The path to become a businessman.

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Word count: 840

Choice count: 20

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Education : 56 matches

(choice, college, diploma, grades, knowledge, learn, learned, management, motivation, school, university, vacation)

Business : 36 matches

(business, company, gain, management, money, offer, opportunity, pay)

Web development : 26 matches

(break, create, drop, join, path, position, true, write)

Target Structure: (10 matches)

foot in the door (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

put aside (2 matches)

retirement (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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The path to become a businessman.

After college.

I just finished college, and I have an important decision to make about my future.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Work for a little company to gain experience.

graduation

Go to university.

After I finished college, I decided to go to university to gain more knowledge and earn a better diploma to have more opportunity in my career.

Choice 1 : Be focus at 100% at school.

Choice 2 : Have a little job on the side.

university

Work for a little company to gain experience.

When I finished college, I got a job offer from a small company, and I decided to accept it to have a wage because I need some money.Il will also help me to have a foot in the door of what I want to do for the rest of my life.

Choice 1 : Work my way up.

Choice 2 : Gaining experience.

working

Be focus at 100% at school.

I want to finish school the fast as possible, so I will be studying a lot and let all the distraction to the side. I want to get straight A's.

Choice 1 : My life as a businessman.

studying

Have a little job on the side.

I need to work to have a little bit of money to pay for my books. It will be hard to work and study at the same time, but I have to. I will put aside the distractions and focus on the priorities. I will maybe have less time to study and have less good grades. I need good time management if I want to succeed.

Choice 1 : Go on vacation.

working and studying

Work my way up.

I will work as hard as I can, to work my way up in this company and one day be the boss. If I work overtime, put aside the distractions, I will be one of the best employees, and they will have no choice but to promote me and give me bigger role in the company, and one day I will be the one in charge. After all those years, should I go to a bigger company, or become the boss of the company I worked for since I started.

Choice 1 : Becoming the new boss

Choice 2 : Join a big company.

working my way up

Gaining experience.

I will work with this small company to learn more about the business and the ins-and-outs. When I am be ready and have enough knowledge, I will go and work for a bigger company or create my own.

Choice 1 : Join a big company.

Choice 2 : Create my own business.

going forward

My life as a businessman.

After all those years of studying, I got my university diploma, and I am ready to join the business world. I got some offers from very big company, but I also want to create my own business.

Choice 1 : Join a big company.

Choice 2 : Create my own business.

businessman

Join a big company.

I decided to join a big company to have a lot of money, and it will be easier and less stressful. I will work here, earn a good wage, and go to retirement when I am going to be old.

Write a choice here.

a big company

Create my own business.

With all the knowledge I learned over the year, I am ready to create my own company and fulfill my dream.

Write a choice here.

your company

Go on vacation.

After a few years, I got tired of this lifestyle, and I decided to go on vacation. I started to like being on vacation and not having the stress of working and studying, I didn't know if I had enough motivation to come back, so I had an important decision to make about my life.

Choice 1 : Give up.

Choice 2 : Go back to school.

vacation

Finish my journey at school.

It wasn't easy, but I got my diploma while I was working. I decided to take a break and go on vacation. After my break, I came back to fulfill my dream.

Choice 1 : Join a big company.

Choice 2 : Create my own business.

diploma

Arrived at the top.

After all those years of working for this company and working my way up, the boss decided to retire and there was a vacant position, and he chose me to be his successor. A dream coming true.

Write a choice here.

Boss

Give up.

I decided to drop everything and not go back to school or work anymore. I had a lack of motivation, so I will enjoy the rest of my life and live day to day without stress. Life is short, so we have to enjoy it.

Write a choice here.

enjoying my vacation

Go back to school.

I can give up after all the effort I did. I have to make my family and myself proud, so will go back to school, get my diploma, and live my dream.

Choice 1 : Join a big company.

Choice 2 : Create my own business.

back to school