How Ana Planned her 18th Birthday.

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Cristy Lampa

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Word count: 340

Choice count: 26

Section count: 6

Image count: 6

Error count: 29

Field Related Analysis

Food and catering : 12 matches

(black, cake, chicken, delicious, eat, food, party, prepared)

Education : 10 matches

(choice, classmates)

Archaeology : 6 matches

(her)

Target Structure: (0 matches)

18th Birthday.

Ana will celebrate her 18th birthday and she is undecided on what to do and what are the things that must be prepared.

Choice 1 : 18TH CANDLES.

Choice 2 : PHOTOSHOOT.

Choice 3 : The Venue and the Food.

Choice 4 : The Decorations.

Choice 5 : The end.

Choice 6 : Previous

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18TH CANDLES.

Ana decided to have 18th candles and her 18th candles are some of her friends and classmates. She is preparing for the candles that will be used for her birthday.

Choice 1 : Eighteen women will be selected.

Choice 2 : Each of them will required to have message to the birthday celebrant.

Choice 3 : The candle will be replaced beside the cake of the debutant and blow it out after the eighteen women will finished.

Choice 4 : Previous

PHOTOSHOOT.

She is also decided to have a photoshoot so that she will have memories , since eighteen birthday will be celebrated once in a lifetime .

Choice 1 : She choose the best gown to wear.

Choice 2 : She choose the best theme for the photoshoot.

Choice 3 : Previous

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The Venue and the Food.

Ana planned to prepare some food to be serve on her visitors and she want to serve a delicious food.

Choice 1 : BBQ chicken wings. Deliciously sticky chicken wings. ...

Choice 2 : Letchon

Choice 3 : Menudo

Choice 4 : Lumpia

Choice 5 : Mango float

Choice 6 : Previous

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The Decorations.

She want her birthday to be her best birthday ever and she will choose some designs that suites her theme.

Choice 1 : She will be using the black and yellow combination of balloons

Choice 2 : She want her decor filled with florals and other beautiful decor.

Choice 3 : Previous

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The end.

After choosing all the decorations and food , Ana's only wish is a birthday celebration that filled with love and she want everyone to enjoy the party.

Choice 1 : Take picture

Choice 2 : Laugh Together

Choice 3 : Dance and eat together

Choice 4 : Previous