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(business, management, opportunity, salary)Web development : 12 matches
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dead-end job (1 match)
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Finally high schools is over! Throughout the year, I've always been a straight A student. I did all my homework and studied very hard and because of that, I was able to get a full scholarship from one the best college in Canada. The only problem is the fact that the college is located in Toronto and I live in Montreal. My parents are not very happy with the idea of me being away from home at my early age, they want me to go to the local college. I don't know what to do.
Choice 1 : Go to the college in Toronto
Choice 2 : Go to your local college
Since I do not want my parents to be sad and worry, I choose to go to my local college. It is still a good school but it is not my dream school. Unfortunately, the program that I wanted to apply to doesn't exist in this college. I wanted to study in diagnostic imaging program to, eventually becoming a radiologist but it is not possible anymore. so I have to choose something else.
Choice 1 : Choose randomly a program
Choice 2 : Let your parents choose your program
I didn't know which program to choose, so I ended up in the law program. I hate it so much, I find this program so boring. It's only the first semester and I'm already thinking about dropping out.
Choice 1 : Drop out of college
My parents are every angry but mostly disappointed in me. They kick me out of the house. I use to be such a great student with good grades and dreams. Now, I'm just a college drop with only a high school diploma . Now all I can do is find a dead-end job until I can get back on my feet.
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Since I didn't know what to do, i let my parents chose my college program. They told me to apply to a business management program, that way , I will be able to take on the family business à when my parents retire. After a whole semester in this program, I realize how much I hate it and I'm thinking of dropping out, but i do not want to disappoint my parents.
Choice 1 : Drop out of college
Choice 2 : Graduate in the business program
I decide to continue in the business to make my family proud. After six long semesters, I finally graduated. I will be starting my internship in my family business. Unfortunately, it's not the life I dreamed of, but I am still happy.
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My parents are not happy with my decision, but I'm going to Toronto to study at my dream school. I worked and study countless hours to win this scholarship, so I will not let this opportunity slip out my hands. I want to become a radiologist, and I will make sure it happens.
Choice 1 : Study in Diagnostic Imaging program
i made it in my dream program. From now, I will put everything I have to succeed and become the best radiologist in the country. I am also thinking about opening my own clinic and starting a business, but I don't have the knowledge to manage a business. Maybe I should take business management classes as well ,but it will ad more work to my, already, busy schedule.
Choice 1 : Graduate in the diagnostic imaging program.
Choice 2 : Graduate in the diagnostic imaging program with the extra business classes.
I finally graduate and i made a tons of friends. The three years in college went by so quickly since I had so much. Now I can start my internship in a great hospital, have a great salary while Continuing my studies to become a radiologist in university. I miss my parents very much, but i know that they are very proud of me.
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Even if I had more work to do, those Business classes were very helpful. I graduated after 3 long, but fun years. I missed my parents very much, but I know that they are proud of me. Now, I'm starting my own business. At first, it was very hard, and I made some mistakes, but with the help of the one I love, my clinic became one of the most prestigious in the country.
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