You decide how my life will end, maybe good or maybe bad.

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Jacob Legault

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Word count: 1288

Choice count: 31

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 36

Field Related Analysis

Education : 49 matches

(choice, classes, college, don, field, head, intervention, learn, research, reward, teachers, training, university)

Nursing : 26 matches

(addiction, artery, b.d., brain, cancer, consumption, dietetics, effects, environment, exposure, fentanyl, frame, headache, heart, heart attack, heroin, hospital, insult, lead)

Food and catering : 26 matches

(bar, consumption, cook, fat, food, fresh, happy, haven, onions, potatoes, restaurant, snack)

Target Structure: (11 matches)

foot in the door (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

hinders (1 match)

internship (3 matches)

lack of (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

pulled off (1 match)

straight a's (1 match)

undermines (1 match)

withholding (1 match)

volunteers (1 match)

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You decide how my life will end, maybe good or maybe bad.

Fresh start.

I am currently in my last year in dietetics at Montmorency College. I need to decide if I want to do a field-related internship or if I want to go to a university in psychology. After a lot of research, two choices interest me. Either go to UQAM or do an internship at "Plaisir gastronomique". Age : 19.

Choice 1 : Go to UQAM.

Choice 2 : Go to plaisir gastronomique.

Choice 3 : Decide to take a time machine to talk to my future self and ask him what is the best choice between the two.

Collège montmorency

Go to UQAM.

I am currently in my last year in psychology at UQAM University. During my four years, I've pulled off straight A's in every subject. Now, I must decide in which field I will specialize. With my incredible results, teachers advise me either to study neuropsychology, mental illness, or addictology. Age : 23.

Choice 1 : Decides to study in the branch of mental illness.

Choice 2 : Decides to study in the branch of neuropsychology.

Choice 3 : Decides to study in the branch of addictology.

UQAM

Go to "plaisir gastronomique".

I am currently on my last week of the internship at "Plaisir Gastronomique". I received on-the-job training, and I quickly learn the ropes. Now, I need to choose if I want to continue here, or if I take this experience as a foot in the door to help me get another better job. Age: 19.

Choice 1 : stay at plaisir gastronomique.

Choice 2 : find an other job.

plaisir gastronomique

tell him my way of thinking.

After an argument with the cook, I Insult him by telling him he's stupid. The END: dies after 13 stab wounds from the cook who has anger issues. Age: 19.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

knife

Leave the restaurant forever.

After an argument with the cook, I decide to leave the restaurant forever. I grab my things and head for the exit. The END: Dies after falling on his head because he hadn't seen the puddle of oil in front of the door that leads outside. Age: 19.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

slip

kill the cook.

After an argument with the cook, I decided to grab a knife and stabbed him in the back while he was busy chopping onions. The END: Everyone in the restaurant and the village are happy because they all hated him. As a reward, he is given immortality but in exchange, he can no longer hear and speak.

Choice 1 : WIN.

stab

stay at plaisir gastronomique.

I have been working at "Plaisir gastronomique" for 6 months. The experience is really pleasant. I like the work. I think what I like is the free company food when you work. Let's say I've gained a little weight since I arrived. The END: Dies after a heart attack due to an artery clogged with fat. Weight: 600 lbs Age: 20 years old.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

plaisir gastronomique

find an other better job.

I am currently looking for a job. It's been a month, and I haven't found anything. There is only the "transfrite" factory that seems interested and there is also my aunt that offers me to work at her small snack bar "la dame de coeur", but the two jobs look boring. I'm really bad financially, so I choose... Age : 19.

Choice 1 : go to transfrite.

Choice 2 : go to dame de coeur.

find a job

go to transfrite.

Today it has been 21 years and 38 days that I have been working at the factory. The work is so boring. I've been sorting potatoes every day for 21 years. I have zero fulfillment, a lack of happiness, and life is no longer worth living. The END : Died by suicide. Age : 40.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

transfrite

go to dame de coeur.

The work environment is bad. One cook always undermines other employees in their back. I am annoyed by him because he hinders my workplace. After all, he is a very messy cook, and he is withholding the job because he wanted to do it all by himself. I have 3 choices... kill the cook, leave the restaurant forever or tell him my way of thinking. Age : 19.

Choice 1 : kill the cook.

Choice 2 : Leave the restaurant forever.

Choice 3 : tell him my way of thinking.

dame de coeur

Decides to study in the branch of mental illness.

I have been studying mental illness disorders for 3 years. The university will soon end, and I have to decide what I want to do as a future profession. I have the choice between going to work in a psychiatric hospital to help patients improve their condition or I can work in a research laboratory to analyze with biochemical tests how mental illnesses work. Age: 27.

Choice 1 : Work in a research laboratory.

Choice 2 : Work in a psychiatric hospital.

mental illness

Decides to study in the branch of neuropsychology.

During one of my classes the MRI machine seems broken, I look inside to examine the problem, and then I feel a big headache The END: died 1 month later of brain cancer because of too strong exposure to X-rays which had been emitted by the broken MRI. Age: 23.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

IRM

Work in a research laboratory.

I am currently researching the causes that can lead to psychopathy. I had to make a comparison between a psychopathic brain and a normal brain, so I took my brain and one of the volunteers who had been diagnosed as a psychopath. I just find out that we have the same brain. The END: Dies of a panic attack after realizing he's been a psychopath all this time. Age: 31.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

psychopath

Work in a psychiatric hospital.

Today, one of my patients, Yuri, who has schizophrenia is very agitated and doesn't seem to want to cooperate with my intervention. The END: dies following strangulation because of Yuri who had not taken his medication for 1 week and who was in a psychotic episode Age: 29.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

Yuri

Decides to study in the branch of addictology.

I've been researching heroin addiction for 1 month, and I don't understand all the psychology behind the consumption. I can either try heroin to better understand the effects or talk to people who are addicted. Age: 24.

Choice 1 : Try heroine to understand what are the affects.

Choice 2 : Talk to people who are addicted.

addiction

Try heroine to understand what are the affects.

The END: dies of a fentanyl overdose Age: 24.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

heroine

talk to people who are addicted.

I've been analyzing Steve for 4 months. He helps me a lot to advance my research with his testimonies. Unfortunately, in exchange for his services I have to supply him with heroin. The END: Dies after being killed by a street gang to whom he owed $5,000 in debt. Age: 24.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

Steve

LOSE.

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Choice 1 : Fresh start.

GAME OVER

WIN.

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Choice 1 : Fresh start.

YOU WIN

Decide to take a time machine to talk to my future self and ask him what is the best choice between the two.

I travel 50 years into the future, and find my future self, however, I try to explain the situation to him, but he can't hear me or talk to me. I decide that it is useless, and I return to the past.

Choice 1 : The Past.

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The Past.

The machine does not send me back at the right time frame, and I find myself alone on an uninhabited planet. The END: dies after a few days.

Choice 1 : LOSE.

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