My future.

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Lauréanne Baraké

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Education : 111 matches

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Business : 36 matches

(administration, business, company, firm, firms, manager, marketing, meeting, money, opportunity, paid, president, salary, upgrade)

Archaeology : 32 matches

(agency, anne, evaluation, here, model, period, section, study)

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My future.

Start at the beginning.

Hi, my name is Lauréanne Baraké. I'm a Canadian studying in the realty appraisal program at Montmorency College. In my free time, I like modelling. My plans for the future are to get my DEC diploma, get my B.A and my master in realty appraisal at UdeM to eventually become a Realty Appraiser, and maybe continue practicing my modelling so, in the future, I can hopefully do both, modelling and evaluation.

Choice 1 : Continue my studies.

Choice 2 : Searching for a job.

Montmorency College

Continue my studies.

After graduating from Montmorency College, I have been accepted into the University of Montreal for a Bachelor of administration. I worked really hard to higher my grades and finally, my efforts paid off. Now that my college years are behind me, it's the start of something new. During this period, I had so many changes in my life and I had to adapt to the changes.

Choice 1 : Working hard to get high grades.

Choice 2 : My love story.

University of Montreal

Searching for a job.

After getting my DEC diploma, I decided not to go to university and to search for a job. The choice was hard, but I was tired of school and wanted to make some money.

Choice 1 : The struggle of finding a job.

Choice 2 : Omega Evaluation firm.

Realty appraisal

Working hard to get high grades.

I always dreamed to get to university and consider myself an adult student. I finally had the opportunity to prove to my family that I'm able to succeed. That's why I put all my focus on studying in order to get high grades.

Choice 1 : Became a Realty Appraiser.

Choice 2 : Failed my finals.

Great A's

My own love story.

As soon as I entered the University of Montreal, I got to know a boy in one of my Marketing classes. This guy was really cute and attractive. I fell in love with this man. It was at this moment, that I knew my grades will downgrade. I was meeting him every single day. I had no more time to study.

Choice 1 : Heartbreak.

Choice 2 : Got married.

Love

The struggle of finding a job.

I thought that after working hard at school and getting my diploma, life's gonna be easy. I was really wrong. It was impossible for me to find a good job with a good salary. Nobody wanted to hire me.

Choice 1 : Found a boring job.

Choice 2 : Becoming a model.

Struggle

Omega Evaluation firm.

Directly after getting my diploma, it was really easy for me to find a job. I applied to one of the best architecture firms in Quebec, "Omega Evaluation firm". I did very well in my interview and got hired by that company.

Choice 1 : Being always late at work.

Choice 2 : Worked really hard to upgrade in Omega evaluation firm.

Omega evaluation

Became a Realty Appraiser.

After years of struggling, hard-working, sacrifices, and pain, I finally passed my final exam and having my master degree in Realty Appraisal. It really wasn't easy, but it was worth it. My dream became true, I can finally start a new life.

Choice 1 : Started my realty appraisal career in Toronto.

Choice 2 : Travelled to Norway and started working in evaluation there.

Realty Appraiser

Failed my finals.

Every semester the difficulty of the classes became really high. My teachers were really strict and had high expectations. I had so many struggles to catch on the lessons. I tried to study as much as I could but ended up failing my final exams.

Choice 1 : Became a model.

Choice 2 : Restarted my semester and got my realty appraisal degree.

Failed

Heartbreak.

I felt in love with this guy and lived beautiful memories with him. Everything went well, until one day, he cheated on me. My heart felt apart. You don't need a pill or a gun, if you ever want to die, fall in love, you'll get killed...

Choice 1 : Went into depression.

Choice 2 : Moved on and became stronger than ever.

Heartbreak

Got married.

Yes, I finally found the love of my life. That guy made me feel special. After 2 years of a wonderful relationship, we decided to get married.

Choice 1 : Building my family.

Choice 2 : My divorce.

Got married

Found a boring job.

After 6 months, a finally found a job in evaluation. To be honest, the job was really boring, but I had no other choice. I was hopeless that I was satisfied with what I had.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Boring job

Becoming a model.

Since I was struggling to find a job in evaluation, I decided to change my career and to build my own modelling business. It was really not easy, but being my own boss is really satisfying.

Choice 1 : Had an opportunity to open my own agency.

Choice 2 : Travelled to Milan and found a modelling job.

Model

Being always late for work.

After being hired by the Omega evaluation firm, I was late for my job every morning. I had a hard time getting up since I had no motivation to go to work.

Choice 1 : Got fired.

Choice 2 : The change of the mindset.

Late at work

Worked really hard to upgrade in Omega evaluation firm.

After getting hired by the Omega evaluation firm, I want to upgrade to the firm. That's why I worked really hard every single day. I was doing it for my personal satisfaction, not for money.

Choice 1 : Became a manager.

Choice 2 : Opened my own evaluation firm.

Working hard

Became a manager.

Following my efforts I have been doing in the company, the president decided to put me as a manager in my department. I always dreamed to be a boss.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Became manager

Opened my own evaluation firm.

I spent 6 years in that company, where I gained a lot of experience. That's why I decided to invest and build my own company of evaluation. It was a big and risky step in my life, but definitely worth it.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Own boss

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Got fired.

Because of my several early morning delays and my lack of motivation, my boss decided to fire me from the company. All of my efforts have been for nothing.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

You are fired

The change of the mindset.

After being late to work every single day, I didn't want to be fired. That's why I decided to get my life together and change my mindset. I tried to get motivation from my colleagues.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

New mindset

Went into depression.

After my breakout with this man, I directly went into a dark period of depression. My heart was broken, I didn't find any way to get up.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Depression

Moved on and became stronger than ever.

After that huge heartbreak, it was really difficult for me to get up. I needed my family and friends to help me get out of this story. I even consulted a psychologist. It took me 6 months to get over it, but now I'm stronger than ever.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Stronger than ever

Building my family.

After meeting this guy, and getting married, we decided to have kids. I got pregnant with a girl. I finally became a mother.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Building a family

My divorce.

After getting married to this man, we had so many problems. My feelings for him started to decrease. We decided to divorce and continue our life apart.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Divorce

Became a model.

After I failed my exam last month, I decided to quit my realty appraisal program and become a model.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Became a model

Restarted my semester and got my realty appraisal degree.

After failing my exam, I decided to work even harder than ever to be able to pass. Nothing worth doing is ever easy. I needed to fail once in order to succeed. I finally studied well and got my master degree.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Restarted my semester

Started my realty appraisal career in Toronto.

After getting my realty appraisal master degree, I decided to start my career in Toronto. Toronto is a place I love since I was a kid. I found a job in a big company, with a nice salary. I was living my best life.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Being an Realty Appraiser

Travelled to Norway and started working in evaluation there.

Right after I got my realty appraisal master degree, I took a one-year break. I really needed some time to reset my batteries. Then, I decided to travel to Norway. I found a job and loved the Scandinavia lifestyle.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Started working in evaluation

Had an opportunity to open my own agency.

After years of being a professional model, I finally decided to open a modelling studio in downtown of Montreal.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

My own agency

Travelled to Milan and found a modelling job.

For a model, in order to get great shots, it is important to travel and discover new things. That's why I decided to travel to Europe and meet other great models.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Modelling