retirement and left me the company.

Write a choice here.

The End.