Word count: 325
Choice count: 2
Section count: 2
Image count: 1
Error count: 13
Field Related Analysis
Education : 14 matches
(choice, classmate, classmates, reader, school, teacher, teachers)Dance : 7 matches
(back, face, front, introduction, out)Web development : 6 matches
(name, setting, style, window, write)Target Structure: (0 matches)
The Start Of A New friendship A new school year begin to start new teachers, new things to lean or even new classmate, I was setting right next to the window waiting for my other classmates and for the bell to ring. 25 minutes has passed and the bell already rang my classmates has already arrived, I know almost all of them except to this one girl wearing a pig tail with an unusual style, its obvious that she's a transferee because she isn't wearing our uniforms and her face looks so unfamiliar, She then stands up and goes to the front. "Please introduce yourself." The teacher says. "Hi, my name is Katelyn Cruz, I'm 18 years old, I also live near our school and I hope I cant get along with your guys." After her introduction she immediately goes back to her seat,I can already she the boys smirk especially Jayden that jerk always dates every single transferee in this school, its like his hobby, after a week he will get tired at them and then move on to another girl. Jayden then started seating right besides her, making her uncomfortable.
Choice 1 : You immediately started coughing harder, for the an attention, your teacher immedi notice your coughing, "What's wrong Ms Lopez?" She asked. I replied nothing Ms, I'm sorry." The teacher then finally notice what is happening to the Transferee "Mr Jayden what do you think you are doing go back to yours seat " Jayden sighed and looked at me rolling his eyes out, I smirked at him laughing at his own face for what he did and he pretty much look angry at me, after school she then thank me for what I did
Choice 2 : Section 3 (Help her)

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