A young entrepreneur story.

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Word count: 1377

Choice count: 26

Section count: 21

Image count: 18

Error count: 3

Field Related Analysis

Education : 102 matches

(choice, class, classmates, college, don, down, field, first, goal, grades, knowledge, management, project, school, student, students, teacher)

Business : 70 matches

(bankrupt, business, business plan, company, contract, customer, customers, entrepreneur, entrepreneurs, financial, loan, making money, management, meeting, money, owner, partner, secretary, service, team)

Web development : 40 matches

(build, class, close, field, location, name, service, show, stop, write)

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A young entrepreneur story.

A young entrepreneur trying to find is way.

A young entrepreneur name Stanley at Ahuntsic College is trying to concentrate on his dream of being an entrepreneur in the sport business, but a lot of choice has to made by our protagonist. He wanted to be a good student in his new program because of the seriousness of his classmates in other words, he wanted to be accepted by the student in his class. To do this the young man believed he will have to make sacrifice. The young man is also a superstar on the football field.

Choice 1 : Get involved in his new Business class.

Choice 2 : Continue playing football for the college.

football field

Get involved in his new Business class.

By getting involved in the Business class at Ahuntsic College the young man begin to find a real passion about business management. He was so focused that he was starting to get real good grades with ease, and his classmates wanted him to be there at every studying meeting, because of his energy and his knowledge.

Choice 1 : Stanley chooses to be invested with his classmates.

Choice 2 : Focusing on his grades and himself.

Studying groups

Continue playing football for the Ahuntsic College.

Our young entrepreneur decide to start going to his football practice, instead of going to the studying meeting with his classmates.For Stanley, football was his passion and also his chance of getting out of town with the chance of getting into the pros. One day the rising star of Ahuntsic College was hit so hard in practice that he broke his leg, and now he needs a surgery, but it could be fatal in both ways.

Choice 1 : The young man decides to get surgery to save his leg.

Choice 2 : Decide to not do the surgery.

High school Football

Stanley chooses to be invested with his classmates.

His choices of getting closer with his classmates will be affected for ever, because the protagonist will make a new friend name Jacob. Jacob and the protagonist became really close because both of them love sports and wanted to do business in this area. That relationship developed so quick that on the next team project Jacob asked the young man if he wanted to be with him.

Choice 1 : Be on a team with Jacob.

Choice 2 : Focus on himself.

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Focus on himself.

The young man decides that he will do the project on his own, but the teacher refuses and put him in a team with Jacob which he is not happy about it, because he believes that him and Jacob will not take the projects seriously.

Choice 1 : Be on a team with Jacob.

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Decide to not do the surgery.

Stanley choice's of not getting a surgery was fatal, due to an infection that he's leg contracted, and that infection created a complication on his entire body and Stanley died before accomplishing his dream of being an entrepreneur. END.

Choice 1 : A young entrepreneur trying to find is way.

Focusing on his grades and himself.

He decides to focus on his grades, and himself because he fears that he will be distracted by others, the protagonist start to build he's first ever business. A sport agency that can helped student athlete to succeed in the field, and also succeed at school. Jacob a student in the same program as the protagonist saw a paper on his desk with the business plan on it.

Choice 1 : Make Jacob his new business partner.

Choice 2 : Shut down Jacob.

focusing on his gradesand himself

Make Jacob his new business partner.

Our hero didn't need a partner for this business idea, but he did not know that Jacob was already into making a sport agency. "So" they mixed their idea and there were able to make a realistic plan to build a business.

Choice 1 : Choose a business name.

Choice 2 : Choose a business name.

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Be on a team with Jacob.

The protagonist and Jacob decide to make a project about his idea of a sport agency that will help young student in the same situation as the protagonist. Their project is so good that they get the highest grades of the class. Jacob's dad was a business owner, and saw the project his son and our protagonist made, and told them that he could help them to start the business.

Choice 1 : Jacob's dad help the two young men start there business.

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Decides to get surgery to save his leg.

The surgery went well for the young man but, he was sad that he could not play football anymore. The protagonist had to stay at the hospital to recover from his injury, which makes him mad. In the hospital, he decides to stop crying and starts working on his real passion business management, and start to think about his first real business. A sport agency that will help student athlete that struggling with their grades. At the same time, a school project was starting, the goal of this project is to do a simulation of a business. The teacher put our protagonist with a classmates name Jacob.

Choice 1 : Be on a team with Jacob.

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On going surgery

Jacob's dad help the two young men start there business.

The pair stopped going to school because they believed that their business will make them rich. With the help of Jacob's dad the pair put together a business plan that they will show to the bank to receive a loan.

Choice 1 : Choose a business name.

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Shut down Jacob.

Stanley the protagonist decides to shut down Jacob because he does want his idea stolen. Jacob tells him that his dad is a businessman and can help him.

Choice 1 : Jacob's dad help the two young men start there business.

Choice 2 : Convince Jacob that they don't need his father.

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Refuse Jacob help.

Stanley decides to refuse the help. He realizes the potential of his business, and he stopped going to school to focus on making money.

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Convince Jacob that they don't need his father.

Jacob tells him he's right and the two young men start working on their business without the help of Jacob's dad.

Choice 1 : Choose a business name.

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Choose a business name.

The duo has difficulty choosing a name, but since Stanley is the real owner the choice is up to him.

Choice 1 : Student sports.

Choice 2 : Student champions.

business meeting between two people

Student sports.

The name does not take effect, and they go bankrupt 2 years later. END.

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Student champions.

The name caused a stir and the bank agreed to provide them with a loan so that he could start as soon as possible. It's making a lot of noise with the students of Ahuntsic College, several student athletes are starting to ask for appointments but our duo is not ready, yet they still need other things.

Choice 1 : Pick a business location.

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Pick a business location.

Stanley and Jacob rent a room in the downtown of the city to be able to welcome athletes during appointments. They start to meet student athletes, but it turns out that they are not enough to manage all there customers, so they need to make financial choice.

Choice 1 : Hire a secretary and two employees for customer service.

Choice 2 : Continue to manage the company has two employees.

Hire a secretary and two employees for customer service.

Thanks to the secretary and the two recently hired sports champions becomes the number one company for student athletes in the city.

Choice 1 : End.

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Continue to manage the company has two employees.

They continue to manage the company together, but because of that they make a lot of mistakes due to the lack of employees and lose the majority of their contract and go bankrupt. END.

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End.

The duo becomes two of the richest entrepreneurs in the city.

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