A day to save lives

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Roxane Beaulieu

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Word count: 1406

Choice count: 41

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Paramedics : 58 matches

(911, accident, ambulance, arm, care, childbirth, cold, crash, dispatcher, dispatchers, emergency, healthcare, heart, heart attack, injured, medical, nursing, paramedic, paramedic uniform, partner, patient, personnel, report, treatment, unconscious, uniform, vehicles)

Education : 45 matches

(cat, choice, don, first, report)

Food and catering : 28 matches

(bar, black, coffee, curtain, lunch, scene, shop)

Target Structure: (1 matches)

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A day to save lives

Who am I?

I wake up, and get out of the bed. I take the time to make the bed, and I slowly open the curtains. I am walking around my bed. I take my clothes, and I dress myself. At this moment, I see myself in the big mirror, in the corner of my room. I see...

Choice 1 : A tall male paramedic.

Choice 2 : A strong female paramedic.

Choice 3 : A cat.

My bedroom window

A tall male paramedic.

I see a tall male with a big brown beard not yet trimmed. I have brown eyes and hair. I am wearing my paramedic uniform. I have been working has a paramedic for almost 10 years. Today, I have a big day ahead. Where do I start?

Choice 1 : I want to go to the gym.

Choice 2 : I want to go to work.

A tall male paramedic

A strong female paramedic.

I see a strong woman with long brown hair. I have blue pierce eyes. I am wearing my paramedic uniform. I have been working has a paramedic for almost 1 year. I graduated a year ago, and I love what I do. Today, I have a big day ahead. Where do I start?

Choice 1 : I want to go get a coffee.

Choice 2 : I want to go to work.

A female paramedic

I want to go to the gym.

Even though I already put on my uniform, I change myself in my gym clothes. I have time to go before work. I pack all of my stuff really quick, and I go in my car. I start my car, and get in the direction of the gym. After approximately ten minutes, I am already at the gym. I take my stuff, and I enter the building. I don't know if I want to do legs or arms today.

Choice 1 : I will do arms.

Choice 2 : I will do legs.

The gym

I want to go get a coffee.

I have time to go before work to go get a coffee. I pack all of my stuff really quick, and I go in my car. I start my car, and get in the direction of the coffee shop. After approximately ten minutes, I am already infant of the building. I turn off my car, and I enter the building. I don't know at I want to get today.

Choice 1 : I will take an iced latte.

Choice 2 : I will take a black hot coffee.

A coffee

I want to go to work.

I am a paramedic. As a paramedic, I am the first medical professional on the scene of an accident or sudden illness. I can give immediate care for heart attack victims, car crash victims, gunshot victims, medical illness, and much more. I can even assist a childbirth. I have the obligation to take safely the sick or the injured to healthcare facilities in my equipped emergency vehicles. At medical center, I transfer the patient to nursing personnel and report my observations and treatment. This morning, I pack all of my stuff for the day, and a little lunch. I enter in my car and I go in the direction of the barracks. After approximately ten minute, I am at work, ready to go in my ambulance. I look if a have all the supplies that I need for the day. I am ready to go. Already, my partner and I have a call. The dispatchers tell us that it is for a male, laying on the ground. We turn on the lights as well as the sirens, and we go to the scene of the accident.

Choice 1 : We are going to a coffee shop.

Choice 2 : We are going to the gym.

Choice 3 : We say to the dispatcher that we don't want this case.

An ambulance

I will do arms.

I decided to go ahead, and do an arm's day. I go in the back of the gym, and I start my workout. I take the weigh and do my repetition. There is not a lot of people in the gym today. I think I will do a sixty-minute workout. After a couple of minute, I see someone near me falling on the ground. What do I do?

Choice 1 : I call the 911.

Choice 2 : I run to him to help him.

Choice 3 : I continue my workout.

A arm

I will do legs.

I decided to go ahead, and do a leg day. I go to the squat rack in the back of the gym, and I start my workout. I take the weigh that I need and install it on the bar. I start doing my repetition. There is not a lot of people in the gym today. I think I will do a sixty-minute workout. After a couple of minute, I see someone near me falling on the ground. What do I do?

Choice 1 : I call the 911.

Choice 2 : I run to him to help him.

Choice 3 : I continue my workout.

A leg

I call the 911.

I take my cellphone, and call 911. After that...

Choice 1 : I run to him to help him.

Calling 911

I run to him to help him.

I arrived at the victim.

Choice 1 : The victim is conscious.

Choice 2 : The victim is unconscious.

Running

I will take an iced latte.

I decide to get an iced latte. It is a beautiful day, a little bit cold, but it smells like summer. The perfect drink for today. After a couple of minutes waiting for my coffee, I see someone near me falling on the ground. What do I do?

Choice 1 : I run to him to help him.

Choice 2 : I call the 911.

Choice 3 : I take my coffee and go.

Ice

I will take a black hot coffee.

I decide to get a black hot coffee. It is a beautiful day, a little cold. The perfect drink for today. After a couple of minutes waiting for my coffee, I see someone near me falling on the ground. What do I do?

Choice 1 : I run to him to help him.

Choice 2 : I call the 911.

Choice 3 : I take my coffee and go

Hot

We are going to a coffee shop.

We are in the direction of a coffee shop. We have to hurry! After a little bit less than ten minutes, we arrive at the victim.

Choice 1 : The victim is conscious.

Choice 2 : The victim is unconscious.

A coffee shop

We are going to the gym.

We are in the direction of a gym. We have to hurry! After a little bit less than ten minutes, we arrive at the victim.

Choice 1 : The victim is conscious.

Choice 2 : The victim is unconscious.

A gym

I take my coffee and go.

No! I can not do that! I am a paramedic. I have to help this man!

Choice 1 : I call the 911.

Choice 2 : I run to him to help him.

No

I continue my workout.

No! I can not do that! I am a paramedic. I have to help this man!

Choice 1 : I call the 911.

Choice 2 : I run to him to help him.

No

We say to the dispatcher that we don't want this case.

No! We can not do that. We are paramedic, and we have the obligation to help everyone in need. We have to go to help this man.

Choice 1 : We are going to a coffee shop.

Choice 2 : We are going to the gym.

No

A cat.

I can not be a cat! I make my bed, open the curtain and dressed myself! It would be nice to be a furry little cat who sleeps all day. However, I have to be a human today.

Write a choice here.

A cat

The victim is conscious.

I take care of the victim and make sure that he is good.

Choice 1 : At the end of the day.

The victim

The victim is unconscious.

I take care of the victim and make sure that he is good.

Choice 1 : At the end of the day.

The victim

At the end of the day.

At the end of the day, I was very proud of myself to help this man. My job is to help people no matter the circumstance.

Write a choice here.

A alarm clock