Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Proper education.

I completely agree that people who had been in prison can become good citizens in the future. Its good idea to get them an opportunity to improve their lives. Also, they can share their experience with teenagers to discourage them from breaking bad. My opinion is that ex-prisoner's speaking could be pretty impressive. First, I find that a person who was convicted had got enough bad experience and had made his or her conclusions. Evidently, they can compare their previous live which was evidently dangerous and brutal with their normal and productive life after the jail. Second, I imagine how young people could be impressed by such stories. Fact that it could discredit their view on criminal life as a funny interesting adventure. On other hand, it's very important that the personality of the speaker should be really positive and strong. In case that an ex-prisoner would have a strong impact on children's opinion, he or she needs to demonstrate totally proper and sociable mindset. He should not allow any indulgences. Definitely, criminal lifestyles should be considered to be a wrong decision. Also, it is assumed that students will have a teacher who will provide them with special materials. It may be different educational videos about laws or government programs which can help young people to find their personal way to reach their goals. In conclusion, I think that educational work with teenagers related to lawful performance is very important. People who have an experience being in jail are likely to help very much and have powerful influence on young minds. Such lessons must be included in general program of education.

Choice 1 : Proper education.