Who do we save?

A hypertext narrative by

Monica Chuon

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Word count: 536

Choice count: 18

Section count: 13

Image count: 12

Error count: 6

Field Related Analysis:

Prehospital Emergency Care : 11 matches (accident, ambulance, hospital, emergency, patient, transport, 9-1-1, doctor, patients, emergency care, injured)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 9 matches (accident, condition, driver, minutes, road, section, short title, title, witness)

Nursing : 8 matches (accident, ambulance, Doctor, hospital, section, emergency care, injured, patients)

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Who do we save?

Paramedics

Stormy Day.

On a stormy day, a car crashed, the driver and his wife were severely injured. A witness saw the incident and called 9-1-1 immediately. The emergency center dispatched the paramedics. On the way to the scene, the paramedics noticed another serious accident on the road. They were questioning whether they should of stop and help the injured or direct themselves to the first car crash.

Choice 1 : On the way to the first car crash.

Choice 2 : Stay and help the injured in current car crash.

Paramedics

On the way to the first car crash.

They chose to stick to the plan and go directly to the initial car crash since it was allocated by the emergency center.

Choice 1 : Call the emergency center and notify them about the recent incident.

Choice 2 : Don't call the emergency center.

Ambulance on the scene

Stay and help the injured in current car crash.

Many have been hurt but one of the injured is in critical condition and need immediate assistance from a doctor.

Choice 1 : Transport the injured immediately to the ER and call for assistance.

Choice 2 : Stay and help the others wounded and then dispatch with the critical condition patient.

Emergency Center Agent

Call the emergency center and notify them about the recent incident.

Emergency centers notify the paramedics that it will take up to 25 minutes for another ambulance to reach the incident.

Choice 1 : Stay and help the injured in current car crash.

Choice 2 : Separate in team and direct themselves to the other incident.

Don't call the emergency center.

Since the paramedics didn't choose to call the emergency center, they will face consequences.

Choice 1 : Cut hours of work.

Choice 2 : Lose your their jobs.

Jewish Hospital Montreal

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They decided to stay and take the injured to the hospital for emergency care.

Choice 1 : Start Again

Injured

Separate in team and direct themselves to the other incident.

They are able to help most of injured people by doing so. They call for back up since they can't handle all of the wounded.

Choice 1 : Start Again.

Choice 2 :

Transport

Transport the injured immediately to the ER and call for assistance.

You just saved a life and helped 8 injured patients from the car crash.

Choice 1 : Start Again.

Wounded

Stay and help the others wounded and then dispatch with the urgent critical condition patient.

The critically injured patient lost his life due to your poor judgement.

Choice 1 : Cut hours of work.

Choice 2 : Lose your their jobs.

Start Again.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Hours

Cut hours of work.

Due to their bad judgement the paramedics will lose hours at work since they put patient lives in danger.

Choice 1 : Start Again.

Watch

Lose your their jobs.

Since the paramedics made bad judgements about the situation, they will lose their jobs since a patient that was severly dangered has lost his life.

Choice 1 : Start Again.

The End.