Timeless story

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Word count: 686

Choice count: 22

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 28

Field Related Analysis

Archaeology : 26 matches

(comes, dog, her, plan, screen, technology, theory, type)

Education : 21 matches

(choice, course, memory, social, technology)

Nursing : 19 matches

(accident, b.d., bacteria, body, capsule, death, epilepsy, hospital, insane)

Target Structure: (0 matches)

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Timeless story

“Florida man kidnaps scientist to make his dog immortal”.

appears on Hannah’s news screen.

Choice 1 : Next

Choice 2 : Goodbye

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She comes closer and reads the headline and chuckles. Nowadays everybody tries to become immortal or bring to life others and make them live forever.

Does Hannah believe in stories about immortality?

Choice 1 : Yes

Choice 2 : Why not?

Choice 3 : Is she insane to believe in this?

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See you!

Do you want to start again?

Choice 1 : Beginning

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Of course, she also believed in the idea of immortality. She even had a perfect plan for how to bring someone special to life. She came up with this plan several years ago, when found something interesting during her studies of different species of bacteria. She has been working so hard for weeks… months… years… and everything is for seeing Nana's smile one more time.

Do you want to know who Nana is?

Choice 1 : Yes

Choice 2 : No

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Hannah dedicated 170 years of her life to science and knows exactly that it’s impossible. Of course, scientists managed to extend life length, but everybody is mortal, that’s the rule of the universe.

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Choice 1 : Next

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No, Hannah doesn’t believe in stories about immortality… she has another plan. She came with it a long time ago watching her favourite memories, when she suddenly realised that she would like not just watch but experience them one more time. This is how her journey began. She has been working so hard for weeks… months… years… and everything was just to meet Nana one more time.

Do you want to know who Nana is?

Choice 1 : Yes

Choice 2 : No

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One day Nana became Hannah’s mom, closest friend, universe... and then just died in a car accident. Hannah just couldn’t live with the fact that her only friend had such a stupid and boring death.

But now, finally, Hannah’s finished.

Choice 1 : Next

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Time machine.

Hannah is planning to send her memories and thoughts into the past, experience it, and then, after some time, the timer would send her back to the present. Pointless invention in the world where every memory is recorded and can be rewatched on simple TV; but Hannah just wanted to feel the smells and atmosphere with Nana one more time… or many times. Hannah runs the program and….

Choice 1 : IT WORKS!

Choice 2 : Something goes wrong...

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One day Nana became Hannah’s mom, closest friend, universe... and then just died in a car accident. Hannah just couldn’t live with the fact that her only friend had such a stupid and boring death.

But now, finally, Hannah’s finished.

Choice 1 : Next

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Bacteria.

Recently, Hannah's managed to create a special type of bacteria, which, in theory, could help the human body recover hundreds of times faster than usual. This is what Nana needs! After the car accident, her body was frozen by special technology and Hannah stole it from hospital. She just couldn't give up and disable her best friend from the capsule.

Choice 1 : Next

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After years of endless tests, Hannah's finally finished. This bacteria can either help Nana... or kill her.

Hannah injected her dearest friend and...

Choice 1 : It helps

Choice 2 : It kills her

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It works! After a few moments, Nana opens her eyes. Hannah immediately hugs her and cries.

“What happened?” asks Nana. “Nothing, just missed you,” whispers Hannah.

Choice 1 : To the beginning

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Nana's body lurches... as in epilepsy. After a few moments, the machine shows that the pulse's stopped.

Hannah falls on her knees and her scream spreads through the laboratory.

Choice 1 : To the beginning

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it works! She really sees Nana and just interrupts her speech with a hug.

“What happened?” asks Nana. “Nothing, just missed you,” whispers Hannah.

Choice 1 : To the beginning

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After a moment the stench of roasted flesh spreads through the labaratory.

Several days later, all social media and news channels discuss the case of a dead woman in her laboratory.

Choice 1 : To the beginning

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