Jumanji Adventure.

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Choice count: 5

Section count: 4

Image count: 4

Error count: 30

Field Related Analysis

Sociology : 35 matches

(class, game, homework, open, school, spencer)

Web development : 25 matches

(alternate, class, join, map, open, path, read, return, tree)

Geography : 24 matches

(map, mountain, river)

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Jumanji Adventure.

The Beginning of Jumanji.

There was an abandoned jungle that Alan who trapped in the Jumanji for 30 years. In this real world, Spencer is busy doing his homework these days. His friend, Fridge is asking him a favor to clean their hideout in the school. He agreed to go cleaning together with Fridge. 3 days later, Spencer accidentally encounter with Bethany, Walker, and Martha. He apologizes to them what he did accident something. Bethany said, "It's okay what did you wrong to us." and she introduces herself. Walker and Martha saying hello and introduces themselves to him. Spencer said, "Hello guys, have we met before?". Walker responded to him, admits they meet before when they were in junior high school, but they are different class. Fridge finds him and going to school. He found Spencer in the hall and told him go to their hideout. Bethany is feeling suspicious and asks him what inside their hideout. Fridge told not to tell anyone about their hideout and find out herself this. They got inside the hideout and surprised to see this place. Spencer asks them to go cleaning together. Martha agreed to do same as them. Fridge shocked to see Jumanji and called his friends. They are very surprised to see Jumanji that this game does exist in this world. Alan's voice over, "Will you join this game?". Bethany got panicked by his voice over. Jumanji starts this game and kidnapped them to the jungle.

Choice 1 : The Beginning of Jumanji.

Choice 2 : Trapped in Jumanji.

School

Trapped in Jumanji.

In this game world, they got in the jungle. Martha is getting up first and surprised to see this different place. She said, "Where are we?! We are in the jungle?!". They are confused and surprised at the same time. Spence realized that they went to the Jumanji world, "Right, we went to the Jumanji as game world." Alan went to the way where the kids stuck on the jungle. Fridge shocked to see Alan found them in the jungle. Alan checked if the kids are okay, said "Are you alright? Welcome to Jumanji world!" Bethany got jaw dropped by saw Alan and said, "Why are we in Jumanji world?". Alan told them it was game, and they can overcome the challenges. Walker confused and asked him, "What are the challenges?". Alan answers, "Yes, there are more challenges." "So you will find a map, and we can help together to find the puzzles." Hippocampus approached them. Alan told them to run and find a map. They are running fast towards a different path and Spencer said, "We can meet up later once we got map!"

Choice 1 : Finding Map.

Jungle

Finding Map.

Spencer, Bethany, and Alan being chased by the Hippocampus and on way to the cave while Walker, Fridge, and Martha were at the river. Spencer asked him, "Why are we bring a map? Is there another hint for that?". He and Bethany are curious that what were many hints on a map. Alan respond quickly, "Yes, there are a lot of hints of this map. Have you heard there was mystery treasure in Brazil? It is an alternate map of Brazil." Bethany shocked and said, "What?? Is this place Brazil? There are a lot scary animals here?!". Alan calmed her down and not worry about them. Spencer understood and said "Alright, we can find a map no matter what. But we can't lose this map." Alan agreed what he said and walk to the cave. They are finding a map on the cave. Spencer found a map behind of a rock. Bethany is happy when Spencer found a map. At the river, Walker wondering if they are okay when they are separated. Fridge told him not to worry about them and knows Spencer very well. Martha is looking around for emergency kit, food, and survival bag and found them. She said, "Hey guys, I found them! We got them from this game world! I was wondering if they got them and found a map." Alan told them go to the river. Spencer looks surprised and asked him if he knew Walker, Spencer, and Martha are at the river. He responds him, "I have been stuck here for 30 years. I don't look old and lost when he got here." Bethany comfort him and said, "Don't get lost and leave this world together once we have treasure." Spencer agreed what she said and not to worry. They are on the way to the river and Walker found them in the river. He said, "They are here!" Spencer is running into Fridge and hugging him. Martha is waving them. Alan is planning to going to the mountain and read the map where treasure. They agreed with his plan and going to the mountain together.

Choice 1 : The Final of Jumanji.

cave

The Final of Jumanji.

They went to and looking around the mountain. Bethany is flustered and said, "Why can't I find that treasure?" Alan told her not worry and just find the treasure. Spencer checked the map and found the tree beside the treasure. He said, "Hey guys, we found here!" They are surprised and asked him that how did he know where the treasure is. Alan patted his hair and told him, "You did good job." "So you guys have gone back to the real world." "We can finally open this treasure!" They are feeling sad when Alan will stay in game world except for them. Spencer told him not to stay game world. Fridge held his hand and said, "Don't stay here. We'll help you go back to the real world." Bethany, Walker, and Martha comforting and encourage him to go back to the real world. Alan refused their offer and said "I already done many times." The teleport is already started. Spencer held him to go to the real world. In this real world, they got in and happy ending with Alan. Martha told him, "We did save you from this game world!" Alan cried hard and finally back his home. On the next day, Spencer invited them to his house and celebrate Alan's return victory. They cheered him to congratulations him return his home.

Choice 1 : The Final of Jumanji.

Mountain